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  1. BoML

    Ghost in the City: Cyberpunk Gamer SI

    Okay, the party is done, Motoko got to do some stuff to de-stress...only to get *more* stress when the music side decides to be an entitled moron and fuck around with "her" songs.
  2. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Unless the bolded is part of some obscure British slang, it should be "letting". Well...there is *one* person who is absolutely LOVING the fact that he's in the Phantom Zone and able to *think*. I believe his name is...Nam-Ek...or something similar, I honestly forget what his actual name was.
  3. BoML

    Ghost in the City: Cyberpunk Gamer SI

    Well, that was an interesting bit, though I feel Hayato was the one who was more amped up about the party and the sword than Motoko was. Yeesh, Wakako, way to imply how costly that sword was. Makes me curious how long it would take for Motoko to pay it up in full. And...yeah, I'm not gonna...
  4. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Bolded part is complicated, because it could either be "dealings" or "dealt". Personally, I would go with dealings, because Paul *has* dealt with Amalak on multiple occasions. Bolded should be "punish". And yeah, Silver Age Kara is very nice girl...but she's *definitely* not soft. Bolded...
  5. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Not sure if this is correct. I mean, the bolded should be "powdered", considering how it was used in the scenes. As a puff of powder.
  6. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    This bit reads weird to me. The bolded part should be "They", but if I'm wrong, you can ignore me.
  7. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    When I read this, I legit had a moment where I had to put my face into my palms from the sheer disbelief. I knew she was a bit...simple...but to do *this*. Yes, found the pick to illustrate the point.
  8. BoML

    Ghost in the City: Cyberpunk Gamer SI

    Motoko, my girl. Even if you wouldn't understand it fully, you really should have read the thing. ...dude, you really don't know you're talking to a actual professional merc. You don't tell them to downgrade their gear, ever. And one extra silver lining to this absurd deal Motoko ended up...
  9. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    No. No, Mr Lee, it was not a joke at all. I can see Paul having two reactions here. One, he looks completely unbothered in the most British way possible and say that while looking on. Two, he'd have the mildest frown and roll his eyes a bit, with a hint of sarcasm audible in his voice.
  10. BoML

    Ghost in the City: Cyberpunk Gamer SI

    This was a great chapter...but I think Hiromi may have decided to go down a path that's going to blow up in her and Motoko's face. Motoko started the whole music thing to relieve stress and maybe keep herself in check. You know, keep her connected to her own humanity a bit. What's happening...
  11. BoML

    Ghost in the City: Cyberpunk Gamer SI

    Motoko being Motoko is always a treat to read, but I'm not gonna lie, I'm way more interested what's going to happen with Militech raid and the potential consequences of it.
  12. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Bolded part should be "do".
  13. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    I'm actually surprised that she *didn't* recognize him from that time they met face to face in J'aarkn's deportation party, but OL was pretending to just be a literal "Man in Black" at the time. If I remember right, he was also pretending to go through a bad breakup and hoping to get some advice...
  14. BoML

    Ghost in the City: Cyberpunk Gamer SI

    Sorry, Motoko, but this is problem of your own making. You now either need to find a way for your chooms to "git good" by themselves, or you need to apply some "tough love" to the situation.
  15. BoML

    With This Ring (Young Justice SI) (Thread Fourteen)

    Bolded should be "Barring".
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