I think the first chapter being shorter would be huge, and if you'd like I'd be happy beta-ing for this (though you're already a very competent writer who probably doesn't need the help).
I think editing your chapters to ask for comments and feedback at the end would be good.
Please do not lewd chibi! Darkness
I think editing your chapters to ask for comments and feedback at the end would be good.
Please do not lewd chibi! Darkness
I've thought about posting on Ao3, but I'm wondering if I should edit the first two chapters into one shorter chapter first. People might be bouncing off of another ROB build chapter.