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    Still around, just busy with other things. Well, that and trying to trim some of the fat out of...

    Still around, just busy with other things. Well, that and trying to trim some of the fat out of the existing draft of the story to get things moving faster.
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)
    Threadmarks: Section 5.9 - Therapy

    5.9 Therapy 5.9.1 Residual heat After his bath the previous evening, Harry had tried to clear his head with some newly necessary correspondence. It was just a couple of little things: one letter to Gringotts arranging a meeting with someone who could tell him what to expect when it came to...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    The trick I'd imagine you run into with most of these is that you need to really go right to the edge of lethal for this to be guaranteed to work, and doing that reliably means a slow process which is easy to control and unlikely to overshoot. Maybe you could build that into a spell, potion, or...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    Jancactus: Thanks. Much appreciated. I will point out that scrying is well understood and used here, but you need something to scry against (eg. something to compare the information scrying is bringing in against to see if it's what you're looking for). Thus you need to have something...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)
    Threadmarks: Section 5.8 - Reunion

    5.8 Reunion 5.8.1 Detrimental familiarity He had known as soon as Mr. Potter had winged away that it was a fool’s errand to try to chase him. Tracking a pigeon in flight was hard enough, much less capturing it, and that was especially true for one with that degree of strength and...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    Yes, constructive criticism is quite welcome. Harry is intended to come across as young and a bit scatterbrained (in large part a function of youth), energetic with a bubbly personality, confident to an extreme degree in most situations (because dragon), and currently stuck just on the verge...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    You'll find out about Dumbledore at the beginning of the next section The pigeon form is from way back in Chapter 1. As for the Great Dragon discussion: As Jarow mentioned, I am treating Great Dragons as a subset of Shadowrun dragons who have an indeterminate growth habit rather than...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    They will be quite interested. Harry is actively transfiguring himself, which means he transforms with all the detail he remembers to include, down to various material properties and such. It also means that he can lose control of his transformation, reverting back to his natural form if his...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    Thanks, edits made. This has been through so many rounds of editing, I expect there are quite a few of those sorts of oversights and kludges.
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)
    Threadmarks: Section 5.7 - Returns

    5.7 Returns 5.7.1 News radio “…aaand welcome back, Seattle! It’s the top of the hour here on the west coast, which brings us to our mid-morning brief! First in sports: the Mariners won last night five to three in Minnesota, bringing the series to two to one…” In an almost uncomfortably...
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    Glad you've liked it so far! Doing fine on my end, just been very busy. FYI: 5.7 is currently...

    Glad you've liked it so far! Doing fine on my end, just been very busy. FYI: 5.7 is currently sitting at 16.5k words and counting. Trying to get Harry back to Britain at the moment, but I'm beginning to think I might have to push it to 5.8
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    Corrections taken without offence. Edits made. As it turned out, it was a pretty simple change. Edits made. Thanks for the advice, I've tried to rework that segment, and sorry about the delay in responding, busy week at work. That link is very helpful, puts a lot of things together in one...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    4.7.2 Wrong Aurora. It's a Lockheed CP-140 Aurora out of CFB Comox. Technically, it's an anti-submarine/marine recon craft, but it's the fastest plane on the Comox roster (at least as far as I could tell from my minimal research), so I figured it'd be the one sent to get eyes on something like...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)
    Threadmarks: Section 5.6 - Espionage and escalation

    5.6 Espionage and escalation 5.6.1 In a van, down by the river The peaks of the Coastal range towered high above the densely forested Skeena River valley, through which ran one stretch of the Trans-Canadian Highway. It was a land that was in some ways very similar to the Highlands around...
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    Enter the Dragon (Harry Potter/Shadowrun)

    Just as a note, Harry has killed intentionally at least once already. Voldemort/former-Quirrel was the first, even if it didn't stick in the end, and arguably Charlotte the basilisk was the second (she was smart enough to talk, even if she was still pretty stupid). Rightly or wrongly, he's not...
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