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From the hole in the chest, that is sort of hard to see if you don't zoom in a bit and it looks like just more black fur instead of a proper hole, this image is from before Idir started absorbing the journal and healing the hole in their chest with it.
Looks like some word rearranging got forgotten and you have a stray "my" left over.
Is the double "if others know the thread breaks" intentional?
A lot of the conversation scene was somewhat painful to read because it's so obvious to me what's going on and why things are the way they are and...
Hopefully Golden Paws will give us Gwen some actual answers and not just Cryptic bullshit (tm) like a lot of deities like to do.
Thanks for the chapter.
Thanks for, all, of the chapters. Feel behind a bit but caught up again. Probably going to fall behind again.
... around and around and around and around and around... .
Erm.
Missing space.
She smokes with asthma. Does she want to die?
Ah, Cap being the golden retriever that he is and bring light to dark places. Never change Cap, never change.
Thanks for the chapter.
The problem is that she doesn't directly think that is what is going on.
She smells something. OK, fine, it's a bit odd but she smells things all the time. It is a very foul odor that no one else is reacting to, now that is odd.
Suggested simple fix:
Just say it directly, because the way...
Fell a bit behind but caught up now.
Yeah, I was expecting some sort of time differential, with the "language drift" and all.
"sad"
Aaaaaawwwwww.
There are MANY reasons for "translation convenience", the author just not wanting to bother with a second (or third, or fourth) language being one...
The problem is that it is hard to read and, unless used like you did where it is in it's own line away from all other text, makes the text around it hard to read as well. It is also rather over used for "anything eldritch or unusual" so if you read a lot of fics in that vein you see it often and...
Bleh, Zalgo text. A blight on the internet. Hate it, so much.
I'm guessing the local deities are not the sort that gains power from their worshipers so they don't need said worshipers. I'm guessing that Golden Pawprints is one of, if not the only, surviving members of the local pantheon and...
Thanks for the chapter.
So, why is Zenn in the image wearing an eye patch but the one in the story isn't described with one? It's the old man who has the eyepatch in their description. Could it be a cultural thing and she'll be donning an eyepatch later on? Are they pirates?
I'm fine with the slower pace, a nice change of pace from other stories. If anyone complains about it just point them to the vast majority of other fiction they can go and read instead. There are not enough slow burn fictions out there.
Put Sandy on a staff! Get a nice sturdy stick and tie her...