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The story of a man who finds himself in Amphoreus while only playing up to Xianzhou Luofu in hsr nothing will go wrong. (Everything will)
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"AHHHHHHHHHH!!!!"

Waking up should be a normal experience everyone is used to.

"WHHHHAAATTT THHHEEEE FUCCCCCKKKKKK!!!"

You go to sleep and then you wake up where you went to sleep not IN THE GODAMN SKY!

"HOW THE FUCK DID I GET HERE!!"

I felt the wind flow through my hair and clothes I also felt shoes on my feet which was weird because I fall asleep with my feet bare while I was falling faster and faster to what I could only guess what was a mountainous area with what looked like a beautif-NEVERMIND THAT HOW-

"DO I SURVIVE THE IMPACTTT??!!"

While I was falling to what would probably be certain death I suddenly felt like every fiber of my being was warning me off some kind of danger that was so dangerous that I felt like I was dying already. My body instinctively moved when it felt the danger though, unzipping a lower part of my shirt('Wait but none of my shirts have a zipper on the lower half?') and opened something that had gotten on my midsection with a soft click! sound with one hand and reaching into my pocket with the other hand went to pull out some small square shaped thing ('My pockets were empty when I went to sleep did someone change me?!') and putting the square shaped thing into the object ('What is it attached to I feel nothing circling around my waist?') on my midsection.

My left hand grabbed some kind of lever and begin to turn it in a counter clockwise motion('This is getting a bit familiar?') which caused object on my waste to launch something around my midsection begin to speak and what looked like coke to begin to come out of it and circle me.

"BITE GUMMY! BITE GUMMY!"

Then my right hand pressed a button on the right side of the object and then the coke launched itself at me and enveloped me making me curl up into a fetal position all while hearing the object('gavv?') around my waste out one more sound that confirmed what it was around my midsection.

"Sparkingummy! Yummy!"

A gavv.(1)

I had no time to process that information before all I felt was agony piercing into my body as I felt something slice my back while a bright like pieced my closed eyes as I felt whatever had sliced my back had done it with the force of what felt like a dozen trucks all at once sending my falling form sideways and making me cancel my transformation('I JUST BECAME A KAMEN RIDER!').

I only had enough time to open my blurry eyes to see I was about hit some sort of old building before I felt my self hit it and lose consciousness.



"uggghhh....."

I woke up slowly still filling a dull pain across my back to whatever had hit me, I got up slowly while finally having time to think about what had happened to me after I fell asleep.

'Ok so the last thing I remember is going to sleep in my bed at home so how did I get into the sky and what happened to my clothes and THE GAVV!'

I hastily checked my lower midsection where the zipper on the shirt was still open from opening during my fall and I finally got a good look at the gavv but when I looked at it...

"This is a bitter gavv.."

Bitter Gavv's were the gavv's of dark Shoma clones of the protagonist of Kamen rider Gavv Shoma made by Kenzo Suga in his attempts to make the ultimate lifeform with each of have them having a black colored gavv with sharp teeth compared to the original Shoma's red gavv with square teeth.

Suddenly a rush of memories went through my head at realizing what I was.

"This Idiot..."

I finally knew what was going on I was know possessing the body of the dumbest dark Shoma because after raiding a few candy stores he started to stalk a part timer(2) for stomach inc. when he saw him get blindfolded by an agent(3) and sent into door space where to human world and granute(4) world, so of course the dark shoma found that interesting and grabbed the agent when they were going through but was hit by the agent when they halfway through tossing him through dimensions where apparently at some time during his 'trip' my soul possessed his body.

"Just great I know the why and how now I just need to know the where and i'm golden. Lets see how many transformations I have left with me."

I checked my pockets and picked how three square shaped little things that squirmed and looked at me when I picked them, they looked a bit look a box of candy but were actually Gochizo's(5).

"So three transformation's left... better then none. Let's just hope I don't need them and this dimension is not dangerous or I may just be dead candy heh."

I started to walk out running into giant door that opened on it's own for which was nice, but as soon as it opened I got out I saw what looked like the ruins of some civilization that was roman or greek like with all the fallen pillars around with some I need to climb to get to the next area. Then there was pit to the next area which looked really big.

"Ehh should be able to make it with the body of a dark Shoma(6). 1...2...3!"

I sprinted and then jumped easily making the distance but also hitting my head on the celling from how high I jumped.

"Note to self much stronger then I thought I was."

I went into the next set of door which led into the outside where the darkened sky made the surrounding even more dreary and which had a broken bridge filled with statue's that would have led to another giant door with statue's on both sides I turned my head to see-

"Wow..."

-what looked like a statue of a giant which seemed to be holding a giant stone semi complete sphere surrounding a smaller golden sphere.

'!'

Suddenly I heard a cracking sound and the sound of something running at me so I dodged to the side where I got a look at what had attacked me.

"The statue's are moving?"

When I had looked away the statue's had started to change turning from a grey color to a mix of white, gold and blue and had one of the bulky ones had started to attack me when I was distracted by the scenery.

"Seriously I was looking around did you have to interupt? Welp prepared to be smashed to pieces!"

I once again put another gochizo into the bitter gavv and started to crank the lever starting my second transformation.

"BITE GUMMY! BITE GUMMY! BITE GUMMY! BITE GUMMY!"

"Henshin!"

"Sparkingummy! Yummy!"

"Let's go!"

I rushed the bulky one hitting him as hard as I could and only making a bit of crater which instantly made it swipe to constrain me with it's arms at me which I dodged by backing up only to have to dodge to the side when one of archer statue's shot at me.

"Hey rude!"

I suddenly got an idea and rushed to the area with the most bulky ones were and started to strafe around waiting. When one the archer's or mage? statue's shot at me I would push a bulky one in the way of the hit and keep running among them which worked wonders for me but then I ran out of the bulky ones.

"Shit."

But at that moment out of no where something came from overhead and blast the statue's to dust and raced towards me. I only got a glimpse of him when he rush toward me but he had white hair and blue eyes he tapped my shoulder and smirked at me when he passed by. After he passed me in his hand I saw the gochizo evaporate in his hand causing me to de-transform.

"Dude that me scared!"

"Sorry. I bear no harm I just want everybody to be safe."

"What does that have to do with scaring the crap out out of me?"

"Roaming around a place like the Abyss with armor like that in tow is a show of provocation. Those soldiers are minions of the Strife Titan. They're not known to stop until all invaders fall under their feet if you keep fighting in that strange armor of yours you won't only be putting yourselves in the crossfire but also that innocents around you.

the white haired man then pointed behind me toward a group of people that looked unsuited for combat with an old man and a child in the group.

"Sorry.. but could you been any nicer about it?"

"It's difficult to tell if you're friend or foe when you appear out of thin air I could be putting myself in harm's way for all I know. I'd be unwise not to take precautions. So, care to share the reason for dropping in on us? Hmm?"

Phai-non! Look what you did again! Taking off only to get yourself into trouble?"

Suddenly a small red hair girl with flowers in her hair and small wings ran up from behind me and up to the white haired man and started berating him .

"Agh, you even ruined his armor! Now you've really gone and done it! This is no way to be treating strangers."

"I was just trying to fix our problem in the safest way possible."

"How is this safe!? Hello, friendly strangers! Let's all simmer down and cool our jets. We're all humans here. No need for things to get so heated. Snowy's just worried you're baddies from above, but we know you two are nothing of the sort! Oh right, you don't know us yet. we're Tribbie from Janusopolis, and this is Snowy! Hurry up and apologize to them!"

"Alright, if you say so, Tribbie I apologize for my earlier behavior. I was overly wary because both of you landed in this tumultuous region, it put me on high alert."

"It's fine I was in a bad spot anyway and I have more of things he destroyed."

"So why did you come from above the sky to here?" Tribbie asked.

"Was following some guys that looked fun and the best way to explain it is they were actually going through a portal but I went in when it wasn't stable so I ended up in a random location." I explained a version of the dark Shoma version of events because most people would find my other story strange 'oh you went to sleep and woke up in the sky.' yeah right.

"Seriously?" they both asked with weird-out expression on their faces.

"Yep."

"Wow, that's something else altogether You're lucky you met us, then." Tribbie stated.

"Hm?"

"She means you're lucky because we won't hurt you, but the same can't be said for others." Snowy stated. "Let's talk somewhere else. You've seen it first-hand. It isn't safe out here. As you saw, there are still many refugees who haven't been freed in the temple. we're here to rescue and escort them to the holy city, Okhema. They're the reason I had to be absolutely sure you were not here with ill intent, and why I wanted you to put away your strange armor. If something were to occur, they would have no way of protecting themselves. I'm Phainon from Aedes Elysiae. Sorry if I offended you just now."

"It's fine I'm-" I paused 'Should I use my name or Shoma's name because i'm in a clone version of his body. Hmmm... nevermind how about I just pick a new one something represents the current me the best.' I thought about for a moment and the perfect name came from my new knowledge of the japanese language."-Kouya.(7).


OK! Thats the first chapter a doozy to right.

1.A Gavv is a secondary mouth located on the abdomen of a Granute and granute human hybrids should have them to but most the only ones we see on hybrids are modified ones.

2.stomach inc. is the organization in the granute world that sells dark treats, drugs that are made of happy humans who are captured by part timers(granutes hired with dark treats) and then made into dark treats.

3. Granute's have to power to make minions with varrying levels of power depending on how power full the graunte is their human shaped and wear masks and jackets.

4.granutes are a species from another dimension that eat rocks and have a whole another civilization with only drug traffickers going into the human realm

5.Gochizo's are the minion's of anyone with a moddifed gavv' and can be used by a moddifed gavv as a power source for a transformation but die when the transformation is over they are made when a hybrid feels a strong emotion while eating.

6.granute human hybrids have increased physical prowess like regular shoma getting hit by a bus and barely feeling a thing.

7. Kouya can mean 'false sparkle' and he is a clone of the main protagonist Shoma.

See Ya next time!
 
I'm really looking forward to how this story is going to go
 
Chapter 2: A Journey through the Temple of Titans. New
"Friction really does spark friendships, huh? Sorry for destorying that... thing that in your belt I'll find a way to compensate you for it." Phainon said.

"It's fine I can make more later but you could help me by letting me come with to whatever city your going to is I don't really know where civilization is around here."

Conversation after that kinda petered out and I followed Phainon and Tribbie into the temple where they interupted the refugees argueing about leaving this to the holy city because they are blessed by something or someone called Janus which means if I could guess that they are nomads. Phainon then came in and tried to calm everyone down which cause mentions about how it was the end times, which caused my brain to start working.

'White haired person with unique snowflake shaped blue eyes with an awesome sword, pretty powerful, mentions of the end times and a badass name like Phainon while he also is traveling with a loli? OH MY GOD i'm in a ANIME!'
My thinking was interupted by Phainon speaking to me.

"My friend, I have a rather bold request. You seem quite capable might I trouble you to fetch Mr. Noldus? Tribbie will join you. She can also answer any questions you may have."

"Sure I could help your helping to your city after all so give and take."

"You truly honorable! I'll stay behind to guard Virtus and the rest. Go quickly and come back safe."

"Stay safe!"

I began to talk to Tribbie after Phainon stepped aside.

"I'm sure you have a ton of questions, don't you? As for why we should speak in private, that's because quiet places are better suited for communicating with one another."

"You don't have to make excuses if you want to talk somewhere else without people just say so it makes it awkward to talk to someone when they tell such an obvious lie."

Tribbie then made this face that told me she felt embarrassed for being caught in the lie.

"So how are we getting to where this Mr. Noldus is? Walking, Flying with those wings or jumping across?"

Tribbie let out a little laugh and responded to my question. "Heh. Judging by your reactions, you weren't lying about being a newly arrived traveler. In that case, don't blink, or you'll miss the next part. Also, Snowy wouldn't dare make plans for us, it's more like the other way around! Alright! Silence, please. We are about to summon a miracle."

Tribbie then began to chant and point her hand at a book held in a stand.
"We, thy humble descendants, doth surmount the myriad of passages of Janus to stand before thee and receive the scales of judgment. O, selfless arbiter Talanton, declare us innocent in the name of the law. Weigh the fruits of the present in exchange for the sweetness of the past. We summon thee, Oronyx, to lift the curtain of memory..."
As she chanted the the book began to float from the stand and the ruins of the temple were swept by a golden light that everything it touched seemed to go back to a time when the temple was not in ruins and had been freshly created.

"...Once again stir the ripples of past reverie!"
"Woah..."

I began to follow Tribbie across when halfway though most of the temple went to it's previous state except a little spot around Tribbie which made me have to stay close if I didn't want to fall off. We finished crossing the temple and ended up in front of a door.

"Amazing, isn't it? Now that we're here, we can speak in peace." Tribbie then paused for a moment and looked around "Huh? But why does it feel a little too quiet?"

Tribbie opened the door and on the other side was more refugees led by who I could only guess was Mr. Noldus who were being attacked by four of the statue's from before.

"Just what I was afraid of. So much for a peaceful chat..." Tribbie sighed and seemed to ready herself. "The history lesson will have to wait, my friends. We must help Mr. Noldus!"
"Got It!"

"BITE GUMMY! BITE GUM-."

"Henshin!"

"Sparkingummy! Yummy!"

After my transformation I remembered something I had for got about the Bitter Gavv series of Belts instantly hit the button on it which caused a sword to shoot out and pierce the mage statue of the group which caused Tribbie to react.

"Woah did you just shoot a sword out your belt?"

I quickly dashed to the pierced statue and used it to cut through the statue which caused me to break my arm while slicing through from using to much strength which caused me to hiss at the pain and Tribbie eyes to widen.

"Are you ok!?"

"I'm Fine!" 'I forgot Bitter Gavv Sparkingummy form has enhanced strength but also can enhance it beyond the limit of the body, luckily this form has a healing factor.'

In a instant my arm snaped right back in place with a wisp of black smoke coming from it ('weird thought it would take longer?') which allowed me to roll out of the way of the archer statues shots I then sliced at one of the two Bulky statue's while Tribbie held the other one off.

The Bukly statue I was fighting blocked my slice but was unprepared for me to let one hand off it to punch it in the face and breaking my arm again but also shattering the front of it's head in the process, which allowed me to easliy finish it off by hitting it with my sword like I was using a bat and hitting the bulky one into the arrow of the archer statue, I was sick and tired of the archer one so I activated my finisher.

I begain to turn the lever again causing chewing sounds to apear and pressed the button.

"Sparkingummy!"
I Spinned around with one foot out and when I completed the spin I send a wave of energy with that foot to the archer statue shattering it. But the finisher made it so the gochizo was dying I checked to see how Tribbie was doing but she had already finished her fight and was watching me with a smile on her face.

"You have some mpressive fighting skills!"

"Thanks!"

I de-transformed and Tribbie then began to speak to Mr. Noldus trying to convince him to come to the holy city with him not coming around until Tribbie sweared on the name of Janus which confused Mr. Noldus until she revealed 'Our name is Tribios' which meant all of his arguments where wrong and he would travel with us to the holy city. After that we met up with Phainon and the two groups of refugees came together and started talking which is when I heard them mention of a group called the 'Chrysos Heirs' which seemed to be a group Phainon was a part of.

Phainon and Tribbie came to me.

"The dromas caravan that's supposed to meet us isn't here yet, so let's all rest where it's safe for a while."

"Sure but I was supposed to talk to Tribbie about something but we were interupted by the statues?"

"Of course. Please come this way."

We then went off from the refugees so we could talk in private with Phainon speaking .

"I see you've been made aware of our troubles. I'm grateful for your understanding, so in return, please ask me anything you wish to know about our home."

"So I heard some of the Refugees mention the end times what does that mean?"

"Just as the word implies, it's the time of strife before the world meets its end."

"What is Janus?"

"Janus is one of the Titans, the ancient gods of Amphoreus, once worshiped by humanity, they now stand as their foes."

"What are the Chrysos Heirs that you seem to be apart of?"

"The prophetic Deliverers, with golden blood coursing through their veins."

"Dude can you give a bit more exposition your telling me barely anything here."

"I'm sorry. I guess I'm not good at telling stories."

Phainon seemed a bite mbarrassed when Tribbie joined the conversation.

"Yet, a tedious and overly long explanation isn't ideal either. Let me think..."

Tribbie seemed to think for a moment then her face brightened up.

"Right! Virtus and the others are priests from Janusopolis. They should be adept at playing the lyre. How about playing a song for our two friends? There's a ballad that's been passed down in Amphoreus since ancient times."

Tribbie then gathered the refugees and had them start to play the harp while she started to sing what sounded like a creation myth where if I could translate it there are 13 Titans with three making the world, three making fate, three making life and three fighting to protect the people. The last Titans seems to hold some kind of burden for everyone to make them have easier lives. The story them moved onto some violence about the Titans but that was interupted by a rumbling sound which caused me look around. Until I looked out of the temple and saw two purple draconic brachiosaurus with saddles coming with a man. Phanion seemed to recognize him though.

"Hahaha! Don't worry. That's just our rescue. Time to get up, everyone!"
 
Will the MC be able to use the other bitter Gavv forms?
 

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