Questionable Questing

"What else could you want from me?" Charlie practically begged in disbelief because the idea that she wanted him for her own personal harem was so unbelievable and scandalous to him, he almost had to believe the corruption angle. Miss Morningstar could do a lot better than a failed Scion like him if that were actually true.

"Have you ever considered that a man who doesn't mind that his woman has an opinion and thinks wealth or skin color doesn't make you inherently superior is in incredibly short supply." Miss Morningstar retorted with a lifetime of experiences to remember. Her brown eyes glittering almost red from the glare of the sun as she wore a sardonic grin that didn't feel natural despite how easy she smiled.

"Perhaps it's because you keep stealing them." Charlie finally spoke out loud, still in disbelief and shocked he could even crack a joke at a time like this. It was his fortune that Miss Morningstar agreed as she fell into a shrill girlish laughing fit as she snuck a kiss on his hand before he could pull away.

Charlie is the name of the journalist?

Yep. He was meant to be a reflection of Charlie Morningstar herself, by acting as the more naive innocent version of her that existed before her couple hundred year exile on earth, but he's kind of become his own character at this point. Still keeping the naming convention because it fits very well and I love how he calls her Miss Morningstar since it reveals a lot about his character.

And avoids saying his own name again

Exactly, but how was the small snippet? I had to edit out a decent chunk of it and it's obviously in need of a lot more editing, but for a general feel for their voices what did you think?

Let me read it

I really like the difference of romancing compared to seducing and her placing the orange delicately in her drink

Nice. I hope the older style of talking isn't too distracting. I had open Robin Crusoe and some Dickenson the entire time I was writing comparing the two and deliberately trying to make my stuff sound less modern.

While she's obviously a very different character, a couple hundred years would do that to anyone, I hope I was able to include at least a little bit of the Original Charlie's personality bleeding through.

The older style is fine and Charlie feels unique here. Your own design

Thanks. She's an interesting character to write and that's what's important. But I sleep. You too. It'll help you feel better. Hopefully it all passes pretty quick. Night.

Sleep

Editing talk later

Have fun. Hope you feel better.

Pregnant one piece girls and I do

That's pretty great. Will look for one Piece girls, but found a fun game you need to check out. Don't know how you feel about deck builders or rogue lites, but having a blast with the demo for this game Get Yoked.

The body types you can achieve once you get good at the game. it's something else. lol.

This pictures pretty great.