Questionable Questing

Andy333

Not even just that, but just showing your perfect chad who effortlessly gets every girl has more going on isnide his head than banging chicks. Show flaws, show ambitous, make the main character more than an audiance stand in. Make them feel some sort of emotion rather than smug apathy.

Bob is bob

and give him a greater power over girls than having a big dick. Put some effort into your harem master

Andy333

Exactly. Just got done with dinner, cooked up some bacon in the oven and then had it in some grilled cheeses. Really easy, really good, but really unhealthy. lol What did you have?

Bob is bob

Pulled chicken with red and white sauce and cold slaw vingager dried on top.

Andy333

Sounds really good. I'm a sucker for good cold slaw.

Andy333

With Zuko, one of the reasons why he is the harem master and not just because all the girls love him, its also because he's actually a pretty calm dude most of the time and that's able to counter balance the more erratic personality types he's surrounded himself with.

Bob is bob

And how is he a Harem master with his fetishes and erotic manner? What makes him a terrifying fire lord Dom?

Andy333

Apart of that calmness is a tremendous amount of self control. Zuko is the kind of fire lord that will let you insult him to his face and loudly mock him in front of everyone and barely even react, but that same person will end up dead from something horrific and entirely unrelated a few weeks later.

Andy333

Zuko keeps track of everything his girls do, and can and will remind them of a punishment they desrves from something that happened weeks or even months ago. its super annoying in the moment for them, but they loveit because it keeps them on their toes and it makes their compition mean something.

Bob is bob

The girls than like seeing that self control break and start to take it as a sign of love when he has to dominate them because he can' t stop himself.

Andy333

Because if Zuko forgot about it the next day then everyone would be from square one after each misadventure, but if Zuko is keeping track and keeping score then that means there's winner and losers.

Bob is bob

He's the one who tries to provide an order they can all agree on and respect for their new family's power games

Andy333

I'm still a little stuck on the kinks actually. I meanIi think I"ve got the personalities and character arc's down plus how they'll interact with each other, but the sex still a little stuck. Lol, I figured out the emotional parts to a porn story before I figured out the sex.

Bob is bob

Good to do that. I can help with the other parts. Should each girl have unique kinks or make it more of a shared harem thing? Secondly, do you prefer physical bondage or psychological powerplays? I was thinking Zuko getting into a training posing and modeling for his pleasure kink combined with despotic control over their outfits

Andy333

I kind of wanted each girl to had their own thing that they could share with Zuko and I want a mix of physical and psychological control's.

Andy333

Speaking of outfit, as concubines all the girls will be barefoot and wearing harem outfits in public. Again its a humilation thing and Zuko at first refuses to let them wear it, needing his mom or his sister to convince him of the need. but as time goes on it becomes a symbol of how comfortable the harem is becoming with their roles.

Bob is bob

Noted. So different controls for different girls, but what is Zuko's main thing? What makes him feel powerful and in ownership of the girls? What does he struggle with inside himself?

Bob is bob

From humulation to exhibition

Andy333

I think showing it off to other people. Showing that he's not afraid of their opinion or that he's not afraid of how he feels, it ties in well with how repressed he is. That he's over the fear of disappointing his father.

Bob is bob

He likes parading around his girls in public and private. Displaying and touching them and having them act out their submission