Questionable Questing

I'm not normally one for bad guys. When I do write, which I need to do more, I set up painful tragic clashes of warring viewpoints and emotions in a clusterfuck of tragedy where the suffering of both sides is felt. Everyone is the hero for their story , but I am also a leftist asshat and this is perfect dunking on fascism bait.

Now read Hurik and tell me what you think of that madness.

Eh, those brainwashed children grow up and literally don't know any better than what the've been raised on. There's a tragedy in that. All that strength and suffering without any purpose and the people within so closed off they can't see anything else. None of this so called invincible army is happy or stable. Just an endless cycle of abuse keeping them in line.

And you want Star Wars talk later or Mark's fall to darkness? And how to portray super strength and Viltrumite combat. I read a fic that leaned into the exploding things by flying bit. It was fun for five seconds and got very boring after.

And Hurik is kind of an asshole. He see's ygritte isn't sure what he feels for her and is terrifed if she submits, he'll lost interest in her and replace her. That he throw her and their mother away when's he board of them and yet he keeps demanding that she submit and that its just natural that she'll do it since free woman yearn for Northern cock.

Yet, you can feel how insecure he kind of is and that he does care for. he just doesn't really know how to open up. Some intresting character stuff in between Ygritte feeling horny and ashamed at how gaped her asshole is. lol

Hey now. I did not say she yearned for northern cock. I was not that cringe There are elements of northern and wildling historical rivalry at play but I wasn't that bad as to use that kind of language. God that shit is. Well it can be hot but also dumb? so dumb you don't want to use it.

What you like about Hurik?
Ygrite?
Her mom?

Also yes. He is an asshole. This is what happens when a guy grows up learning from his mom Corruption route is a valid story option in life

Hurik needs to get taken down a peg and learn how to open up. Ygritte needs to learn that submssion does not mean the death of you and that she can still be the bickering sarcastic bitch hurik's in love with, even if she's getting pounded by dogs, and the mom needs to grow a little bit of a spine. So lots of really fun character stuff with all three of them.

Again even with the corruption angle their still people responding to each other and changing their relationships over time. but still my question is, what events really going to force Hurik to change either for the better or the worse?

Better knowing how softy the players are and how softy I am. There will be tension with I hope a interlude of Hurik getting Ygrite addicted to the sensation of bimbo body potions and fucking with her mind more because he is a dominating guy, yet praising her for it. I aim for a positive sexuality.

Like, if you want a gal to piss in front of you naked while spreading her lips, is it shameful or is it praise worthy? Thinking of affirmation in degradation over insults

And yes I am very proud of me and Jackal keeping character in focus at all times even with corruption smut

Hope's Ygritte stays a spit fire and even with an addiction to bimbo's. Could be interesting to play up her insecurities over her body and being judged by southern woman. Of wanting to be seen as hurik's wife and not just his whore.

The trick with them is I will sugarcoat a little but their relationship starts at slave and master. With her coming to rape and pillage the north and Hurik defending it. It is intentionally fucked up and will take time to resolve into something else. And super strength combat talk for vilturmites. Making it awesome

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=P1CfggYed6Y

While I'm not a huge fan of the story itself, way too dark for my taste, this is genuinely one of the best superman fights I've seen and a huge inspiration for how to make a good Vilturm fight.

Use of traps and gadgets, likes the noise bomb or the taser. Punches hard enough to sound like thunder and cause the ground to shake. literatlly punching through buildings and walls like their made of card board. picking up steel beams and cars to uses as weapons. Genuinely skilled fighters despite their strength, dodging and weaving. Just everything you could want.

Who will they send after you
Fucking badass line hitting on how powerful Superman is.
A viltrumite is a mini Kaiju in might wrecking the world with their blows and grappling

Superman has a nice palm strike.
Mark trained in martial arts is a very neat idea.

I also like how superman uses his flying to pick up batman, toss him around and disorientate him.

It is very cool. Mark here, how serious in tone is the morality of him wanting pets? Is it treated as smut logic or exploring the evil Mark idea of alt universes?