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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Robert laughs with his harem of whores with daughters raised to be future whores in the harem.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And not normal fuck. Sex slave collar training masturbating to porn daily and being made to edge fuck. Extreme psychological BDSM.

For repressed, what does David have for the Cenobites to break him with? Wanting to see his mom whore herself out but what else? Him wanting to rape and train girls?
Andy333
Andy333
Well, david's issue is that he doesn't really have an ambition in life outside of making the people around him happy, plus he has trouble telling other people how he feels and sharing his burdans with them, so his sexy breaking point should relate to those emotions some how.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I point out in the show he gets a power trip out of combat. He likes fighting. He likes beating people to death. He likes winning. David has a mean side
Andy333
Andy333
I'm thinking either letting his mom do some pretty heavy femdom on him ending with her getting breed, symbolizing the two willing to surrender control and to love and trust each other to start a new life, or maybe something about him trading places with one of the girls for a day so he can see how much they love and care for him,
Andy333
Andy333
And to show David how hard it is when your lover bottles and hides everything from you. Plus some fun of a femboy getting fucked like a girl. I think both idea's could work, it just depends on how I want David to end up.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Femboy David? You want to go that route? I don't see it as much but your story. I thought heavy Dom with David. See, he does so much for everyone and treats them so carefully, but is there a part of him that wants to hurt and own Lucy and Gloria and Dores? A part of him that selfishly wants to be the trashy asshole demaning them?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Unexpected as he is otherwise so caring.
Andy333
Andy333
Not permanent femboy, just for one night and just so david, whose used to being the ultiment dom and always in control, can be on the same level as his girls. its a trust thing, not a permeant condition, if that makes sense.
Andy333
Andy333
Byt yeah, the normal david is him trying to balence a tender almost delicate side of himself, with the other side of himself that wants to fuck his mom and his family into the wall untill their preganant and screaming his name. basically a monsterous need to control and to fuck, fighting against the part that wants love.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
David the gangester blood splattered brute vs David the person
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Bob is bob
There's something there. Portraying domination and a forceful rapey groping desire as scary. David wants to hurt and break the girls, and that terrifies him. He tries to reject it even as he beats a motherfucker's face in. He wants to be the bully but rejects that as wrong
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I have this thought here with you you have the NTR bad end bully. The powerful uncaring gangester asshole who is driven by entitlement and force. Have David growing that desire and struggling against it, only for the Cenobites to unleash it. The fear of being an asshole adding to the arousal of being the barbaric cyber psycho sex monster
Andy333
Andy333
Yeah I like that, and end it with him and his girls accepting it, while at the same time him learning to enjoy them taking the lead every now and again. With his mom in the end doing a little femdom.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
David embracing the monster sex by tricking himself out into a handsome yet terrifying demonic cyber psycho abomination for his mother's gang. And for the plot, what is demon matriarch like? How does she contact Gloria and does she start communicating with David too?
Andy333
Andy333
I do want who and what exactly the mother succbus is to stay a mystery as long as possible. I really want the readers to question how much of the paranormal stuff was real and how much of it is just the chacracters imagining it. But how I'm imagining her is a cross between a loving mother and a crazy thrill seeker.
Andy333
Andy333
Basically you know how when you ask your mom if you could do something stupid when your a kid, and she'll just very calmly and very slowly explain why that is a stupid idea? Well mother succubus instead in the same tome and with the same kindness, explains exactly how to get away with that stupid idea without getting hurt or caught and in fact how to take that a step further and doing something even crazier.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Need more personality for how much she'll interact with Gloria and the twins. Use evil Charlie as base for sunny milf?
And for a while could say weird underground transhuman sex cult or rogue AI
Andy333
Andy333
A core tenet of being a prent is teaching your kid right from wrong, and how to stop yourself from doing something stupid, and the mother succbus is a twist on this in that she's constalty pushing the boundaries and giving rationalizations for why good and evil are meaningless terms. She basically an enabler masked with the love and comfort of a mother.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And she sees David as a son or grandson? Does the mother demon want to marry Gloria?
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