Questionable Questing

Killed off would mean going to Hell, unless you mean super killed off?

Super killed off.

Either permenetly destroyed or ripped apart into so many pieces there's no way they'll be able to reform theselves for a few thousand years.

This one swap AU animatic had Able surrounded by Exterminator angels in a harem as their leader to make up for the lack of pussy and love he got cause Cain fucking killed him. Horny and angry and talk David's mentor?

"Satan's fiery sword slashing the air behind him leaving burns all along his back. Satan could've killed the worm already, but playing with your food was something he did enjoy from time to time. The previous white suit and charming smile of Lucifer with pale skin was peeling off revealing the fiery blood red skin and long cracked horns of Satan."
I see what you did. Hinting at the dark trinity

Will have to talk later, I have to go grocery shopping and take care of some laundry. Will ask for your thoughts on what i've written when i get back.

Cyberpunk talk later too and I am glad to give feedback

https://cyberpunk.fandom.com/wiki/Katsuo_Tanaka

Ya want a femboy for David's Harem? His bully from the show. have him take the guy's mom while he is at it and destroy his family as they are absorbed into David's harem.

David wrestling him into submission and showing off his superior body and fighting cybernetics

How has your day been? I got back from doing some chores and having a early dinner. Been chilling for a little while an took a nap earlier. man Arizonia is a lot hotter. i'm still trying to get used to that.

Not bad. Working on editing for Jackal and trying to find the damn dino bot reading order for what issues they appear in the IDW run. Above ideas on David

And my feedback on Royal Hotel if you want to talk about it

I agrre with the lack of action and kin of run on thoughts with lucifer's section. I was trying to find a way to really get in his head and kind of sum up his differing motivations than in canon and kind of got lost in the sauce a little bit.

But do you think the first chapter was good? It sounds stupid but I'm not really seeing that many people who seem intrested in it.

First law of posting. You don't get fans until you have given up all hope of getting feedback. So keep it up. Second, you didn't start with strong porn which is what people like on this site. Secondary to that is its not your strongest work compared to Queen Mother or Robin. very messy. But progress is in doing more and not dreading the past

I can talk about scene construction if you want and David chat? I'm in a cyberpunk mood while talking Hazbin

The problem with this new one compared to my quests is that it was really diffuclt to find a good starting place. Hazbin hotel the series kind of bounces around a lot and doesn't have a good definitive timeline I could slot into so it meant starting it was a lot of trouble.

But it's started and now the hardest part is over. lol

See, what I think it needed was scene immersion. The light of hell streams in from Lucifer's window, he drinks his glass. Puts it down, turns to thoughts of Charlie as he stares out at his forsaken kingdom, the last gift of his unloving father. Pacing it out by actions taken accompanied by complementary thoughts.

Anyway onto David, I'm wondering how he'll start it edgerunner career. I mean his mom's still alive and that was his main inspiration to take the plunge earlier. And while she is going to be slowly corrupted towards the idea of her son being a warrior, in the beginning especially she's not going to let him anywhere near a gun.