Questionable Questing

I've been chilling today. I was really tired after yesterday and it didn't help that i didn't sleep very good last night. The air bnb shuts down the air conditioning at night so it gets pretty hot sometimes.

But some random worldbuilding sounds fun, any stuff your working on?

Not currently. Ya want to do more Fae or what's on your mind lately for what ya like?

Been playing a lot of resident evil lately and was revisiting Ben 10. I was a huge fan as a kid, but then I fell out of it and I wanted to see if it was as good as I remember.

Ben was a much bigger brat than I remember and his character kind of flip flop a lot since the writers couldn't decide if he should mature or stay the kid that was so popular, but over all had some really cool idea's and some of the best variety of aliens in sci fi. A big complaint I have about aliens is that a lot of times they just look like humans with pointy ears, and that's not a complaint you can about ben 10.

Ben 10 lewd AU? Villain Ben?

I don't see Ben ever turning evil. he's too stubborn, I think you would need a girl he loves manipulating him and grooming him for years that he's doing the right thing, but even then it would be a fifity fifty shot if he just breaks things off and runs away or if he goes through with it.

Say what you will about being a brat, but Ben is pretty fucking stubborn.

Well that was my porn pitch. You want to talk a resident evil based setting of evil porn?

There's a couple quests I've seen where your a researcher or a company apart of Umbrella and those are always a lot of fun.

What you doing for quests and stories right now?

Conspiracies, experiments, hammy villains, umbrella maybe just an excuse for giant monsters and zombies, but their actually a lot of fun to explore and theorize how exactly they work or their end goals.

I'm doing therapist and Hazbin. I want to finish Miss Dallon up and I'm debating what to do with my game of thrones quest.

But right now I'm actually pretty busy searching for a house to rent and figuring out my job situation so that's why I haven't been writing a lot. Too be honest its been a little stressful the last couple days.

What you like about the Game of Thrones Quest and we can talk Hazbin. I thought chapter one with Lucifer was hamfisted on his love for Charlie and it was quite cringe. Needed setup and progressing through his thoughts and feelings to make the reader feel what he thinks of her

I got you. Lots going on

Yeah with chapter one I've never been good at beginnings. I should've let it cook for another couple days and edited it more before publishing. I like some of it, the set up with him not recognizing hell and the hints at hit at some intresting lore, but I was afraid of revealing too much so I kind of held back with what lucifer was thinking which I regret now.

Your scene writing wasn't great

What I was really trying to go for is that Lucifer was using Charlie as a bit of a cruch so he doesn't have to think about his own personal issuses and that him visiting her was supposed to be a little cringe but it was supposed to show that he didn't really have a good idea of personal space and can be a little selfish in how he hogs people's time.

I think if I added him pacing, maybe drinking more, showing some inner turmoil, maybe raging at someone or something in his head, then it would've worked better. Really show that he's a wreck in his personal life and instead of facing that he's putting it all on Charlie and without her around as a handy distraction he's reverting back to how he used to be.