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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
I mentioned he wants respect and independence, but as he figures out his semblance and starts thinking its evil and repressing it. But by repressing it he's not acknowledging those feelings and by forcing them down he's making them worse.
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Bob is bob
Cue inner Jaune
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Bob is bob
What is Inner Jaune like?
Andy333
Andy333
A good example, he swears off girls when he finds out how easy it would be to get laid and take advantage of a girl with his powers. And yet he's a teenage boy. He wants a girlfriend, he wants love and sex, and by hiding it and ignoring its he's making those feelings worse.
Andy333
Andy333
I haven't figured out the exact voice for inner Jaune, but what I'm think is it starts out really robotic but over time slowly develops a voice and emotion as Jaune starts to treat it not like a tool but as a evil spirit possessing him. Basically it isn't real. It's just Jaune's semblance feeding him information, but his fears of it makes it seem real. A fight club kind of situation in a lot of ways.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What if over time his Aura as the essence of Soul does make this entity more alive? And the only way to beat it is absorb and become his Shadow self integrated
Andy333
Andy333
I like that. Kind of ties it all together.
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Bob is bob
While Whitely is all for harem life and sexy women incest. He's the one helping Jaune accept and use his negative side
Andy333
Andy333
And Jaune gives Whitely a normal friend to turn too, for advice in business, woman, politics's and most importantly just someone uncomplicated to unwind with when things get hectic.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
With these two you have a rare two bros with different harms duo
Andy333
Andy333
Yeah, how often do you see that. Anyway. Going to bed early, going to be carry a bunch of beds around and working on ac's again tomorrow so I'll be pretty busy. There switching over from two people a room to three so lots of background stuff going on at work. But tomorrows Friday!!! Whoo so I'll have the weekend to chill.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Stay hydrated and cool. Sleep well. Talk my ideas for my stuff tomorrow
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Bob is bob
How ya day and talk dark fantasy tonight?
Andy333
Andy333
I'm really tired and really sore, but I did it. I fixed a few AC's. Hopefully they keep working next week. lol. But sure dark fantasy sounds fun. How was your day? I just got back from Chilli's to celebrate my first pay check from this job.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Worked from 1:50 something to a little past 9. Planning on joining local gym and going there Sunday and Monday mornings to get more energy.

The fantasy is based on Dark Souls urban fantasy idea and that RWBY idea a world where a church system regulates magic with seals and bindings. Using sorcery without igniting the inner soul flame which awakens the demon inside people
Andy333
Andy333
So a story about balancing personal freedoms and desires versus their destructive nature, all right. Tell me more.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
The idea here is that the soul's true state is a demon or God depending on your perspective. A infernal spirit slumbering inside people. There's a strong empathis on gradual purification of this soul flame. Slowly building sacred lies on it's primal truth that takes years.

Others thou let the soul fire burn, their flesh and spirit mutating, their hearts and blood seething with sorcerous energy
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Bob is bob
It was heavily inspired in concept by the hellfire transformation of Nic Cage in the first Ghost Rider movie. Much of the nobility spends the years needed to purify their souls while others let the demon rip and grow
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Bob is bob
The years required for purification creates a natural aristocracy
Andy333
Andy333
How do you purify your self? Is it a physical or emotional transformation and how long does it take? Is it like Buddhism where there's an agreed upon path everyone takes or is a more personal journey?
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