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Questionable Questing

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Noted. I like your idea of the son as the corrupting leader of the family
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Building their suits and over time he abuses his control over them being reliant on his power suits
Andy333
Andy333
To go along with that I have this scene in my head were the girls try to take off their suits and realize they can't. There was a horror movie where a guy wore a possessed clown costume and it slowly fused with his body and I kind want to imitate that a little bit where the girls slowly realize the suit and collar is their body now.
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And how will you play with the MC's guilt and shame vs his joy and greed at what he is doing?
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And I got a song for Mistet Dallion the son
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Andy333
Andy333
Nice, Jeckle and Hyde was one of the first classic books I read as a kid and that really captured the vibe. Where Hyde was super evil yet so very happy to be who he was. Can definitely see the parallels.
Andy333
Andy333
But with showing guilt and pleasure, what I like to do is have either an emotional speech or an emotional act like kissing some's forehead or gently tucking their hair out of their eye's followed by or before debauchery. It show's the contrasting desires with very little words.
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I like. So how does he try to make up for his vile deeds while growing more and more dominating and abusive of his desires?
Andy333
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What's that quote from Serial killer Ed Kemper? "When I see a pretty girl walking down the street, I think of two things. One part of me wants to take her out and treat her right, and the other part wonders what her head would look like on a stick." It sounds weird but I think of that quote when I'm writing characters that are struggling internally with a repressed desire.
Andy333
Andy333
But basically, he convinces himself as long as he balances his controlling nature with his desire to help people and treat his girls right in other ways, then he can either repress or make up for his other desires.
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A compromise growing wider and wider with time. What's the first fucked up sexual thing he does to them? What causes it?
Andy333
Andy333
Keep in mind a lot of the sexual pleasure he gets is in how it humiliates the girl rather than the action itself, so each act will be specifically tailored for each girl. But a great example is that Carol really, really wants to be seen as professional and as a hero, so her stuff revolves around either desecrating that image or doing stuff in public.
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Stuff like turning her wedding ring into a clit ring, fucking in her office loud enough for all her coworkers to hear, making her give him a blow job in a restroom, making her eat out Amy's ass. Dirty stuff in public though is the big one.
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And what motivates this? The feeling of love and ownership over them he gets for making them want to be shamed? That he can push his mom to turn her wedding ring into a clit ring as a sign of love.
Andy333
Andy333
A little bit of that, a little bit of just feeling in control after a lifetime of none, a little bit of anger at genuinely wanting to help his family but never being listened to or having the ability, and finally just good old fashioned shard induced trauma feeding him dopamine every time he acts on his worst impulses. That last parts the big one, his power's want to be used and are pushing him more and more.
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I like. What does he do to Vicky and Amy?
Andy333
Andy333
Amy is degradation. Fisting, eating asses, tattoo's, wax play, maybe some electricity play, all that kind of stuff. She struggles with self worth and insecurity, for being the literal red haired step child of the family and her guilt over her incestuous feelings, and all that stuff is meant to reinforce that. Basically turning her into a bit of a yandere.
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Mister Dallion has issues with emotional sadism
Andy333
Andy333
Vicky is superiority and bimbo's funny enough. Her thing is that she feels very guilty at being the golden child, perfect hair, perfect body, tons of friends, and the most loved member of New Wave. She resents being seen as a dumb blond and being underestimated. So besides being given a barbie body, but it's also basically being the mistress to the rest of her family
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