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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Plenty is a Old Goddess and loves how Carnal and Wild Lyanna is and uses it to play with her emotions.
Now we talk Jaune and getting the plot going.
I had this idea of a major turning point is Yang and Ruby are captured or hurt and Jaune sees Tai go berserk.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
A motif beforehand of Tai as a lazy sleepy happy dragon. Now the language of his prose frames him as a awakening raging dragon on the war path. Showcase how Jaune for all his advantages and natural power isn't everything. Tai was Ozpin's warrior and with Juri's knowledge of Grimm Styles he's become monstrous as a fighter.
Andy333
Andy333
I do want their to be a pretty big difference between the older and younger fighters. A big complaint for RWBY is the inconsistent power levels. So Jaune as strong as he is, isn't going to be kicking Qrow or Tai's ass.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Yang learned her fighting from Tai and Tai was part of a Silver Eyed Warrior led team. Him, Raven, Qrow. They should all be legends.
Andy333
Andy333
But as for an excuse of them getting involved in canon? Well I could have Ozpin pick up on Salem's influence over white fang earlier and call up Tai and Qrow towards Vale to keep an eyes out, use that as an opportunity to explore the fallout of Summer's disappearance and how much trust in Ozpin was lost over it.
Andy333
Andy333
Have Tai do a couple of his own investigations into everything that's going on working with Juri and the girls. maybe even run into Jaune at some point and give him the shovel talk. lol. While at the same time giving me a good set up to explore Salem's master plan from an outside view without spoiling all of it.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
It would be interesting to see Salem respond to Tai's interaction with her adopted son as she as a parent feels the same way about Jaune and Cinder
Andy333
Andy333
Would also be fun to see Yang and Ruby respond to their dad dating again. But for Salem I think she feels a certain level of ambivalence towards him, yes she's apocalyptically furious that he would dare oppose her son, but at the same time Jaune's fucking his daughters and the man's lost two of his wives in a pointless war by unseen puppet masters. At the end of the day, she feels satisfied in that.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
So plot. Jaune after he meets his new friends on first day. What is our first major points of interest in the story?
Andy333
Andy333
The mystery of Jaune is what I'm thinking. See here this guy, who's never been to any formal school, has a mysterious family he doesn't like talking about, acts like the stereotype of a courtly knight, and yet he's the strongest student in the class even kicking the ass of the Invincible Girl Phyrra. People want to find out who the hell this guy is.
Andy333
Andy333
Yang's just plan curious because she likes drama and because Ruby's involved. Ruby wants to find more on her first friend. Weiss feels put out with how easily she was beaten by him and is involved out of Pride. While Blake is involved since Jaune helps Velvet with her bullies and starts openly dating her pretty soon afterwards. While Ozpin's curious and egging them on in the background.
Andy333
Andy333
And this not only can be played up for laughs as the girls obsessively follow him around, but also as a nice way to introduce the character changes to jaune from canon in a organic way. Ending in Cinder finally being introduced to the main cast.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Don't want to Mary Sue him. Make sure to show off how weird he is and his social hang ups. Issues that clearly bother him or hint at those. He's a bizzare person with his personality and beliefs
Andy333
Andy333
That's kind what I'm thinking. Yeah for some people his naivety and knightly way of speaking is cute, Velvet and Phyrra for example, but for most other people he's either freaky or annoying. Plus he doesn't understand technology very well so stuff like car's, planes, and scroll's all kind of confuse him.
Andy333
Andy333
He's also not good with personal space since he's used to how "affectionate" Cinder and Salem are.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How so do they treat him at home? How sexed up are they?
Andy333
Andy333
Casual depravity I think is the best line. its not how dirty the sex is, its how casual they treat it. Waking up Jaune every morning with a blow job, telling him to use their bodies even if their asleep. Telling him to experiment with different parts of the body to get off and then wearing his cum around like a badge of honor. Its how normal they treat all this, almost like it a chore or a duty their proud of.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Now how do you keep the agency and personality and motives of the girls strong with this? Slutty yet still heroines of their shared story with Jaune
Andy333
Andy333
Well, firstly their will be an adjustment period as they go from blushing virgins towards slutty toys, and well get to see the drama and fun of these characters evolve, rationalize, and finally accept their new place. But also the drama and politics's as the girls compete with each other for Jaune's attention and having a piece of the kingdom he's building.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And how do Salem and Cinder fit into this? How is Jaune also their sex toy even as a dominant king they made? How does that reflect their agency?
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