Questionable Questing

Still pretty reserved and quiet, but also a bit of a smart ass and a little sarcastic. Having two sisters to swap stories with about terrible fathers has helped her self esteem issues and fears of just being Trigion's puppet out a lot. But it still pretty scared even if Omniman and Superman's strength kind of reassures her a little. Still closes herself off from romance since it's the easiest path for Trigion.

That is where daddy comes in. Demon Raven a thing here but instead of being a servant of Trigon, the demon Raven is aiming for Omiman?

My thinking is that raven is always fundamentally connected to Trigion, since she's part demon and thus was created with his magic and in his domain. But since she has free will thank to being part human, she has the option of exorcising that part of her with a truly selfless act, thus renouncing her inhumanity and accepting heavens light into her or challenging Trigion for his domain and becoming its new queen.

What option Omiman thinks is best for her? If she challanges Trigon for his domain, she could reorganize that realm to a new moral paradigm.

Blackfire I see falling into Mark's orbit as she gets angry at Amber abandoning her brother and she understands his battle passions as she has it too. She starts spending more time with him and Debbie training and joins Mark in his extreme fighting and things escalate from there as she gets territoral about Mark being around other women that aren't her or Debbie.

Omniman just wants Raven to choose what she wants for herself. Basically take what she wants and ignore what everyone else wants, since she's spent her life trying to please other people.

Neat. I like this. how does the Invasion effect her and how does it effect Ravager? And I see Mark's harem as forming as him gathering a squad for the Viltrumite war and Kara manipulating things alongside him get hot powerful women under his authority.

Raven has been kind of putting off dealing with Trigion for as long as possible, but after the invasion and then the Viltrum reveal it kind of forces her to get it fixed as soon as possible because in her mind the worst case scenerio would be for her dad to start some shit while the rest of the Justice League is too busy to respond.

So she starts working with Doctor fate to resolve it because despite advocating for her killing her when she showed up, Fate the immortal god of order not Nelson the human avatar, he's still one the world foremost expert on magic. As well as getting into contact with Constantine and Zatanna, Constantine because of his experience with demons and Zatanna for her raw magical power.

Constaine is a walking hellfire shit show and through working with Raven Zatanna gets close to Mark who's breed and conquer and keep pregnant and submissive visions are getting worse and worse

Yeah, I'm debating between the Constaine that's a scumbag who openly betrays everyone he works for only sort of tolerated by the Justice League since he deals with demons and so he's quite literately fighting monsters worse than him. Or if he's a guy who really fucked things up in the past and is trying to redeem himself and make the world a better place for his son. Or maybe something in-between.

Cos has a son?

He actually has three. Two son's and one daughter, all of whom where created by a demoness who wanted revenge for sealing away her father. The sons died and the daughter lived. Killed by first of the fallen, originally supposed to be Lucifer but Sandman was in the same continuity and the depiction of Lucifer in it was very different, so First of The fallen became his own separate character.

it was a scheme to fuck up Cos's life, killing his sister, brother in law, and most of his friends, along with forcing him to go down to hell to release their souls. Which is unknowingly what allowed First of the Fallen to Interfere and kill the demoness along with most of her kids. The whole event really fucked up Cos and still does, and left him with a nasty scar on his face.

Here I'm thinking he was able to save his kids, but still lost the rest of his family. Leaving him still pretty angry and bitter but not totally self destructive like in Canon. He's trying to keep it together for his kid's sake. Which speaking of his kids, their all pretty much psycho's that have spent decades in a bubble dimension specifically being taught how to be a weapon with mind control and magic to hurt Cos.

But now they like their dad or are trying to?

That's exactly what I have planned. There full blooded demons who hurt and maim and yet through their connection to Cos, they have a small amount of humanity and a desire to see earth and feel love. They're an inverse of Mark in that they start as monsters and over time become human. They feel their love from their dad and want to learn how to feel it too.

It's why I want to include it. They act as a good reference point for Mark's path. Or rather the path he could've gone down. Kind of show that nature might influence you, it's you own choice, or rather Mark's choice, that led him where he is.

I like this a lot. Makes a strong interesting moral point

Going to bed now. But thanks again for the review. Already working on the next part, might talk with you later about it.