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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
I mean I like futa, but it has to be done right. If its just a dude with boobs stabled on then your not doing it right. You have to feel that the character is a girl, you know. That's the fun of it. The juxtaposition between something cute or refined attached to something brutish and uncontrollable.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Many futa are just guys who want porn star bodies and mega mind control rapist powers.
For Invincible, can't have porn right off the bat but mark with corrupted viltrumite conquering breeding dreams?
Andy333
Andy333
I like the idea during sparring and wrestling, Mark just starts popping random boners and he gets really embarrassed about it. With him and Blackfire especially practically humping each other over time when they get in the ring together.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Humping is good. Male corruption. Its never done. Having Mark act like a beast, humping and growling and instinctively groping. Physical compulsive actions he can't stop or restrain.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Connecting violence with Mark getting horny so after fighting bad guys he acts more crude and domineering with the girls he has a interest in.
Andy333
Andy333
That's the idea. something stupid and embarrassing the characters are laughing about is a nice little hint to the readers of something deeper going on.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Growing and more corrupted and extreme in fetish as time goes on
Andy333
Andy333
I also think how casual his parents are about having sex all around the house and not caring if their kids know, like in Canon lol, is also a good way to show and maybe have the character's comment on how different Nolan and by extension Viltrum views sex.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Now for Nolan to get the incest. Raven. Her demon soul. Its a sucubus queen and loves Nolan and is pushing him to have a daughter harem
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Its perfect. The red demon Trigon aspected Raven schemes and works to give her adopted father a grand harem of breeders with her on top
Andy333
Andy333
I like the idea that Raven isn't even consciously aware she's doing it, her emotions clones on the inside playing games and using little magic tricks to try and push it into happening.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Make demon Raven truly part of her by having her hate Trigon and love her family but as a demon would
Andy333
Andy333
Demon Raven is just her suppressed emotions and unconscious desires. Trigion can influence it and make these emotions more extreme but fundamentally it all starts from Raven.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And we have our storyline for incest for Nolan now
Andy333
Andy333
Yep its all coming together. I'm getting some sleep. See if that helps with my stomach. Night.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Sleep well. When Invincible come out for first chapter?
Andy333
Andy333
Hopefully next week. I'll see out it goes.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Andy333
Andy333
Just finished dinner. Hope the walk wasn't too far or the weather was bad.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Nah. I walk to work every day in the afternoon. Update above for you and you want to talk Raven's sucbus soul and how it is giving Nolan and her a harem of daughers and sisters?
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