Questionable Questing

Sorry i didn't notice this yesterday. I've actually been thinking about it for awhile, the issues is that I've gotten a lot better writing since I started with it and I can see a lot of the mistakes I made and at this point with how long it's been I'm almost tempted to do a rewrite.

I'm debating between finishing out the last bit of going ahead. Or restarting. Not sure.

I could see more both options and wouldn't mind a reread if it came to it. I found Vicky interludes fascinating as it show her mindset corruption over time. the only downside I saw was the lack of more interaction (sexual and otherwise) between the two by themselves as It became more about Carol. other then that it was fantastic and look forward to your decision

That's actually one of the big things I want to fix. it became the Carol and Amy show for awhile and I really want to open it up. The original idea I had was actually a hypothetical twin brother to Vicky and was going to include Bakugo, Squealer and maybe even Purity in it as well. I might relook at some of those idea's In a rewrite.

the hypothetical twin brother to Vicky? While I could see it pretty much made redundant with futa.
I could see Purity Joining for protection and Amy justifying Kaiden turning into a slut for carol As Kaiser owing Carol a sister for takin her Aunt. It would also increase the drama when E88 identities were reveled.

The idea with the villains was that they kind of symbolised the harem's, specifically Amy's, declining Morality. They take in Squeeler because Skidmark dies and she nearly overdoses, Amy able to justify the mind control with how rough of a shape she's in. Amy take's in Bakuda purely for revenge this time at the chaos and almost near death of her family.

While Purity is purely for selfish reasons, power and lust, towards the end. Kind of neatly matching Amy's view of mind control from beginning to end. In the beginning out of fear, then out of anger, and then finally not even bothering with excuses anymore.

hmm I guess Missy would symbolize Amy's no longer lying to herself. Dont see this happening because of Carel core personality twisted as it would be would allow Missy to join. I doubt Amy change her that much as she was afried of changing her to much . A corrupted Vicky who already Views Missy as a little sister and families? that would show Vicky desent further into corruption.

Missy was Vicky's thing, show like you said the crossing of lines between family and lovers as well as her of all people looking for more. For Carol though it shows how little control she has over her family when even a very clear line being drawn like this gets crossed, since one of Carol's big things she uses to justify it is everybodys of age.

hmm I could see some friction but not much with how much she been twisted but I could see her putting her foot down and keeping a closer eye on her. I still doubt she would fuck Missy till she of age