Questionable Questing

I hope your aunt feels better and helping her goes well.

https://forum.questionablequesting....snow-in-character-creation.30230/post-9605269 New update

Heyo, how are you? How was your day? My aunt feels a lot better and today's Friday so a couple days of sleeping in will fix anything else. But onto the story, got a bit of a dilemma which is delaying things a little bit. I'm struggling a little bit with the beginning. I've got two different intros partially finished. Both are centered around new Wave since their unhealthy family dynamic acts as a good backdrop.

The first one is Carol Dallon coming home from work, newly pregnant and lugging around a pair of brand new enormous super sized breasts, who's lactating. And her worrying about her body, transitions into her worried about her age and how she feels unready for this pregnancy, thus giving some background and the start of a character arc for the readers as well as the hook of them wondering what the hell is going on.

With her angst getting interrupted by Vicky and Amy bugging her on the couch about school, parties, and other teenage stuff, trying to make everything seem normal and boring. But then while they're doing that they both take turns breast feeding from her and then fingering her a little bit. With the mystery being set up for the audience. This is a perfectly normal day at the Dallon Household, how did it get here?

While the second idea, is Amy's having a boring day with her family at her cousins houses with her musing on how the family used to be a lot closer, but recently the kids have started drifting apart. When they are interrupted by a mysterious package landing on their front door of a box full of movies. With the family arguing about what to do with it before shrugging their shoulders and deciding to watch a couple.

The second idea is short and sweet and a little more of a traditional opening. It sets up the conflict between Amy feeling closed off from her family and the desires to fix that. The intrigue of what this box is and lets me directly show the effects of the movies to the audience. So what do you think is better, the mystery set up or the more traditional one?

I read this all quick

The first and put in Alex Mister Dallion popping up at the end to draw readers in to question his AU aspect

Don't know if I'll add Alex just yet, because this might be its own thing, but we'll see. I mean I am only one chapter in at this point.

But how are you?

You see my idea to have the movies on the film for the different genres all ne superhero based so as to give power costumes to different characters?

Ate Redneck Nacho and watching Dan Dan episode one. You read A Bastard's Glory update I posted?

I wanted to add porn parody movies in there too so it actually fits in quite nicely. I spent a little while working on superhero movie names, Blacked Widow, The Fantastic Fucking Four, or Iron-Rod. Just that perfect amount of cheese.

Superhero porn parodies giving powers but also new narratives to people's lives. I would like Alex with Dalions as he's unused so far or a different son character

Maybe, I actually had this idea that other families or people could get retroactively turned into a Dallon through the power of the narratives, with the whole pregnancy, other than being hot, was also a way to introduce the idea that the video's have the power to make whole new people and change lives to fit them, but a male lead for the Dallon's is needed too.

What movie did Carol watch? What superhero parody?

I'm leaning towards SuperSlut versus PowerTit, which is based on the animated Justice League episode or movie about Power Girl being a Cadmus clone and trying to infiltrate the league. With a few minor changes, just stuff like it being Kara's first year and how she's still feeling insecure about her position on earth and as a hero. As well as a romantic subplot between the clone and the original.

Not really that important and why I'm not being specific. But the big impact it'll have, other than giving the whole family bigger boobs lol, is that in the movie the two are able to settle their differences and move past everything. With that translating to, Amy knowing who her real dad is and her and the rest of the family have come to terms with that significantly improving their relationship and mental health.

Go for superhero parody with good directing

I like. What does our male dallion lead watch?