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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
I actually came up with a pretty good couple of lines, it's now just getting it to flow right with the next part. "Carol opened her eyes and all of the sudden the room was too dark. It was too quiet. Despite having the lights on and front facing windows that let the sunlight blind your eyes, it just felt lifeless and still."
Andy333
Andy333
"Was that the reason? That the only friends she had came from her vargina, either because she slept with them or because they were her kids. That any second they weren't near her she felt ready to explode. That even before they left for college, she was already making sure she had some replacements that could fill the void."
Andy333
Andy333
I also liked the line, all her body was good for was a life support system for a cunt, but it was too dark and I'm going to save it for later when Carol's going through a rough patch and just finished a fight with her sister wife Sarah.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I love how brutal and cynical your lines are
Andy333
Andy333
My main idea with Carol is that she is a very cynical, almost paranoid person, but in contrast every time she's around her family she's loving, cuddly, and a little sappy. Not only is it a fun contrast, but it also fit with the video's effects. The cynical person on the inside is the old Carol poking through, while the loving and sexy mom on the outside is the newly improved version.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And she wants to fall into the Alter, to merge it with her cynical self and make it her own
Andy333
Andy333
That's the idea, the new version is happy while the old one was sad, and if being happy means living a lie then Carol will happily lie to everyone including herself to make it happen.
Andy333
Andy333
But I read the newest chapter of Hurrik's bizarre adventure, and am liking some of the world building. The things about how if you disrespect the school to much they'll repurpose you into a wright. Or how the wall has enchantments and loyalty contracts to enforce your obedience, and how even the most crazed and unruly wizards can still be made useful.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I'd have her slowly integrate cynical Carol into the porno version. Make it her own. Thank Jackal for those pieces of lore and did you notice Hurik thought nothing of the guy brainwashing the girl?
Andy333
Andy333
Yeah it was kind of funny how nonchalant he was about the whole thing. He was more pissed off about the property damage than the potential rape. lol
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
It's tricky showing the porn logic morality
Andy333
Andy333
It's a balancing act. The way I've been approaching it is having sex not necessarily be the forefront of everything, but present in the background even when it would be seen as inappropriate. Stuff like Vicky openly wearing a thong and showing it off to people by bending over deliberately far. Or Amy sucking Carol's lactating breast without permission and everyone around her laughing about it.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
That thong idea is awesome.
Want to chat Greg's black and red hulk persona and the movies he and Taylor and Sophia watch?
Andy333
Andy333
I'm also really liking the idea that the whole family has an onlyfan's account they regularly post on. With everyone else treating it as a quick buck and a fun hobby, but Vicky takes it to a whole other level. Regularly doing professional photoshops, inviting the top donors to private parties, hotels, and orgies. Doing games like getting stuck in the wall and letting anyone use her.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Super model porn star Vicky is a great idea. We on hero trio or New Wave?
Andy333
Andy333
For Vicky while the sex is good and fun, she really likes the worship. She likes freely using her powers and arua and being seen as a goddess and having a crowd of people worshipping her. Since she always has to hide the more master element of her powers. But she also likes being loved without the pressure of her powers in the way, which she can only get from her family who are immune.
Andy333
Andy333
So you get this nice contrast of porn star/cult leader Gloria buliding herself an army of worshippers, and the normal teenage girl Vicky looking for love, working with Amy in trying to seduce their parents and sibling into formerly marrying and openly loving them.
Andy333
Andy333
But no, we can talk about Greg and the terrible trio, or maybe the fearsome foursome if you include Taylor, I just thought you would appreciate this idea.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I really like the idea of only fans orgy cult idol Vicky.

Taylor, so her movie is about a super popular nerdy hero. Cyber exoskeleton powers to go with her bug control
Andy333
Andy333
I'm trying to think of a good version of Spiderman for her. Maybe Spider Gwen or Peni Parker? But I need a porn name for them something cheesy and stupid. If it was regular Spiderman, I would do Penis Parker, but that won't work for a girl.
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