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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I hope he survives and regains his health.

Protag pitch for you. A John Wick elite. Elite is term I'm using for the super soldiers/Hunters until you figure out what they are in this world exactly. He gets revenge for death of his wife and daughter and sons harem. Story starts with him put into teacher role and building a new family from girls and femboys
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
John Wick post I'm back and everyone I hate is dead
Andy333
Andy333
If it was a RWBY world I was actually leaning towards the idea, of it being a Salem wins AU where she rules over humanity as a saintly goddess figure against hordes of now godly overpowered grim, punishment directly from the gods for challenging them. With the remnants of humanity surviving in massive cities thanks to the ancient relics and magic acting as a barrier that Salem has collected over the years.
Andy333
Andy333
With Salem creating the harem system because she wanted to marry the four maidens, reincarnations of her daughters formed from Ozpin's magic, that rule alongside her. After each of their deaths, they are reborn and Salem uses her position as the headmistress of an elite hunting school to find them and remarry them. With I'm thinking Ruby being the latest reincarnate.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I say RWBY as inspiration. Not direct AU. Let your imagination soar. It's your idea still. I'm just here to have fun helping and adding
Andy333
Andy333
Or maybe have all four of the RWBY girl's be the latest reincarnates and the search for the previous reincarnates and who or why someone would kill them can act as a nice plot hook for the beginning. Since in this AU these four maidens are worshiped basically as living saints and one of the biggest reasons the grim haven't overwhelmed them yet.
Andy333
Andy333
But then again I really like the idea of Ruby being this young girl basically jumping right into a harem of much older, stronger, and more beautiful woman, all of them filled with expectations and memories of her previous incarnate they can't help but insert onto her. With Ruby's big personal arc in learning how to be herself and not get crushed under these new expectations,
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I'm more for you doing original work
Andy333
Andy333
Well sticking with the more original idea with the assassin school. It was originally a private bodyguard service for the royals of Europe able to not only safely protect them but also act as a confident, a lover, a maid, and a servant all in one. It was the most elite training mixed with the utmost loyalty. With boys and girls swearing themselves to this cause in return for lifting their entire family into royalty.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
You want it in real world with anime rule of cool superhuman ability? And want to mix the vampire idea you had before or no? They sound similar
Andy333
Andy333
Not as a king of course, and any child sired with a royal would be forever be unacknowledged per the rules of the agreement, and the maid or butler themselves would be forbidden from inheriting land earning themselves a quiet disinheritance from their former family, but that former family would become landed gentry.
Andy333
Andy333
Which Vampire idea was it again?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
You and I was talking Twilight and discussed Bella going to a Reinfield school for high vampire servants
Andy333
Andy333
Oh, right. they are actually pretty similar. The Reinfield idea actually evolved from this one. But I'll have to think a little if I want to combine them.
Andy333
Andy333
Going to go get some ice cream be right back.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How ice cream
Andy333
Andy333
Good, it seems to make everything better. Had some hazelnut chocolate.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Very good. Now more idea
Andy333
Andy333
I was liking the idea of these virtual headsets, not just for the mind control smut aspect, but to have these complicated personality tests and little virtual games that are used by the school to further hone in their training and make adjustments if they notice to much deviance. With these scenes playing out half way between a dream and a video game.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Noted. So no vampires? And characters. You like my protag pitch or want something else
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