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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
God no more Debbie breeding or pet
Andy333
Andy333
If this version of Nolan and Debbie had conquered Earth together.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Got pregnant Debbie in lingere or something else? And pet master Mark is great. I do like your idea of having Amber become a non sexual friend to Mark. Story over smut. And I tell you focus on Mark as your main story to write weekly and you will get results.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Omiman wasn't lying. Debbie was getting a bitch for Mark. The best milf bitch she could find. Her
Andy333
Andy333
I do think Invincible's a setting that has a pretty decent sized inbuilt fandom, I'm just worried about how well they'll play with DC's fandom. But then again this isn't Spacebattles, everyone here is a lot chiller about their favorite characters getting their asses kicked as long as it's either cool looking or leads to smut.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Very. Pregnant debbie with Mark? And so that Debbie chapter, let us break it down.
Andy333
Andy333
Not a lot of Pregnant art, it's weirdly an obscure fetish all things considered, I'll have to look around some more. Or maybe make some, I have been playing with Ai art a little.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Ai art is damming against the soul. But also lewds so we are in porn hell. Now Debbie chapter, what is issue of organizing it.
Andy333
Andy333
But Debbie Chapter, I mean I already have the Skeleton of it in place. Whole family having a barbecue, kids playing, Debbie thinking about her family and life acting as an introduction to everyone, feeling insecure about her age and fragility, then boom Nolen gets a call and has to go save the day leading to the Flaxen invasion.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
My friend suggests Snowflake method to me and I offer to you.
"The way I'm doing it is:
Write one sentence summarizing the scene/chapter/story/whatever
Expand that sentence into a paragraph summarizing things in more detail
Expand that into multiple paragraphs going in more detail over explicit beats in the story"
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
"It helps you keep things focused by boiling things down to the base themes, conflicts, and ideas
So you might, say, summarize a storyline, then turn each of the paragraphs you end up with into chapters, which you further expand into the beats in those chapters
It's nice because you can control how granular or big-picture you're getting
I'll show you my stab at it when I'm done"
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
So what is issue. You sir I think need scene grounding training.
Andy333
Andy333
But here's a paragraph that shows the issue I have pretty well.
Andy333
Andy333
Starfire went with the amazon's and eventually joined the Teen Titans while the reject was stuck with them. That was mean. That was a mean thought, Debbie thought as she took another hearty sip of wine. But unfortunately it was true. Starfire was cheerful and excited. A playful girl that reminded Debbie of an overly enthusiastic puppy if you ignored the casual nudity and sexual innuendos she draped herself in.
Andy333
Andy333
Starfire swore up and down that this was her culture and it was normal, but Debbie had a funny feeling that Starfire wasn't nearly as innocent or clueless as she pretended sometimes. Blackfire in contrast was bitter and angry like a wet cat stuffed in a box for too long. She did not have an easy life even before living underneath the shadow of her more powerful and beloved little sister.
Andy333
Andy333
"She wanted revenge and frankly Debbie didn't blame her even if she felt it was misplaced. Hate your parents but not your sister." See and I really like this little monologue. It gives a ton of foreshadowing without being heavy handed, it's a nice intro to Blackfire and Starfire's situation, while also providing some character to both of them.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
The was hurts me. She looked cheerful and excited, she acted cheerful and excited? i do like how Debbie is hating on Starfire because of Blackfire her little girl
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
So what is the issue
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