Questionable Questing

Bad End Heroine rescue pack. It was a CHYOA that came out a while back, where you take popular waifu's dealing with some variant of bad hentai ending and you give them a good one. A nice change of pace from the usual rape happy stuff that became popular from Slutlife. I'm pretty sure I showed you it a long time ago, but a new thread was started recently and I wanted to contribute.

Here's my new stuff, but I've contributed to this thread a few times already if you want to check it out there's an index with my name near the top. Thank God for A's. lol

I like this idea. How goes Mark?

"She doesn't know if any of them are real, but she would like to find out. She wants to see if this Barbie doll can become a real girl."
Elegent writen ending

Thank you. I was trying to mix in some emotion and story to what is supposed to be a hentai story, and I'm glad it landed. Did you like the Tracer one too?

And with Mark, taking a break the show pissed me off a lot with some of the stuff it's doing. I hate multiverse crap and the new lore their adding is fucking things up. I'll have to sit down and do another world building section to fit it in. God, I can see what people stay away from comic universes.

I did not read a lot of it. I shall now

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In many universes her powers would be to travel seconds, minutes, or even years forward and back in time. In this one her powers manifested as the ability to slow down time. Seconds can stretch into minutes, then years. Unfortunately she can't control it.

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A nymphomaniac, bordering on sex addict, before the event. She was a well-known patron of various local clubs where she would pick up three or four, men or women, to enjoy for a night. She couldn't remember the crash before. But after almost dying she needed to unwind and decided to break her record of a dozen men at once in celebration. To bad her powers triggered for the first time

The later parts of the time slowed orgy are hellish in their agony. Good fucking shit and makes her being sick of sex hurtful. Nice writing

I mean the comic's did the whole Multiverse crap too, with alternate versions of Invincible invading, which was really fucking stupid. Everyone disliked it even back then. But the comic's were smart enough not to give them any personality or drag it out. They just killed them all off all at once and moved on like it never happened.

With Rex activating this special bomb that ends up destroying all of them and saving the day. Instead of only killing one before getting murdered.

Remember the Mark who had girls look like Eve in his fucked up grief harem over killing her?

But yeah I'm glad the slow mo Tracer was effective. I was inspired by that one scene in the Judge Dredd Reboot where the person fell to their death and felt it all in slow motion. And I wanted the discuss of sex to reflect how much Tracer was angry at her life basically being stolen from her. From hotshot fighter pilot and hero, to sex crazed, disabled hermit that's just one of many in this random guys harem.

DVA you mean. Tracer Is the slow mo while DVA is harem girl. I will say there's a element of hypocrisy in having a guy fix them to have them than join his "good" harem. I get it but find the contrast funny

I always wondered how the hell that Mark managed to kill Eve considering she can, spoilers, use her molecular rebuilding powers on herself and basically rebuild her body with her mind if she gets desperate enough to break through her mental block. Which neatly leads to my big complaint about the event. These Marks have been fighting heroes and training under their dad for years.

How the hell did they lose? They're overpowered. They're the end game players being shoved into the beginning. At least with the comic's they had magic science bomb to blame it on.

And I mentioned that Tracer's a part of a harem specifically since this CHYOA is geared towards and incentives the reader picking multiple girls. But yes the hypocrisy of pretending you're the good guy in taking in these practical sex slaves, is one of the funner parts about this whole setting. It adds some depth to an otherwise unnamed self insert, that he's not just this good boy helping out.

That he's got darker urges. That could get in the way of him trying to help the girls that he may genuinely grow to love and respect. It's why I specifically mentioned with Tracer, that one bad orgy could undue her progress, or with D. Va, that she's perfectly susceptible to mind control. It adds some nice ways the reader could really fuck them up if they want.

If they love being fucked up, it's kinda good. The morality of power in smut is quite warped