Questionable Questing

The later parts of the time slowed orgy are hellish in their agony. Good fucking shit and makes her being sick of sex hurtful. Nice writing

I mean the comic's did the whole Multiverse crap too, with alternate versions of Invincible invading, which was really fucking stupid. Everyone disliked it even back then. But the comic's were smart enough not to give them any personality or drag it out. They just killed them all off all at once and moved on like it never happened.

With Rex activating this special bomb that ends up destroying all of them and saving the day. Instead of only killing one before getting murdered.

Remember the Mark who had girls look like Eve in his fucked up grief harem over killing her?

But yeah I'm glad the slow mo Tracer was effective. I was inspired by that one scene in the Judge Dredd Reboot where the person fell to their death and felt it all in slow motion. And I wanted the discuss of sex to reflect how much Tracer was angry at her life basically being stolen from her. From hotshot fighter pilot and hero, to sex crazed, disabled hermit that's just one of many in this random guys harem.

DVA you mean. Tracer Is the slow mo while DVA is harem girl. I will say there's a element of hypocrisy in having a guy fix them to have them than join his "good" harem. I get it but find the contrast funny

I always wondered how the hell that Mark managed to kill Eve considering she can, spoilers, use her molecular rebuilding powers on herself and basically rebuild her body with her mind if she gets desperate enough to break through her mental block. Which neatly leads to my big complaint about the event. These Marks have been fighting heroes and training under their dad for years.

How the hell did they lose? They're overpowered. They're the end game players being shoved into the beginning. At least with the comic's they had magic science bomb to blame it on.

And I mentioned that Tracer's a part of a harem specifically since this CHYOA is geared towards and incentives the reader picking multiple girls. But yes the hypocrisy of pretending you're the good guy in taking in these practical sex slaves, is one of the funner parts about this whole setting. It adds some depth to an otherwise unnamed self insert, that he's not just this good boy helping out.

That he's got darker urges. That could get in the way of him trying to help the girls that he may genuinely grow to love and respect. It's why I specifically mentioned with Tracer, that one bad orgy could undue her progress, or with D. Va, that she's perfectly susceptible to mind control. It adds some nice ways the reader could really fuck them up if they want.

If they love being fucked up, it's kinda good. The morality of power in smut is quite warped

Warped morality of smut and exploring it is to have the fun of any of these hentai stories. The girls loved being fucked up, almost as much as they hate it. They hate themselves and their bodies for giving up their hopes and dreams just for sex and yet paradoxically they hope and dream of meaningful sex with someone they love. SO many contradictions and psychological stuff. It's so much fun.

Indeed. You want to hear of External and Internal Summoning?

Would love too.

Let us call the setting I talked about last night the Cultic setting. As cults and their internal rot is the main danger. Summoning from High or Low is the foundation of the settings soul metaphysics.

Externally means contracting and setting up the ability to project a spirit of High or Low as a advisor. Through this one may learn signs of power to be drawn, speak words of incantation. Bargain for gifts of knowledge and mystic artifice. Very much the mage track. The spirit bound to the soul as both a supernatural force and reflection of a person's inner will or ideals is able to be petioned for gifts.

High being higher emotions like honor, Justice, kindness, etcetera? While low is lust, wrath, hunger and other more survival orientated emotions?

Be it through deals, vows, spirit journeys or other ways.

Internally means Invoking a demonic or holy spirit into the blood and flesh. It is transformation into a avatar of the spirit when called on. Compared to External Summoming, the relationship is that of a inner power vs a source of occult wisdom.

High spirits are tied to grand moral order. Laws, virtues, systems of authority and right. Low spirits are of ego, passion, want, and personal fulfillment. High breaks itself to repair other things. Low breaks the world to strengthen itself
Bingo.

External High Spirits offer wisdom and must be slowly learned from. Tests abound, challenging the Summoner to ferret out the lore and its power. Low Spirits are gift-givers. They freely bargain and sell spells and ways kf making amulets and secret knowledge. They also whisper terrible self destructive advice and plot without regard to consequence.