Questionable Questing

Puppy is currently still teething, so he's chewing on everything paper, toes, and his current obsession electrical cords. He really likes eating Iphone chargers and I caught him chewing on the cord to the vacuum earlier.

Foolish creature

La criatura tonta indeed.

But while I do see the dragon and wolf ultimentaly being feed from and partially formed by Hurrik's innermost emotions and insecurities, you can tell they are their own entities at times by some of the little mistakes they make. Like for example when the Dragon offered glittery gold as a temptation I knew right away that was a mistake. Since while Hurrik likes gold and won't turn it down.

He doesn't care about the look of it or the feel of it. He doesn't chase wealth for wealth. What he likes is the power it holds. The power to build castles, form alliances, and ultimately the freedom it offers as basically portable power. He doesn't have any sentimentality about it, so the world glittery is wasted on him. It's a nice example of a little mistake you can miss if you're not paying attention.

There is no way Jackal thought of that intentional detail but if you noticed it than he is doing something right subconsciously

What about the wolf?

The magic of the subconscious for the win. lol.

I like how the wolf was always hiding behind the Dragon. Because that leads to an interesting question. Is it really hiding? Or stalking its prey? Is it the innocence of love and the dignity that can be found in raising a family and doing everything in your power to stay together? Or is it a ravenous beast who's just as hungry and ruthless as the dragon yet hides its true form behind empty platitudes?

The interesting part about the wolf is how much it seems to twist and flow depending on how you look at it.

I really like that. So what would you say the Wolf really is in line with that, good and bad?

A little bit of both. lol. And I know that seems like a coop-out and in some ways it is, but the big thing about the wolf is that while it does have a darker, eviler side if you let it, that side is chained too and restricted by the pack. It's the wolves without a pack that are the true dangers.

I'm going to note the Dragon didn't mention blood sacrifice as a natural part of a mother's love

In a lot of ways the dragon is a lot less sneaky about it's flaws. lol. But brownies are so good. my only complaint is when you cook them you have to let them cool for like thirty minutes.

Yikes. Ya want to hear me complain about Moniker Smith Bloodlines some more? Its the vampire VN where so you'll have them say the vampires are draining the soul out of people and turning them into evil horny bitches. But, they don't do evil shit. They don't hurt people, they don't uncomfortably push boundaries, they don't use force, they don't hypnotize. It is all said not done

Is there anything worse than a Hentai game, where the MC is given stupidly powerful and equally devious abilities and then he continues on being the most carbon cut out white bread protagonist ever? I hate these one's more than I hate the surprise buttsex or NTR one's to be honest.

Oh god those suck. The fucking one where you have a succubus companion egging you on but can't take any wicked options. Its fucking shit. Why can't they let you be a fucking controlling bastard.

It's cause the author doesn't have the writing skills or the passion to make the MC anything more than a carbon copy insert. It happens a lot in fanfic's where the author comes up with the super special power or gimmick first, and then starts thinking about the characters. You see it all the time in the past with Naruto or Harry Potter, and now Worm or Tanya.

For fanfic? Cause Naruto himself is great.

When I said Worm, Harry Potter, and Naruto in the same sentence you have to have known it was fanfic's right away.