Questionable Questing

I only have little ideas.
I love this dialogue sometimes

Jeffery is a ignorant selfish asshole with ignoring their problems but by christ in between his creepy fixation they shit on him for every fucking reason. I hate eveyrone in this work.

And that's the unfortunate tragedy of Class of 09. Everyone is a horrible person, but their horrible in the way that is painfully realistic for a bunch of dumb high schoolers. Of course they're exaggerated a lot and played up for laughs, but still there's some realistic characters and I can already see their arcs. Nichole learning to actually care and that her actions do hurt people.

Jeffery learning to pull himself out of escapist fantasy and that while the people around him are jerks they're not targeting him for no reason and that certain behaviors he does makes him a target. In summary, if the author had been willing to let them grow up a little and peel himself away from the sickeningly dark world view he had, their is a lot of story potential.

And there is nothing worse than seeing a story and knowing it could be better, you know? Oh and Tysha is very cute and I love how she still gets shocked sometimes at how important and powerful she is and how her life has turned out. Again it's all very, very cute.

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.At this point in the story, Nicole has basically done the same thing. He's mentally unstable because of his terrible home life (violent gun nut father) and this is also probably why he's so into his hobbies, as a way to cope - much like Nicole and her drug habits.

What do you think of her personality and her relationship to Tyrion?

This novel makes me wonder about Taffy Tales. Told of it before. Guy has a inner hyde take over and the VN can be really dark but also has this light hearted vibe of forming friends over time to it. Its weird and doesn't have as nearly good on point writing as Class of 09

She has a pretty quiet personality honestly. She's not conquering the world or researching new magic potions or building a harem. She seems pretty content with what she has and kind of acts as a ground force for Tyrion, help make sure he doesn't get too arrogant or ambitious. A reminder that power chasing doesn't make you happy. While of course Tyrion is the one who pushes her to do more.

Did she feel enough of a person on her own outside of him, that she did things for herself or had interests besides him?

They balance each other out is what i'm saying. Never heard of Taffy Tales, and speaking of violent gun nuts there's an ending where Jeffery becomes a school shooter too.

Tysha feels a little flat, but then again seeing her fangirling over Tyrion is really cool. Some nice wholesomeness despite the debauchery and it is fun seeing her more grounded perspective.

Of course there is and noted Tysha needs more character of her own. What you think of her vampire bits in the interlude on how she feels as a vampire?

I liked the lines about blood sausage and how it was becoming a regional speciality as well as how she wistfully remembers the warmth of the sun, some nice tiny bits of world building.

https://uberpie.itch.io/taffy-tales-redux-season-1 This is Taffy Tales. It really doesn't do anything fantastic with the inner hyde premise

The warmth of the sun was me and the blood sausage jackal

School shooting ending.

Not watching. This VN has its good points but the underlying themes are toxic.

Lol. Now you've just tempted me to write a fanfic of it, so you have to read it.

Your on Mark. As for a fanfic, make it college and I'll be honest, redo a lot of characters as the incel cyncism is poisonous. Taffy Tales I bring up because it has the main character be like Jeffery but without the stalker bits. Timid, dorky, socially awkward, unable to act.