Questionable Questing

Well, do you have any Master story recommendations? Lol.

Honestly porn is shit. You get like one gem out of a thousand like this one where Jaune has a semblance to mind control people with his words that had Glynda go crazy for him and the rest is varying levels of style is good but storytelling is cardboard

I get that. lol. You'll notice the two suggestions I gave you weren't because of the porn, but because of the believable characters.

Sleep well. Will write for a little while myself, before I go to bed.

Always make time to write during the week and write enough to make progress on stories

How writing go and mind control corruption.
Or breast and ass expansion

Pretty decent actually. I have the first sex scenes, although put an asterisk next to it because there will be a couple spicy scenes before that, halfway finished. I am also half way done with the intro, although it's pretty exposition heavy so I might add some more stuff before or after. We shall see. Maybe something like the cultist perspective when they summoned Charlie?

Why are they summoning her, what hopes and pains animate this choice? From social conditions to supernatural dangers

With the cultist I'm thinking idiots that got in way over their head. I saw this horror movie recently, incredibly mediocre but the ending was just amazing. All these smug cultist through the movie just shitting themselves once they realize they really did summon satan, i'll pull up the scene real quick if I can find it.

But in the meantime a cute breasts expansion pic, that's very on topic.

More.

Breast expansion with milk

And so nobles or poor homeless kids?

I'm thinking noble orgy party filled with drugs, murder, and debauchery. Something horrible enough that Charlie would go full rip and tear no questions asked, not only because I want Charlie to be completely by herself in the beginning, so no hopeful cultist members to act as a depository of exposition for her, but also I want her to realize just how horrible people can be.

Since a pretty big running theme of this story is Charlie slowly morphing into her father's role for this world, after hundreds of years of trying to fix shitty people. So having Charlie inadvertently wipe out a bunch of people in the beginning will not only be pretty traumatizing for her, I'll make the deaths accidental as her extreme emotions lights everything on fire, but it'll also set the tone.

Oh and here's the scene I was looking for. That's what the cultist's viewpoint of that night is going to be.

Somehow no gore and absolutely terrifying.
Also, street urchin boy and girl who are dying from sacrifice knife cuts saved by Charlie?

The flowers blooming added to the terror

I love the ending when the Camera pans upside down, so you get the viewpoints of all the cultists. And speaking of a street urchin boy and girl, two of the planned spouses for Charlie, from a pool of ten at least in the beginning, was going to be a pair of twin orphan street rats Charlie was going to adopt and take care of. They where either going to be the second or third spouse she gets.

Behind the first one that gets killed, thus causing her to use her powers for the first time to basically make all her spouses her immortal minions, and another one that doesn't want to be immortal so he basically divorces her amicably and passes on. Of course Vaggie shows up around this time as well. lol. But back to the twins. Charlie raises them, and they promise to marry her when she gets older.