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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And so who is the favored third child, the one that is raised as Charlie's demon spawn, her faithful paladin husband
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Where's my milky breast expansion girls
Andy333
Andy333
Haven't made the paladin yet. But the current list of husbands so far out of ten is the first one who's murdered. The second, the preacher that loved her but wanted to die powerless so he could reach heaven. Vaggie. The twins. Then we have the pirate, a greedy cruel Spanish Conquistador who finds God and goodness falling in love with Charlie.
Andy333
Andy333
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I like the pirate. Becomes a demonic general for her?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
More milky girls
Andy333
Andy333
He's a mixture between a general, spy master, and admiral. I mentioned before that in the future Charlie becomes the leader of a huge company, and the pirate handles a lot of the back room deals needed to keep it afloat. Smuggling, sabotaging, spying, that kind of stuff. But he's not a full on spy, not subtle enough for that. He's more of a sledge hammer so to speak to kill the bad guys rather than a scalpel
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Your avoiding colonialism and slavery right?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What kind of demon does he become?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Got any of any girl in general getting tits filled with milk?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob

This redesign with a more humanoid base form and absolutely beast demonic shape is peak.

In Helluv Boss and Hazbin the demon combat is not gnarly enough. No demon form vs demon form
Andy333
Andy333
I mean I'll be mentioning and dealing with Colonialism and slavery, yes. Although it'll be set in the British Empire and they famously opposed the slave trade. And of course Charlie's going to be in the unique position where her company will directly benefit from colonialism, She'll gain more wealth and power if she looks the other way, wealth and power she could use to do more good.
Andy333
Andy333
But of course she wouldn't be Charlie if she did the easy route, so she will oppose it. But their will only be so much she'll be able to do unless she's willing to start burning everything down and a lot of the drama will be Charlie being this all powerful figure, but also realizing there's only so much of it she can actually practically use and that saving the everyone is beyond her grasp.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
If you have the will to touch those creative topics I applaud your art
Andy333
Andy333
With the core conflict being Charlie's desire to become powerful enough to save everyone, versus the pursuit of power is inherently corruptive and will hurt people. Its threading the line and seeing how this will shape Charlie and which side, angels or demons, she ends up at in the end.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Heavenly demons obviously.

So what's first plot arc and what kind of demon is the pirate
Andy333
Andy333
The first arc is the Reporter meeting Charlie, falling in love, and slowly untangling her messy back story. Broken up by a few flashbacks and the occasional introduction to important characters moving forward. It's what i'm calling the exposition phase. There's a lot of stuff going on and I need someone as clueless as the audience to slowly introduce everyone.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What's her home like as the reporter enters?
Andy333
Andy333
With on a more thematic level like I mentioned before, the reporter is like a mini Steve Rogers without the serum. Very moral and has a hidden will power, but also very shy and a little naive. He represents the version of Charlie before she was summoned to earth and how she would respond to the person she's become.
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