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Questionable Questing

Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What kind of motherhood will she embody and does it tie into imperial queenship with her
Andy333
Andy333
That's actually a very good point I was going to bring up at some point. For Charlie, she tries really hard to be the best possible mom she can still secretly trying to fill in that hole of her lost family with a new one. And she is good one. But she's too good, if that makes sense.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Motherhood as avatar of larger empire?
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And more pregnant milfs
Andy333
Andy333
None of her kids leave her house or her presence. All of her employees worship the ground she walks on. She controlling and manipulative, but she's so damn nice about it you can't help but agree with her. Through pure force of personaility, even before you add on the mind magic, she naturally generates cults.
Andy333
Andy333
And how that all ties in with the Empire, is no matter what she wants, Charlie's influence is so powerful she naturally destroys cultures, people, and other countries and causes them to reshape themselves to what they think she wants. She's the side of the Empire that just sucks everything up and folds it in.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
The all devouring welcoming comforting womb
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What's our first chapter like?
Andy333
Andy333
First chapter, iI'm going to have a prolog first of the cultist summoning Charlie. Her going full Doom Slayer when she notices the child sacrifices they have planned to bribe her. Then a small somber moment as she realize how far away from home she really is and looks out into 1600's or 1500's London.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Body part proportions wrong for that pic
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
What demon form does she take and is she associated with fire?
Andy333
Andy333
Then we get a hard cut to a journalist working for a sensationalist magazine that's looking to go more legitment and hired him to look into Miss Moringstar's, the infamous owner of the Hazbin Company, recent investment into the Niger delta. With him accidentally falling face first infront of her and getting a ride along as an apology.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Is she secretly his grandmother
Andy333
Andy333
Well I say accidentally, but spoilers. The camara's they used in 1850, when the Journalist section takes place, used these special silver panels to make the image. They are called a Daguerrotype. But silver does not react well around Charlie, and her bodyguard noticed this and made him trip before he could take the picture.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And from there she senses he's of her bloodline?
Andy333
Andy333
And as fun as it would be to make him related to charlie, doesn't fit with where I'm taking the story. More spoilers. lol. But the he's the disgraced scion of some British royalty, who had a bit of a crisis of faith when he saw some of the atrocities his family where involved in and why he took on a new job and identify.
Andy333
Andy333
No Charlie, helps him because she's nice and because she did break his very expensive camara. But also because she was fishing for information a little bit, trying to figure out if he represents any groups or anything she should be worried about.
Andy333
Andy333
Because the reasons she's expanding into the Niger delta is because Britian and France are having a bit of proxy war using various African tribes over who gets to control West Africa, and more specifically the profitable Dimond mines of Nigeria, and Charlie's here trying to organize a ceasefire.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
How does magic play into this war with spirits and runes?
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