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Questionable Questing

Andy333
Andy333
Charlie ends up repurposing several of them for her various hotels and sanctuaries for orphans she establishes with all of them providing healing, protection, and safety all by tying in the key lines directly into the concept of motherhood. With Charlie starting to get influenced by this massive influx of power into her being.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And the lewd, is that from her blood as Lucifer and Lilith's daugher, two gods of sin?
Andy333
Andy333
Partially that, also partially from the fact she's become a symbol of change and growth in this new world so when growth and motherhood mix you get tons of breeding. Plus Charlie just becomes naturally lewd over time as she gets terrified of losing her family, and thus goes to greater and greater lengths to keep them tied down and safe with her.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I'd have the lewd tie back into Lucifer and Lilith as icons of temptation and have Charlie take it from them as her daughter and expand on that Apple metaphor. While using all you have mentioned
Andy333
Andy333
But back to the reporter, his character arc is that he's a very suppressed guy. Not just emotionally or sexually, but also intellectually. He's a guy born out of his era basically, with the average liberal beliefs you would find today clashing against a much more brutal time. A part of ties in with him being a reflection of past Charlie,
Andy333
Andy333
But also a big part of it is because he's the opening narration and I want to ease the readers into this world. Since I will be discussing colonization, Slavery, and some pretty dark stuff, and having a more average viewer from the time I think would be too much especially in the very beginning.
Andy333
Andy333
And in Charlie, he's finally found someone he can open up to and trust. But can he really trust her? And that's the big dilemma for him. Since someone as powerful and influential as her is going to have skeletons and darker sides. And he's secretly terrified of the idea that he won't be able to resist her charms and power, and become just another slave or cultist she seems to collect.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
I hope your doing proper research for these topics. I encourage your creativity but if you do them it does come with a duty to try to get it right. If you don't exactly nobody is prefect, but avoid the basic pitfalls at least.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Charlie's fertitle milf motherhood I suspect arose also in part from sexual fantasies from her followers projected on her. They wanted her to be their bimbo sexy mommy love.
Andy333
Andy333
It's an alternative Universe since Charlie's had a few hundred years to mess with the timeline, so that gives me some pretty decent leeway, but the tone I'm going for is no matter how well intentioned or how helpful Charlie tries to be systems like Empires and Colonies grind people down. With it all tying back with the themes of Charlie's powers having negative side effects.
Andy333
Andy333
But yeah, it goes without saying her thousands and eventually millions of followers project all their fantasies onto her, and since thanks to being liberal, opposing the church, and openly being a woman in charge of her company and relationships, Charlie's been dealing with a few hundred years of propaganda to make her out to be a whore and a degenerate, which isn't helping.
Andy333
Andy333
By the time of the Reporter wearing red suits, having black nail polish, or bleach blond hair, all three of those things is universally acknowledged as symbolizing loose women and revolutions thanks to the churches propaganda.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
And her followers want her to be their whore. A goddess yes but a erotic one. One that will adore them sexually
Andy333
Andy333
Exactly. She's a whore, a mother, a wife, a goddess to all of her followers and they are pouring all this power and emotion into the Keylines that are directly tied into Charlies being, and since her bodies pure magic and not biological she has no ability to stop it.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Interesting and she accepts it with love. Now if that ain't a metaphor for the sexual and emotional objectification of women I don't know what is
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
Getting in shower be out in a sec
Andy333
Andy333
I didn't even think of that angle, I was thinking more mutual corruption on both sides, but yeah that makes a lot of sense. Which also ties in with how over time Charlie starts to see sexuality as a tool to control and ensnare her lovers.
Bob is bob
Bob is bob
As that is what they think of her and she reflects and enhance that but I want chapter plots
Andy333
Andy333
I have a plot planned for Italy at some point. lol. With potentially a Jojo or Rocky figure to be Charlie's next husband after the reporter. Which to make a long story short, after discovering the cult's involvement in Nigeria posing as Portuguese missionaries, the Reporter and Charlie team up with the twins to start investigating around
Andy333
Andy333
Only to discover that a whole system of orphanages, missions, and hospitals all under the Catholic church has been subverted. With the twins wanting to strike while the iron is still hot and before the cult can go back underground, also secretly holding a grudge against Catholicism and loving the opportunity to kick their teeth in with the little shadow war the two sides have, with Charlie instead opting for peace.
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