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I was never super clear with the passage of time, the year this story began taking place in, or the ages of any of the characters. I believe I mention at the very beginning of the story that Nerim is somewhere in his 15th year, and then a bit more than a year passes between then and him getting...
Joke or not, there is a grain of truth in this! Assigning problem Jedi to Temple duties is a good way to keep them under your thumb without taking the step to throw them out unmonitored into the Galaxy either as a Knight or an Exile. The Temple is also largely made up of Jedi not in the prime of...
Chapter 64: Of Course Not Me
Nerim walked with the two of them towards the medical ship, which was in the process of disgorging the Mandalorians, all fully armored—and carrying blasters. In the distance beyond it, over a metal fence, he saw what appeared to be a large crowd of people of a...
Hmm. Well, he is training Tetha, he does use advanced Force powers, and he has conquered his inner Darkness and dismantled an organized Dark Side Order...
But Arwain has never Knighted him, so in his mind he's still just a Padawan. And for her end, how could she let go of her precious Padawan...
Chapter 63: I Want To Go Home
At the end of the call, Nerim leaned back against the box again, and slid down to the floor, eyes unfocused and staring at the ceiling. He supposed he could have asked where the bunks were, but some part of him couldn't. Was it just fatigue?
The Saarkanian officer...
Not at all, I enjoyed reading it!
This is something I plan to get into a little bit more in the final arc, especially in regards to how the Order views the fiasco at Cathar, but as the Masters express in Chapter 46, there is some disagreement within the Council as to how contemptible Nerim...
Interesting thoughts, thank you for sharing them! I was going to respond briefly but I got excited and wrote a wall of text whoops lol
Without spoiling anything, I think to some degree, all three are true. Fae is not enthused about the process of leading the Order, and as several things you've...
Thank you! It comes from the music video At Atelier by Fake Type. I think the music group is pretty talented and the animator (Morinoji) who made the visuals does just gorgeous work, but that music video in particular is special to me, being about becoming a creative type person and the joy of...
Well, Arwain did claim to have briefly met her before, but honestly...
...Wouldn't put it entirely past her to be lying solely to annoy Fae...Arwain is absolutely the type of person to create grand elaborate lies solely to claim she fucked your mom.
I was asked jokingly a while back what I would do if Disney tried to adapt this story and the answer is I would probably enjoy it very much, but I have a particular fondness for people recollecting my writing incorrectly, and I find the Disney sequel films very ironically enjoyable. Actually I...
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End Of Arc 6 Vignette: And I Got Caught Right In The Middle Of It
She knew it was going to be difficult.
After seeing the youngling win the Initiate Tournament like that, she knew it would be difficult. Younglings weren't supposed to fight like that. In her opinion, they weren't really...
Chapter 62: The Jedi Way
After bandaging Tetha's wound as best they could with the supplies in the medical room, Nerim dragged Kiali to her feet with one arm and helped steady Tetha with his other, and began moving as fast as they safely could towards the armory. After all the screaming had...
Chapter 61: Like Animals
For roughly half an hour Nerim and Jianno split ways and crept around the palace, subtly informing the various enslaved Mandalorians of the plan. Jianno went to the creche where they kept their young, and Nerim wandered the halls for any guards on duty.
It wasn't too...
Chapter 60: To A Dark Place
Once Nerim managed to flip the shock remote, he focused on the computer, and used the Force to tap the sequence of keys that opened his cage. The door slid to the side, and he quickly exited and rushed to the alien to search its body for keys.
He momentarily...
Nerim does have a surprisingly low body count, for a Star Wars story! Many of his fights he's been able to end nonlethally, and whenever he has killed someone, he's had to sprint away full speed immediately after instead of lingering over it. I mean, he has been trained to kill his entire life...