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  1. CrudeUndead

    The Undying Being(temp ) My first try at writing (Original)

    Thanks for the corrections and yeah I know this is my first time trying to write a story I have it planned out but I'm not quite sure how to well write it yet.
  2. CrudeUndead

    The Undying Being(temp ) My first try at writing (Original)

    Yeah, I haven't really been working on it because I'm currently not feeling very well so I just decided to post what I had written.
  3. CrudeUndead

    The Undying Being(temp ) My first try at writing (Original)
    Index: Page 3

    Walking up to Ged’s along the dirt path I see Murc and Drax standing off to the side of the leader's hut. Looking at them they are a weird pair, Murc being fairly short compared to most men in the village being only about 5’10” where as most men are over six feet though he is also the fastest...
  4. CrudeUndead

    The Undying Being(temp ) My first try at writing (Original)
    Index: Page 2

    “Pull it back further, you won't be able to kill your prey if the arrow never reaches it” my cousin Vron said, as I felt my muscles burn trying to pull the bowstring back while keeping the bow trained on the knot in the tree 30 yards away. I adjusted my aim, breathed in to steady my arm, then...
  5. CrudeUndead

    The Undying Being(temp ) My first try at writing (Original)

    True I could do that but the first part of my book is more about my character finding out that this world is more than just a normal but more primitive world, also without spoiling anything most of the first part is going to be more about him and the people around him then after something...
  6. CrudeUndead

    The Undying Being(temp ) My first try at writing (Original)
    Index: Page 1

    I am new to writing and wanted to make a book not sure how far I'm going to go with it yet but I will try to at least finish the first part I have planed. If you have any critiques I would love to hear them. Also, this isn't the full first chapter or anything just the part I've written so far...
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