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i think you might have forgotten a line earlier in the chapter. This is the first time the word Wool is mentioned and yet the dialogue implies that Paul brought it up previously as part of a trade thingy.
My 2 cents is that the setting is a lot more interesting if you go with the take that a Goa'uld uses their host's brain to operate. it explains a huge amount about why things work the way they do: The Goa'uld are basing a big chunk of their personalities on uneducated humans who belies that they...
Man, Paul replying to the question "what do you know of asgard?" With "I'm dating Hela" is such a massive flex that the hulk must be feeling inadequate
Well this will have consequences. Remember that Paul's tattoo's are specifically designed to absorb energy (the kind doesn;t matter too much as proved by when he became a demon) and make / augment his soul with it. So he basically just shoved a giant load of god power into his soul. I wonder if...
Regarding the Tau sterilizing other species, it's made fairly explicit in the Tau ending of Dawn of War Dark Crusade. Though how reliable this is, is up for debate.
Sorry but this just isn't happening. Entities are bullshit OP. Essentially Scion at even a fraction of his full power can do a very good impression of God. Clairvoyant exists so it seems reasonable to assume that Scion has a similar ability. So Scion is omniscient and can attack across...
Did they first meet Rapture before or after the whole Butcher thing? Because if it was before then this isn't funny this is Rapture being an absolutely gigantic bitch. Having this information from the start would have prevented so much suffering for all of pantheon... Wow, just wow and Rapture...
I don't quite understand the latter part of this paragraph. It seems like you are saying that they like to pretend that Sabah is weaker than she is, bu then you have the next bit which doesn't quite make sense.
I think you are trying to say something about how they are tricking people into...
This is theecndtime Lisa says "meet Gemini" it feels a bit clunky having her repeat the introduction so soon like that I think it would be better if she said it in a different way the second time. Alternatively you could tweak the first instance so that she's introducing Gemini to Alexandria and...
Not really. Like not at all. If you want to say "this is true" for the story cool you're the author, but that disease thing is so utterly bullshit in how it's supposed to work that my mind literally ground to a halt when I read it.
I really, really wish Wildbow hadn't explained Tinker tech as...
it seems a little odd that the new Tinkers know their specialties well enough to assign labels to them already. Going by Canon I'm pretty sure it wasn't a thing that was that was immediately obvious. Like I'm reasonably certain that they don't trigger and go "oh, I'm a tinker I deal in power...
*Slow claps*
Well play TanaNari, well played. You have set this up well indeed, I cannot recall the last time Contessa featured even slightly (I think it was around the time she bitchslapped Saint) so this is disturbingly plausible.
I have to admit you captured GU's voice extremely well here...
Wait what?
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Okay technically you are correct with that sentence but not in the way you think you are, you have the scale a bit wrong here what happene to BB is way bigger than the Empire State building. Don't forget the entire city has been levelled, it's GONE there is nothing left of it...
Another problem with rebuilding Brockton bay is that it's currently a big ass crater. they would need a LOT of mass to get it back to being a level surface.
The thing I'm interested in is that it seems like Lisa has finally realized that it's Eidolon creating the Endbringers. So the next few chapters should be good.
Personally I don't think this bit reads very well, it's a bit clunky with the two sentences. I would suggest;
The shrinks say they run on my subconscious belief of what fantasy creatures are suppose to act like. Through the lens of a twelve year old." She paused for a moment "I don't like...