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  1. Shaedy Hoe

    The Sage of the Mind

    What?! Nah, bro. You need to take this back to the workshop. Why is that? Well: a) this timeskip was quite jarring, and b) chapter feels quite incomplete. It just has too much information condensed into a few paragraphs. It basically Feels more like an omake than an actual chapter tbh.
  2. Shaedy Hoe

    You still alive, bro? Cos it's been a minute.😅

    You still alive, bro? Cos it's been a minute.😅
  3. Shaedy Hoe

    High Pressure (Saga of Tanya the Evil/Avatar: the Last Airbender)

    Damn. Tanya bout to start a freaking cultural revolution lol.
  4. Shaedy Hoe

    A Game of Thrones: A Stark Shard.

    More like nine, if you include the Crownlands. Seven Kingdoms is the number of Kingdoms there were on the continent right before Aegon's conquest, but then he liberated the Riverlands from the Iron Islands and created the Crownlands from parts of the Stormlands and the Riverlands, so there's 8...
  5. Shaedy Hoe

    The Sage of the Mind

    You know it's okay just say 'the president' right?😅
  6. Shaedy Hoe

    The Sage of the Mind

    Axle should really come out to Chris on his death bed to ease the poor man's suffering. 🤣🤣🤣
  7. Shaedy Hoe

    Calyx

    I don't really care whether the text was written by an AI or not, cos it's not really an issue. My problem is that the prose just feels off. That's all really.
  8. Shaedy Hoe

    Calyx

    LOVE this story, but it reads like it was written by an AI, not a human. The dialogue, especially in the Cauldron meeting, was painful to read. It just felt so alien and robotic. The rest of the chapter was OK, though.
  9. Shaedy Hoe

    Hogwarts: Dyroth Grindelwald Rise From Nurmengard

    👍🏽
  10. Shaedy Hoe

    A Game of Thrones: A Stark Shard.

    Thanks for the update. Also... you kept calling the Green Men 'wargs' when what they are is 'skinchangers'. Wargs are a specific group of skinchangers that control wolves/direwolves like the Starks. Like, how in Avatar, some (not all) waterbenders can also bloodbend or how some earthbenders are...
  11. Shaedy Hoe

    Hogwarts: Dyroth Grindelwald Rise From Nurmengard

    ...spells work in Harry Potter. Most of the spells in the story use pig latin, or some other ancient language for their incantations. Charms. Transfiguration is still a form of magic so that sentence wouldn't make sense. *Protego Totallum *Dyroth Story could benefit from some more...
  12. Shaedy Hoe

    A Game of Thrones: A Stark Shard.

    Take a shot every time someone responds with an "aye" and see if your body can survive the alcohol poisoning.😭 PLEASE try and switch yo vocabulary every now and then cos your characters can sometimes sound a tad bit monotonous. Love the story, though! 😘👍🏽 Do you mean "the new king"? Why the...
  13. Shaedy Hoe

    Calyx

    Probably Taylor
  14. Shaedy Hoe

    Calyx

    Well, that quickly went south lol.😅
  15. Shaedy Hoe

    The Sage of the Mind

    *Howard *signature Thanks for the update.
  16. Shaedy Hoe

    JollyHippo's Snippet Thread

    This boy's an idiot. He coulda just joined a magical organization like the Golden Dawn or that other german one to quickly become a magical prodigy instead of him having to deal with this bullshit smh. Good chapter, though.
  17. Shaedy Hoe

    A Game of Thrones: A Stark Shard.

    Thanks for the update. I really enjoyed every single chapter of it. Rob really is a wonderful character and I cannot to see what he does next. The other characters are just as good and they all feel like real people. Also, as someone who also mastered English later in life, I have just one...
  18. Shaedy Hoe

    The Red Emperor Dragon Of Another World

    Oh, so Jon IS in fact Ned and Ashara's son. At least in this universe. Hummm. Interesting.
  19. Shaedy Hoe

    A Game of Thrones: A Stark Shard.

    I enjoyed reading thos latest update and I cannot WAIT to experience the next one, sk thank you for all your hard work, IF999. Okay, now to some constructive critique. Spiders are not insects, they're arachnids, just saying. Westeros is too damn big (as big as South America) for a group of...
  20. Shaedy Hoe

    A Game of Thrones: A Stark Shard.

    How comes Robb didn't bring up Domeric during Ramsey's trial? Cos I'm pretty sure that him killing the next Lord Bolton who also happened to be grandson of Lord Ryswell and the nephew of lady Dustin woulda been a huge deal? Also, even if the North is growing wealthier and more financially...
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