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  1. Feel The Ground Shake (Pokemon - Ground-type specialist)

    I really like the letter rank being a representation of a level cap. One of the cleanest "system" implementations I've seen. Very curious about the Gyarados. I'm wondering if a clan's specialized training can make it surpass it's limits, or maybe there are other factors that can effect the...

  2. Defeat Does Not Exist (Cobra Kai SI)

    Good chapter. The one line that made me pause was the one about the grandpa saying Sam is in their "class". This is just my opinion, but I'm not sure that's how someone would approach that idea. From my experience, people talk around it, "he's not one of us" or "I don't think she's right for...

  3. Defeat Does Not Exist (Cobra Kai SI)

    This is fun. I'm still not 100% sure what his motivations are, but things don't need to make sense in this universe. And he's building such a house of cards. If these people ever talk to each other, he could end up looking like the most manipulative piece of shit ever. But I suppose it's no...

  4. Feel The Ground Shake (Pokemon - Ground-type specialist)

    I'm not sure how I feel about regular fake evolutions, but I've always thought that most pokemon should have homebrewed mega variants. There are many breeds from the earlier games that don't have one and it kind of messes with the lore a bit when an established powerhouse of a character uses one...

  5. Feel The Ground Shake (Pokemon - Ground-type specialist)

    Great story, particularly love your interpretation of alpha Pokemon. I think you've shown a lot of restraint with your SI, which is rare to see in a Pokemon fic. Your main character feels powerful, but not all-knowing, which is what I think a lot of Pokemon SI fics get wrong. A lot of them feel...

  6. Hyena Werks (DanmachixDnD SI)

    Really great stuff, was disappointed when I got to the end. I find the main character very amusing. I think people are going to underestimate him just because he doesn't have the durability of an adventurer, and I'm looking forward to their revelation that he could probably destroy a good...

  7. The Accidental Liberator (ASOIAF,GOT SI)

    This was a fun read. Looking forward to seeing how it develops. Not sure if it was mentioned in the thread or not, but there are some cultural details about the Dothraki that I think could be integrated into the story. When the Dothraki are defeated in battle, they have to cut off the braid...

  8. Thanks for this comment. Just found said fic on sb. Those Halsey chapters were something...

    Thanks for this comment. Just found said fic on sb. Those Halsey chapters were something special. Would love to see that story in a non-quest form.
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  9. Post-Conquest: Insurgence (ST and SW Crossover)

    Read the original story and this in one sitting and enjoyed the experience. I do however agree with some that it seems intentionally biased and that it weakens the stories as a whole. The way that bias is so transparent in the writing made me feel like there weren’t any stakes and kept me from...

  10. SHINOBI: The RPG - New Game

    So this chapter felt like a "jumped the shark" moment with the harem stuff. It's just radically different than the previous incarnations of the story and gives it a more campy feel. There was a bit of camp in the other work but I felt like overall it was more grounded in a realistic take than...

  11. SHINOBI: The RPG - New Game

    Not the harem route! Lol Glad to see an update to this. I'm liking the rework a lot more because Daisuke's progression is just a bit slower which allows him the social interactions that were missing in the original.

  12. Walk on the Moon (Naruto SI)

    I always have a hard time wrapping my head around how useful summons really are and this chapter really got me thinking again. I mean, with canon boss level summons, it's obvious. But I always felt Kakashi's dog summons (and subsequently Rei's rats) would be more of a liability with the...

  13. Walk on the Moon (Naruto SI)

    Hey man, I’m sensing some aggression. My disagreement is nothing personal. I just like to have good debates. But back to Lee. I always favored the fanon theory that the malformed coils only affected control and not use. Which is why he can empower his taijutsu and use the gates, because those...

  14. Walk on the Moon (Naruto SI)

    Sinnerlust Sure, Lee’s chakra coils might be fanon. But it’s a realistic fanon interpretation of a vague character flaw. He’s unable to use ninjutsu or genjutsu. Why? Because he’s talentless? That’s a bad shounen-flavor reason that really doesn’t hold up when you think about it for a bit. He...

  15. Walk on the Moon (Naruto SI)

    If you have a patreon, I'll throw a dono for the update.

  16. SHINOBI: The RPG - New Game

    I feel like the side cast are getting fluffed out as their own characters now. In the original, they all seemed to orbit around Daisuke. This version is much better.

  17. SHINOBI: The RPG - New Game

    Personally, an Anko and Daisuke pairing is possible and not at all unrealistic to me. Anko has a lot of baggage and Daisuke acts, and technically is, older than he looks. Its like one of those stories you see on the news where the attractive teacher gets caught sleeping with her student. Except...

  18. You’re a very talented writer. Came for the lewds, stayed for stories. Quality is up there with...

    You’re a very talented writer. Came for the lewds, stayed for stories. Quality is up there with a lot of the visual novels I’ve read.
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