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  1. Astral Archer

    Are these stories all your work? There is an insane amount of them.

    Are these stories all your work? There is an insane amount of them.
  2. Astral Archer

    Just wanted to let you know that your avatar story is very well written, i'd love to see more.

    Just wanted to let you know that your avatar story is very well written, i'd love to see more.
  3. Astral Archer

    Feel The Ground Shake (Pokemon - Ground-type specialist)

    Excellent story, well written in every respect. I'll be keeping an eye on this one.
  4. Astral Archer

    He Of The Six Eyes

    bolded words are a crutch, you can do better than that.
  5. Astral Archer

    I really like your 40k gamer fic, i hope you continue it.

    I really like your 40k gamer fic, i hope you continue it.
  6. Astral Archer

    It Is Alright To Use Spiral Power In A Dungeon (TTGL X Danmachi Crossover)

    Solid premise and execution, I look forward to seeing where this goes.
  7. Astral Archer

    What's the Frequency, Madison? [Worm, Time Travel]

    Nice story, thanks for writing it. I think it's fitting that it ends here because most of the setup from the previous chapters (Madison's regrets, Conflicts with Emma and Sophia, Shard mind control, Taylor friendship, Ward situation, etc) have all had sufficient payoff by now and been resolved...
  8. Astral Archer

    Glop. [Multiverse, Self Insert]

    That's fine, drive to improve makes me happy because it means more engaging stories in the future. As long as you try your best we cannot ask for more. I hope to read more of what you write because people who seek improvement are rare, and almost always end up writing good stuff eventually. I'm...
  9. Astral Archer

    Glop. [Multiverse, Self Insert]

    Your introduction is the most important part of the story. Changing the POVs too quickly drives people away, so find a way to convey what you need to without changing the POV too much.
  10. Astral Archer

    What's the Frequency, Madison? [Worm, Time Travel]

    Taylors actions annoy me a lot in this update
  11. Astral Archer

    What's the Frequency, Madison? [Worm, Time Travel]

    It was cool of Dennis to distract Missy from her problems with the PR department. I like the way that you have these subtle interactions happen in the background that the protagonist isn't aware of the implications of. It makes the situation feel more real.
  12. Astral Archer

    Destiny Draws Near (MHA SI/Gamer, Kinda but yes)

    The intro chapter contains precisely 2,454 words worth of exposition before anything actually happens. Honestly you could delete it and open in-media res with the Izuku interaction, and have us learn this info over time in exchange for a more engaging plot hook. I liked the "trying to reach...
  13. Astral Archer

    What's the Frequency, Madison? [Worm, Time Travel]

    This story is pretty good. I like it. Looking forward to more.
  14. Astral Archer

    Found it on Pinterest, it's an artist's redrawing of some super model's face in robo aesthetic...

    Found it on Pinterest, it's an artist's redrawing of some super model's face in robo aesthetic, with slight alterations to the person's facial expression to make em seem more intimidating. I like the artist's interpretation; it adds a lot and makes it more 'ideal' as a facial expression. This...
  15. Astral Archer

    Cool profile picture

    Cool profile picture
  16. Astral Archer

    Good pfp, it's very eye catching and carries a lot of weight to it that reaches out to the observer.

    Good pfp, it's very eye catching and carries a lot of weight to it that reaches out to the observer.
  17. Astral Archer

    Tanya’s Hogwarts Adventures (Youjo Senki, Harry Potter)

    That's precisely the problem; the nun accepts the claim of the self proclaimed witch without complaint or questioning. A very strange interaction that makes the character seem like an NPC in a videogame.
  18. Astral Archer

    Tanya’s Hogwarts Adventures (Youjo Senki, Harry Potter)

    The name change was enough to fool me into thinking this was a different story to the spacebattles one. But the sentence "I assure you this is not a heathen school" and the reply of "Ok" from the head nun gave away this story's source. Why you decided to keep that interaction in this upload of...
  19. Astral Archer

    The War Chronicles of a Little Demon (Youjo Senki alt)

    what is the summary for this story
  20. Astral Archer

    thanks for the advice

    thanks for the advice
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