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  1. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    The question is, did Anakin read the LoTR already? If not, when will you fix that mistake? Well, I'm guessing, since it's a Star Wars universe, which, while not grimdark, it's not a very nice place, filled with not very nice people.
  2. Miestwin

    An Expansive Forge (Celestial Forge V3/The Expanse.)

    Don't beat yourself over it. It's fine. I too do not like "human" companions, especially if they're from that much different universe. If they don't have a normalcy+loyalty effect on them, it might go shitballs very fast, and then the story becomes a mess. That's why I, in general, prefer either...
  3. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    I laughed at that last part. Top tier stuff. Will she tho? In all of the chapters, she only showed interest in vag, never in D. Even when she showed interest in Cam, it was about his power levels, not his meat saber.
  4. Miestwin

    An Expansive Forge (Celestial Forge V3/The Expanse.)

    Good. I mean, it's good that you didn't dropped it. It's hard to find a CF story that does not take place in already high sci-fi or borderline fantasy setting, like Worm. It's a breath of fresh air. So, get well, and I hope to see a new chapter in not too distant future.
  5. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    But I do not have a problem with her inner monologue. I have a problem with your narration in this part. You could use "lover" 2-3 times, spaced out, with the rest replaced with "Naz" "her" "her friend" etc., but instead, you used "lover" like 20 times if not more.
  6. Miestwin

    An Expansive Forge (Celestial Forge V3/The Expanse.)

    I have to say I very much like this so far. I want to see more!
  7. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    I'm at the moment where Cam arrived in Bo's perspective, and it's already annoying. Her constantly refering Naz as her "lover" is too much. It feels like lover and fucking, and fucking and lover, it feels like Naz is just a fuck-meat to Bo. Edit. Finished now. Gar's part was good, and...
  8. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Good stuff. I still do not know what Cam wanted to do when he said that he always wanted to do that. You mean swing on a grapling like Spiderman? What?
  9. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Sure, go ahead.
  10. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Nice, but would look better if the head filled the space lower there, in between wings. Edit: More like this:
  11. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    I thought about a Rancor, but they are far too slow for Cam. Even with bracers, it would be more of a formality than a real challenge. But hey, maybe that's the idea. The Zilo Beast, weren't they extinct or something? Besides, I don't think he could kill it yet, even with his full powers and a...
  12. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Awesome chapter! Serra's verd’goten really gripped me hard. I found no pics of the electric dragon thing, but I assume it looks a bit like Quetzalcoatl? Maybe? Don't know what will Cam face, but something tells me it might be a Krayt Dragon... mostly because I'm not too familiar with SW animals...
  13. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Happy Birthday my friend! Loved the chapter. Don't listen to naysayers. Fleshing out things properly is The Way.
  14. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Oh, wow. I thought she was 100% OC. Thanks!
  15. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Good to see you back, and I loved the chapter. Can someone remind me how does Serra look like? It has been so long since her introduction that I forgot. I only remember she's human.
  16. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Considering most Mandalorians view most Jedi as dishonorable pacifists, and Cam is a kid to that, it's not very unbelievable they would think "he has no lightsaber, so what he can do against three of us?". I got the Thunder, but I'm missing the pun with that one.
  17. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    Define "adult".
  18. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    The romancing in reincarnation fics was always tricky, but I have an opinion on them. People are social animals that crave closeness, and unless you're a psychopath or sociopath you will as well. Denying it because of arbitrary rules might lead to mounting frustration, anger, or depression, and...
  19. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    YANDERE ALERT! YANDERE ALERT! Serra gives me all the vibes of the upcoming yandere, and since it's Star Wars, future Sith. Do. Not. Want! I'm still of the opinion Rachi should be with Cam.
  20. Miestwin

    A New Player in the Force (SW/Lite Gamer)

    What new ship? The corvette? It was left with the Lokella.
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