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Where is the MC getting all this info about the attack, it's vectors, and his ability to deal with it? I get that he's brainwashed to be extremely attached to the Factory and do everything to defend it but when did he become clairvoyant?
I think this has a lot of potential. I think this is one of the first SI as a pokemon that I've seen that didn't go for a humanoid shape, and I look forward to where you take it. You've already created an interesting location to start out in, as opposed to the typical peaceful forest.
I feel like chapter three would have had a lot more impact if you hadn't completely skipped how he lost his soul in the first place. It just kind of falls flat in terms of story telling if you handwave the problem to get to the resolution.