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  1. Planeshunter

    Hermione Granger and The Boy-Who-Lived

    Funny thing to say when hers was the last strike, the one that ultimately ended the beast. Hedwig has high standards for others, but even higher ones for herself.
  2. Planeshunter

    Hermione Granger and The Boy-Who-Lived

    For some reason this made my brain to a strange pirouette... What if Yen Sid is a horcrux too? Not within the setting but, like... real life? A shard of soul turned into a piece of media to be preserved forever? ... Sorry, I had to blurt it out.
  3. Planeshunter

    Fanfic Search Thread

    It's been a while, so I don't remember the plot point you're mentioning, but the summary sounds a lot like https://forum.questionablequesting.com/threads/shattering-perversions-while-making-money-investigator-insert-in-hentai-land.15424/ Hope it helps BlackKnight and welcome to the site!
  4. Planeshunter

    I, Panacea (Worm SI Fanfic)

    Bonesaw is addressed both as Riley Grace and as Riley Davis once each, while that's perfectly correct since her full name is Riley Grace Davis, it's hella confusing for the reader. Just a small nitpick that had me scratching my head till I reached for the wiki.
  5. Planeshunter

    Stop and Watch

    You're a mean one, Mr.
  6. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    And yet, what Ran does during the timeskip will be relevant and necessary for the later story, I don't know why you assumed she spent years planning her disappearance only to stumble around like a vagabond when the time finally arrives. It wouldn't have been avoidable without asking for...
  7. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    This line here sums up everything I don't get of your reaction. 1. Ran's life is hardly ruined. 2. She did her best as a mother to raise Ran. 3. That dismissive attitude came from her boss (A literal monster, according to her), not her. At this point I'm honestly more confused about how you...
  8. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)
    Index: Original One-shot

    I was named Shimada Ran at birth, but that wasn’t the first name I ever carried. At first, it was all very confusing. I’m sure you can imagine, waking up from a slumber you don’t remember taking to find yourself somewhere warm and dark. I can’t speak for every unborn baby out there, but I for...
  9. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    That's more than fair. As mentioned before, the proper story ends with chapter 039, and the epilogues are extras. Karin's tie up directly into the story and will be relevant going forward, Mother's is not. A mentor support character is all she was for this story, and it's perfectly fine to keep...
  10. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    Head Start in particular is the one I was thinking about.
  11. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    The story proper ends in "039 - Seven Colours". The epilogues more like tying up loose ends than a part of it. I was counting on this way of thinking to make it less obvious, yeah. Guilty as charged :P Momoko Shimada was born from the complex and contradictory feelings PMMM: Rebellion inspired...
  12. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)
    Threadmarks: 041 - Mother’s Epilogue: Out of context problem.

    041 - Mother’s Epilogue: Out of context problem. It arrived as it was expected, a somber-looking jonin bearing the Konoha forehead protector and carrying dire news. The man was cautiously respectful, but didn’t hesitate to look her in the eye to give his report and condolences. Old enough to...
  13. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    Fixed, thanks! Actually, kunai is plural here. Antonym of 'synergic'. It's not exactly a common word, try looking for 'dysergy'. I get what you're trying to say but... honestly, it didn't even occur to me. That's not something I can see Karin doing, at least not at this point in time. The...
  14. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)
    Threadmarks: 040 - Karin’s Epilogue: Konoha isn’t such a bad place.

    040 - Karin's Epilogue: Konoha isn't such a bad place. A shimmer in the air moves through the canopy of trees surrounding Konoha, barely visible against the irregular and shifting shapes of branches and leaves swaying in the wind. Unfortunately, 'almost' isn't quite enough stealth against...
  15. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    I was thinking more along the lines of the second possibility being that she can do it when she actually bothers caring about people, but this is more amusing. More believable too... It is. Now, if only there was an incident involving a medieval-european-like culture looming in the future she...
  16. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    You're right, it is. There are two possible conclusions to reach from that... :rolleyes: I see. Rephrased things a bit, thanks! Dunno, he very bishounen-ish and all, but I don't really see him in drag. *Obliviously missing the point*
  17. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    I meant to make the reference more obvious, but I somehow kept fumbling the flow of the narrative and didn't find a good chance for it. Good to know someone got it anyway :D There is an official explanation, but I think this is one of those things that are best left up in the air, so everyone...
  18. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)
    Threadmarks: 039 - Seven Colours

    039 - Seven Colours (The death of Shimada Ran) I wake up to the sound of screams and explosions, which was actually kind of expected. After how I drank yesterday, I’d usually need some time to shake the cobwebs and rub the sand from my eyes, even with my stupid Shimada blood. The process is...
  19. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    Fixed, thanks!
  20. Planeshunter

    Seven Colours (Naruto)

    Stretching a bit the concept of 'one chapter', not gonna lie... Fixed, thanks! I have doubts about this one. Don't you say things like 'I never had the chance'? Isn't this the same? She's making a reference to having strange thoughts she feels vaguely disturbing to dwell on. In this case...
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