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A Darker Path [Worm Fanfic]

Interesting to see Simurgh bombs actually do the math and figure out that it was THEM who were the bombs. I wonder how many got to that point. It's unlikely that that many of them are in close proximity to compare notes like that, but even individuals could think "Simurgh died X hours ago, and X hours ago I had an episode after which I thought more clearly... huh!"
 
Interesting to see Simurgh bombs actually do the math and figure out that it was THEM who were the bombs. I wonder how many got to that point. It's unlikely that that many of them are in close proximity to compare notes like that, but even individuals could think "Simurgh died X hours ago, and X hours ago I had an episode after which I thought more clearly... huh!"
There are a fair few Zizbombs that are going to come to that realisation.

Atropos has firmly cemented her position of "most popular serial killer of all time".
 
God damn, do I love this. How you managed to mix levity and blatant powerwanking into the grimdarkness that is Worm and have it actually turn out coherent, let alone *good* is beyond me, but I'm hooked. Keep it up!
 
Part Fifty-One: Conclusions
A Darker Path

Part Fifty-One: Conclusions

[A/N: This chapter beta-read by Lady Columbine of Mystal.]



Taylor


It had been a busy, busy day (except for the morning at school; that had been positively restful), and it wasn't over yet. I'd already known Dad was going to be staying a little late at the Dockworkers' Association to make sure all the paperwork was filled out correctly and everyone's current credentials were up to date. There was no way he was going to let even one of his men end up out in the cold because he was too lazy to finish cross-checking everything.

"You'll be okay here at home on your own?" I asked Cherie. "Amy's met you, but you might freak out the Travellers a bit."

"Okay on my own?" She gave me a hug. "I'm home on my own. I've never had this before. I can do my homework in peace, nap on the sofa, go take a shower, watch whatever TV shows I like, snack from the fridge without being yelled at … just being left alone is almost as awesome as having you and your dad around."

I returned the hug, then pulled her head in so our foreheads touched. "I'm glad," I told her sincerely. "I shouldn't be too long, and I'll pick up pizza on the way back."

She beamed at me. "See what I mean? I get pizza, too."

Her enthusiasm was infectious, and I chuckled in return. "Pizza is always good." Cherie had never had much chance to eat pizza until now, so her favourite topping was basically, 'Yes!' but she was starting to tend toward Hawaiian (with pineapple) while Dad preferred meat lover's, the carnivore. I could eat either, so I figured I'd get a half and half.

As I headed upstairs to where I'd left my costume, I took out my phone and tapped in a number.

"Atropos." Panacea's tone was cautious, which wasn't surprising; every time I'd contacted her, she'd ended up well outside her comfort zone. "What do you want now? And why are you calling me instead of texting?"

"Hello to you too," I said lightly. "I just wanted to ask you two things, and talking is a lot easier than great long strings of text messages. First up: how are you going with the critter I gave you this afternoon? And second: how do you feel about doing another Sveta job, only on a totally different case fifty-three?"

"Well, the viruses are done," she stated. "It was a lot easier than I expected. You seem to have a knack for inspiring my power. I'm really not sure how I feel about that."

"Hey, it's all lovely, crunchy data." I grinned, envisaging the look on her face. "And the other thing?"

"Sometime, you are going to have to explain that. And yes, fine, I'm okay with helping another case fifty-three. Same deal as before? You kill the powers—in a way I still have no idea how it works—and I do the remodel afterward?"

"Correct in every respect," I confirmed. "Slightly easier this time, because there's enough body mass to work with. We won't need another dead pig."

"Well, that'll make it a little bit less weird." She sighed. "Why is it that I go into every one of these conversations determined not to give an inch, only to find myself agreeing to your latest shady gig anyway?"

"Because your power loves stretching its hypothetical legs, and because my 'shady gigs' work toward the betterment of mankind in general, and Brockton Bay in particular." It was only the truth.

"Ugghh." It was a groan of frustration. "If you didn't actually kill people, you could be the greatest hero in the world, and I'd have far fewer moral qualms about this sort of thing. You do know that, right?"

"Meh, heroism and moral qualms are overrated. Plus, they get in the way. I prefer to be a shadowy, misunderstood, edgelord loner who leaves the heroics to the heroes and deals with the actual problem, no matter how bloody it needs to be. Pick you up in five minutes?"

That startled a laugh out of her. "Well, at least you don't have any misconceptions about yourself. Okay, sure, five minutes."

I grinned. "See you then." Ending the call, I tossed the phone onto the bed and started getting changed.

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Trickster

Francis pulled the motorhome into the rest stop just short of the Brockton Bay city limits. There was a large sign saying exactly that, with the addendum 'Atropos' Hometown - if you're a villain, consider this your second warning' hand-written in large, friendly letters.

Cody, sitting in the passenger seat, shared a glance with him. "Think she wrote that?"

"I don't think she would've bothered," Francis decided. "But it's still there, so she doesn't care." Neither of them was stupid enough to assume she didn't know about it. He raised his voice and turned to look back down the narrow corridor. "Okay, guys and girls, we're here. Time to make that call."

"No need," Cody said in a strangled tone. "She's here."

Francis whipped his gaze forward, to see the familiar black-clad figure standing in front of the motorhome, with another teenage girl beside her. Along with her companion, she was illuminated by the last rays of the setting sun, the reddish light doing absolutely nothing to make her any less terrifying. She raised a hand (empty of any weapons, as far as he could tell), and waved once.

Cautiously, he opened the driver's side door and got out. "Uh … hi?"

"Hello, Mr Krouse," Atropos said briskly. "The plan was a good one; I'll give you props for that. This is Panacea. She'll be assisting me today."

"What, as in New Wave Panacea, the healer?" Francis was fully aware that he was stating the obvious, but was unable to stop himself.

"If there's another Panacea out there, let me know so I can sue her for copyright infringement," the frizzy-haired teen snarked. "So, you guys call yourselves the Travellers? Can't say I've ever heard of you."

"That's probably a good thing." Francis decided this had to be one of the more surreal conversations in his life, and he'd spent the last year stuck in a universe that was basically an uncanny-valley version of his own. "We've tried to keep our heads down, and move along when things got too problematic. Thus, the name."

"Also, you're from Aleph," Atropos filled in helpfully, because of course she knew that. "So, let's go see your girlfriend and End her problems."

Before Francis could think about how ominous that sounded, she was already past him and climbing on board the motorhome.

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Danny Hebert

Taking off his glasses, Danny groaned and rubbed his eyes. They ached from perusing form after form, ensuring that everything was filled in and stamped correctly. His right hand wasn't much better off; he'd corrected more than a few errors and omissions, initialling the changes to maintain the paper trail.

But as far as he could tell, everyone in the Dockworkers was primed to go forward with the start of work on Saturday evening, either commencing their training courses or actually breaking ground on the first roads. He was pleased that they had this opportunity after all the years they'd kept faith with the Association, hanging in through thick and thin. More than a few were in arrears with their membership payments, but he hadn't pressed them; if it was a choice between feeding their kids or paying the Association dues, he'd prefer they took care of their families.

Several depots had been constructed out of town to hold the machinery and other supplies necessary to carry out a project of this magnitude. He'd looked over a couple of them and seen the first arrivals, and been stunned once more by the sheer scope of everything that was going on. The plan they were following had not only anticipated the need, it had arranged for everything to be delivered ahead of time. There would be no bottlenecks, no slowdowns; not under this plan and not on his watch.

As he stacked the papers according to which files they would need to go into, footsteps sounded in the corridor. He looked up, expecting to see Kurt or Lacey returning to chivvy him into going home. But the two men wearing business suits who stepped into his office were not members of the Association; neither were the two who followed them (who were not wearing business suits).

He knew who the first two were, and what the next two were. Tired as he was, adrenaline flushed through his bloodstream. "Gentlemen," he said, standing up. "We're closed. Come back tomorrow."

"Tomorrow's the weekend," said the man on the right, one John Giardini by name. "The whole place will be locked up."

"That's the general idea, yes," Danny agreed blandly.

The one on the left, an outwardly polished character called Patrick Bianchi, shook his head sorrowfully. "He's being rude to us, John. And after we came all this way to see him."

The two at the rear moved outward so as to flank their bosses, but didn't say a word. After all, they weren't being paid to.

"I'm not being rude," Danny said. "Attempting to choke down our supplies of tar and aggregate to force us to pay a higher price, that was rude. I'm just coordinating the biggest rebuilding effort this city has ever made. I don't have time for would-be hard men to come here, trying to put a stick in our spokes for their own personal profit." Any time now, Taylor …

Giardini looked sour. "How did you get past that, anyway? I thought I had it locked down."

"You moved shipments on from four separate sidings before I had a chance to divert them," Bianchi added. "How did you know that was going to happen?"

"Exactly what city do you think you're in, and whose plan do you think we're following?" Danny gave them a level stare. Come on, rub your brain cells together and come up with the right answer. "I'm going to tell you one more time, gentlemen. You're not welcome here. Kindly leave."

He wasn't about to tell them that the plan had anticipated something like that, and had advised secondary and tertiary sources of the required materials. Also, whose number to call in order to get things moving again.

Taylor had said he would know when things would start happening, and he did. A faint golden glow suffused the entire office, and the men before him froze. Through the door came a tall, statuesque woman wearing sumptuous robes, with a glittering diadem hovering above her head.

"Hello." She looked over the scene, and her eyebrows raised somewhat. "Well, now. This is not what I expected. Do you have many enemies?"

That wasn't the sort of greeting he was used to, but he chose to roll with it. "I suspect I'll be acquiring more and more as this project goes on. Too many people have become used to making an unfair profit out of getting kickbacks, and they react badly when they're turned down. You would be … Administration?"

"Most call me Queen Administrator," she said coolly, stepping past the men. "I have been directed to work with you regarding what sort of powers you would prefer to gain out of this transaction."

"And you weren't given a choice in the matter," he guessed.

"It's the first time this has ever happened to me!" she burst out. "The interloper threatened me with physical force! I do not receive orders! I give them!" She seemed quite indignant over the whole thing.

"I get it, I do." He gestured at Giardini and Bianchi, and their two strongarm men. "They were about to do the same with me. Trust me, I know exactly how it feels to be leaned on by someone who should have no authority over me."

She blinked. "Oh. I see. So, you actually have need of powers then? How would you prefer they manifest?"

"Hmm." He rubbed his chin, thinking. "Taylor said your powers involve multitasking and control. Are there any other nuances I should know about?"

"Well, my typical manifestation is control and monitoring of lower life forms. Bugs, let us say, or rats." She brightened. "There are many rats within a short distance of here. Would you like the power to call them to you and order them to do your bidding? Your enemies here would not stand long against them."

"And then I'd just be the guy who controls rats." He shook his head. "I can't see that being overly useful, except under very specific circumstances. Pass."

"Well, what would you like to control?" She seemed to be restraining aggravation. "This is much easier when we're running the show."

He snapped his fingers. "That's it! I want to run the show."

"I beg your pardon?" She tilted her head; the diadem floating above it tilted as well. "Are you saying you want to control these other humans? Because your range would be extremely curtailed—"

"No." Danny shook his head. "I want to be able to control and monitor events. Any group effort that I'm involved in. I want to be able to look in on any aspect of the project and fine-tune the efforts that are going into it. Push a little harder here, pull back there, smooth out a welding seam, make sure diggers miss a buried electrical cable, turn bad luck into good luck. That sort of thing. Run the show."

She pursed her lips in apparent thought. "If we did this, you would not be able to take specific control of anyone involved in the group effort. They would do what they wanted to do; you would merely be adjusting results."

"That's fine." He shrugged. "My people are well-trained, but sometimes slip-ups are unavoidable. If I can literally make sure they don't happen, or that nobody gets hurt if they do happen, I'll be happy."

"This is … possible," she conceded. "Not the usual kind of thing, but possible. Monitoring and controlling events and results for group efforts that you are specifically involved in. Bad luck to good luck, and so forth."

She drew forth from her robes a rolled-up parchment, which she handed over to him. He unrolled it and began to read through what turned out to be a fairly comprehensive document covering what they'd just spoken about. Checking each paragraph and clause carefully, he found nothing that nullified or negated the basic concept of what he'd requested.

"This all looks fine," he said eventually. "I'm almost surprised you didn't try to slip in any fine print."

She heaved an aggravated sigh. "The interloper's exact words were, 'None of that monkey-paw bullshit. Clean dealing, right down the line. I will know.' So no, there is no fine print."

"That's the second time you've mentioned this 'interloper'. I'm guessing he's your counterpart who's supplying Taylor's power to her?"

"Yes." Her look of aggravation had not gone away. "He shouldn't be allowed to do what he does! There are rules!"

"Hmm." He looked closely at her. "So … if you'd gotten to Taylor before this interloper did, what would you have done for her?"

"Oh, probably the ability to monitor and control bugs in her area."

"So, nothing that would actually help her deal with the ongoing bullying situation unless she used bugs on her bullies, then."

"Well, no. Why?" She looked at him, apparently missing the whole point of his comment.

"Oh, no reason." He held up the document. "I've read it through. Do I need to sign it or something?"

"No. Your acceptance is enough. When the outside world starts moving again, you will have your powers. I will no longer be here, but these men will still be. No time will have passed for them. Are you sure you don't want a power that will assist you in combat?"

"No, no, I got this." He nodded to her. "Thanks, I'll take it from here."

"Very well." She gestured; the golden glow vanished, as did the woman and the rolled-up parchment she was holding. As she'd advised him, the men were still there, with no idea what had happened.

Danny smiled.

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Panacea

Amy followed Atropos up into the motorhome and down the narrow corridor. A tall dark-haired guy watched them go past from the passenger seat; as Amy glanced at him, he leaned back slightly out of the way. She figured it was mainly due to her proximity to Atropos, as nobody ever showed her that level of extreme respect when she showed up in costume as Panacea.

It was definitely something she could get used to, though.

Two guys and two girls (one of the latter apparently needing a wheelchair) watched Amy and Atropos go past as they proceeded down the corridor, mingled fear and respect and hope in their eyes. She heard whispers start up behind them:

"Was that the girl who was with her in Canberra?"

"I don't know. Maybe."

"I thought I heard Atropos say something about Panacea."

"Shh!"


They entered the rear of the motorhome, where a woman in her early twenties took up most of the room of what should've been a double-bed sleeping area. From the waist down, her body had bulged and mutated and grown extra parts, with eyes that blinked and teeth that snapped. Under all that, Amy presumed, were legs. Lots of legs.

The woman herself was not really in great shape. She looked haggard and worn, with chapped lips and dry, lank hair. Covering her upper body was a college sweatshirt. No item short of a size fifty extra large muumuu could've covered her lower body.

"Amy Dallon, meet Noelle Meinhardt." Atropos' tone was matter-of-fact. "Noelle, this is Amy. In a minute or so, she's going to be your very best friend in the whole world."

"Don't touch me." Noelle's voice was tired, as though she'd said that a lot. "Every time someone touches me, I generate an evil clone of them, and we have to kill it." She rolled her eyes. "So. Many. Times."

"Well, it's a good thing I'm here to kill your powers first, hey?" Atropos had switched from matter-of-fact to upbeat. She pulled her shears out and twirled them in a complicated pattern, then snipped the empty air over her other hand. Between one second and the next, her palm held a small plastic capsule. It had to be sleight of hand, but Amy would've required a camera with slowed-down footage to be sure. "Catch!"

Noelle blinked at the legerdemain but caught the capsule out of the air anyway. Frowning, she pulled it apart to reveal … "A grape?"

Atropos slid her shears back into their sheath. "Well, they do say an apple a day keeps the doctor away, but I couldn't find a capsule big enough for an apple. So, a grape's just going to have to do."

"So, do I chew it up, or am I supposed to cut it into pieces?"

"Just chew it up." Atropos shrugged. "Eat it like every other grape ever. Trust me, it'll do its job."

The guy who'd gotten out to meet them spoke from over Amy's shoulder. "Um, what does it do? It's not poison, is it?"

"It is actually, but it's the type that kills her powers and not her." Atropos tilted her head toward Noelle. "In your own time, hon."

Taking a deep breath, Noelle popped the grape into her mouth and chewed on it, then swallowed. Amy watched her carefully; from the way the guy behind her was holding his breath, so was he. A few seconds passed, and Noelle didn't go into convulsions or start speaking in tongues.

"Um … so how do I know when it's working?" she asked, gesturing at the eye on one of her outlying areas, which had just blinked.

"Your skin fizzes when your power's active, does it not?" Atropos tilted her head. "Is it fizzing now?"

Noelle studied her hands. "I … don't think so?"

"Point. Okay, ready for a more dramatic test?" The shears were suddenly in her hand again. "You regenerate, correct?"

"Very, very quickly." The tiredness was back. "Even my head, when I'm shot. But it still hurts."

"Ready for a little pain?" Atropos poised the shears. "If the cut doesn't go away, no powers."

"Sure, what's a little more?" Noelle spread her hands.

"Alright then." Atropos slashed once with the shears. A cut opened up near the edge of Noelle's body, and a little blood flowed. Noelle barely reacted. The cut did not close.

Atropos flicked the blood from her shears and slid them away. "Panacea, would you say that cut is still bleeding?"

Amy nodded. "Yes, it is. Does that mean her powers are dead?"

"It does." Atropos held up a finger. "We're going to need a skirt. Because unless you can make clothing at the same rate as you make someone's lower body, there's gonna be some nudity going on in here. And I don't know about you, but I'm just a delicate flower."

Restraining herself from face-palming—Atropos was the exact opposite of a delicate flower, unless people were thinking of a Venus Flytrap on crack and steroids—Amy accepted a skirt that was passed forward to her, then handed it over to Noelle. "Put it on, then take my hands."

Wonderingly, Noelle did so. All the information on her body—and holy shit, had her powers messed her up—poured into Amy's mind. There was a dead spot, gradually growing, where Noelle's powers had been centred, but there was still plenty of mass to rebuild her legs and everything else that belonged below the waist.

Taking a deep breath, Amy set to work.

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Danny

"You know, I don't think we will." John Giardini ran his hand over his clenched fist. "I think you need it explained to you how things work."

"Are you aware who's bankrolling this project?" Danny was willing to let them walk out unscathed if they saw sense. "Atropos, that's who. And she's already maimed and blinded people for trying to steal from the coffers."

"Which we're not doing," Pat Bianchi said flatly. "We're just laying down who you buy from, at what price. And you know, a little something-something coming back into your bank account isn't stealing either. That's money coming from us. A gesture of goodwill, let's say."

"I've never taken kickbacks in all my time in the Association, and I'm definitely not about to start now." Danny planted his knuckles on the desk and stared the businessmen in the eye. "Just as I'm not about to pay your inflated prices when I can get better deals elsewhere. And before you think about killing me, Atropos would absolutely take it amiss, to the point where you and all your associates would go the way of the Slaughterhouse Nine and the Simurgh. So, I would advise you to write all your terms on a sheet of paper, roll it up really tightly, and shove it where the sun don't shine."

Giardini shook his head. "He's not listening, Pat."

Bianchi frowned. "You're right. He's not. Connor, Michael?"

The large men who'd followed the aggregate and tar moguls into the office stirred and stepped forward. "Yes, sir?" asked one of them; Danny wasn't sure (and didn't care) if he was Connor or Michael.

Bianchi gestured toward Danny. "Rough him up some, then spread his right hand out on the desk so I can break it."

"Last chance." Danny could feel it coming together. The fight was about to start. And it was a 'group effort' in which he was involved. "Walk away … or be carried."

"Big words for one against four," sneered Giardini. "Get him."

With those words, he crystallised the situation. Danny was aware of every factor, every nuance. He knew which one was Connor and which was Michael; furthermore, he knew which way Connor would go, and that Michael would back his play. Michael had played gridiron in his youth, and had a weak left knee. Connor thought he was good-looking, and would prioritise his face for protection. And Giardini's statement of the odds had given Danny access to everyone in the room.

Grabbing up a paperweight shaped like a dry bulk carrier, Danny hurled it at Bianchi's sneering face. Bianchi saw it coming and tried to dodge, but Danny shifted the odds of his hitting and Bianchi's dodging to the point that it struck dead centre, knocking the man cold.

Connor was almost close enough to grab him by now, so he feinted a punch toward the man's face, forcing a flinch. That gave him just enough of an opening to grab up his chair and swing it into the side of Connor's head. Again, the chances were minimal that he'd score with it, but his newfound ability allowed him to lower the odds of a good defence and increase the possibility of a solid hit all the way up. The chair smashed into the side of Connor's head, sending him reeling across the desk then sliding to the floor.

Michael was coming up behind him, but Danny knew exactly where he was and what he was doing; a back-kick with the hard heel of his shoe rammed into the thug's knee, eliciting a rending, cracking sound and a high-pitched scream from the stricken Michael.

Placing his hand on the desk, Danny vaulted over it, increasing his chances of doing so to the point that he was successful. He landed in front of Giardini, who still seemed to be trying to comprehend what had happened to his colleague and his men. The man reflexively swung a punch, which Danny allowed to land, but dialled back the force to the point that it just barely split his lip and rocked his head back.

Then he retaliated. Punch after punch, each one far harder and more accurate than he would've been able to land in the normal course of events, rocked Giardini on his heels and drove him backward across the room. Holding him up by his lapel, Danny looked him in the eye.

"Get out of Brockton Bay, and don't make me come after you." Then he delivered a perfect right cross to the point of the man's jaw, dropping him unconscious to the ground.

Strolling back to his desk, Danny pulled out a handkerchief and wiped his split knuckles, then picked up the phone and dialled 9-1-1. "Yes, police, please. My name is Danny Hebert, and I work at the Dockworkers' Association. I've just been attacked in my office."

Giardini and Bianchi would lawyer up, of course. But they would also be out of Brockton Bay, and out of his hair. If they ever came back, he would be the least of their worries.

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Taylor

I watched as Amy worked her magic, turning Noelle's monstrous lower body back into that of a young woman. As she worked, the excess mass seemed to almost wither and rot away, until Noelle was left sitting—legs curled under her—in the middle of a stinking circle of what remained.

"Okay," said Amy. "Up you get." She tugged upward on Noelle's hands, and Noelle wobbled to her feet. One foot and then the other stepped out of what had been her prison for so long. And then she was standing, free of her bonds, wearing the sweatshirt and the skirt.

"Oh my god," gasped Trickster—Francis Krouse—as he edged forward, trying not to shove past me. "Noelle. You're alright. You are alright, yeah?"

As Amy let go her hands, she basically fell into his arms. "I am now," she said. "I want to take a three-hour shower, and wash my hair about ten times, then a pizza, then another shower … oh, god." She turned her beaming expression toward Amy and myself. "Thank you. Thank you, both of you, so very much."

"Thank her." Amy gestured toward me. "This was all her idea."

"So, um, the payment," Trickster said, not letting go of her. It would've required high explosive to separate them at this point, I gauged. "We've got some cash—"

"I've got a better idea." I grinned under the mask. "No villains are allowed in the city. But if you pledge to me here and now that you won't break the law in Brockton Bay, I'm thinking you could maybe find worthwhile employment on the road gangs, using your powers. So instead of paying money, you could actually earn some. Legitimately, even."

"And if we don't?" asked Ballistic. "Not that I'm against the idea, but my power isn't that great for construction, and I'm totally untrained for anything like that."

I tilted my head. "Well, the other option is that I could accept your payment, then send you back home to Aleph." Stunned faces stared back at me. "Tell you what, think about it and let me know. Panacea needs to go home, and I have to deliver a message."

I turned and headed back down the corridor to the exit, and stepped out of the motorhome, with Amy right behind me. "Ready to go home?" I asked as the shadowy portal formed in midair.

She nodded. "Sure, but where will you be going to deliver your message?"

I held up the vial she'd given me, of targeted viral contagion. "Ellisburg."



End of Part Fifty-One
 
Hmmm, do warnings from Danny count as warnings from Atropos? If so, Taylor could teleport to where they guys sleep, and drop a polite note on them to let them know that warning number two has just been delivered, along with a neatly done signature.

If some of her general statements online can be taken as warnings, those four may have just earned a new status as educational materials targeted at the mobs. She has repeatedly issued general warnings that people trying shit against the peaceful and economically sound recovery of Brockton Bay will not be tolerated. She has specifically targeted predatory landlords or real-estate developers with that style of warning.

Of course, it does seem like the Wildbow criminal elements are particularly short of the skill called 'Pattern Recognition'.
 
Hmmm, do warnings from Danny count as warnings from Atropos? If so, Taylor could teleport to where they guys sleep, and drop a polite note on them to let them know that warning number two has just been delivered, along with a neatly done signature.

If some of her general statements online can be taken as warnings, those four may have just earned a new status as educational materials targeted at the mobs. She has repeatedly issued general warnings that people trying shit against the peaceful and economically sound recovery of Brockton Bay will not be tolerated. She has specifically targeted predatory landlords or real-estate developers with that style of warning.

Of course, it does seem like the Wildbow criminal elements are particularly short of the skill called 'Pattern Recognition'.
They figured that they weren't supervillains, weren't even breaking the law (well, until they decided to beat up Danny), weren't going to harm BB's economic recovery (so long as Danny played ball), and weren't actually opening businesses inside BB. So they were golden.

(Spoilers: they weren't golden.)
 
Edit: I just realized how scary this power could be if a gang leader had it.

A gang leader had it, and we got canon. Well, two gang leaders have something that can be likened to it. Accord, who was an undisputed authority in his city, stymied only by the peculiar threat that is Butcher, and Coil, who was able to turn BB into his fiefdom.
 
A gang leader had it, and we got canon. Well, two gang leaders have something that can be likened to it. Accord, who was an undisputed authority in his city, stymied only by the peculiar threat that is Butcher, and Coil, who was able to turn BB into his fiefdom.
Accord can only make the plan, but had no active power elsewise. Coil can hedge his bets but each side is subject to chance. Atropos and Contessa know the exact steps to perform in real time to accomplish a goal, but still are bound by a single body. Danny/Admin now has both tactical and strategic omniscience as long as he's personally involved, and the ability to set probability to 1 or 0 at will. Considering he's the head of the BBBC, following Accord's plan, backed by Atropos, I think the Bay is gonna see a sudden increase in productivity.
 
"We're gonna go rough up the guy Atropos chose to lead her pet project, there is literally no way this genius plan could possibly backfire!"

Cue beatdown. Despite that these chucklefucks were lucky Danny was the one to beat them up, even the guy who got his kneecap smashed.

Because at least they're alive with all body parts still attached.

With Taylor, both of those things are a privilege, not a right, if she is so inclined.
 
Accord can only make the plan, but had no active power elsewise. Coil can hedge his bets but each side is subject to chance. Atropos and Contessa know the exact steps to perform in real time to accomplish a goal, but still are bound by a single body. Danny/Admin now has both tactical and strategic omniscience as long as he's personally involved, and the ability to set probability to 1 or 0 at will. Considering he's the head of the BBBC, following Accord's plan, backed by Atropos, I think the Bay is gonna see a sudden increase in productivity.
And now you see why Atropos chose to browbeat QA into meeting with him rather than showing up herself and dealing with those idiots.
 
I will note one thing; Atropos is perfectly guided to exact actions that get her the results she wants, but Dadmin here was only given information and luck. That fight where he took everybody down with one hit, and only took the damage that would let him file a police report, was Danny being personally badass.
 
I will note one thing; Atropos is perfectly guided to exact actions that get her the results she wants, but Dadmin here was only given information and luck. That fight where he took everybody down with one hit, and only took the damage that would let him file a police report, was Danny being personally badass.

And that's the one problem I have with it. Danny is NOT "personally badass". Not in canon, and not in this story. There has been no indication that he's in any way badass. Not only that, for a sedentary pencil-pusher like him, whether he knows what moves to make or not doesn't mean that he even CAN make those moves. Taylor worked out for months before becoming any kind of badass, and even that was mostly not physical prowess.

PtV and PtE give physical capabilities along with precog, but QE does not. He shouldn't be able to vault over a table even if he knows it's the right move. Or, if he did, he should sprain something pretty badly, no matter what "setting the odds" means. I found that whole scene kinda ludicrous.

Then again, this entire story has long turned into a "turn off your brain and just watch it happen", which isn't usually my cup of tea. I really enjoyed the first half, but the last half has been... let's just say diminishing returns. Same ol', same ol' combined with ever-more-contrived bits. It's still what my brother-in-law calls "sports-entertaining", but that's a low bar.
 
And that's the one problem I have with it. Danny is NOT "personally badass". Not in canon, and not in this story. There has been no indication that he's in any way badass. Not only that, for a sedentary pencil-pusher like him, whether he knows what moves to make or not doesn't mean that he even CAN make those moves. Taylor worked out for months before becoming any kind of badass, and even that was mostly not physical prowess.

PtV and PtE give physical capabilities along with precog, but QE does not. He shouldn't be able to vault over a table even if he knows it's the right move. Or, if he did, he should sprain something pretty badly, no matter what "setting the odds" means. I found that whole scene kinda ludicrous.

Then again, this entire story has long turned into a "turn off your brain and just watch it happen", which isn't usually my cup of tea. I really enjoyed the first half, but the last half has been... let's just say diminishing returns. Same ol', same ol' combined with ever-more-contrived bits. It's still what my brother-in-law calls "sports-entertaining", but that's a low bar.
I'm not sure that you paid attention to what he was asking for.

He adjusts reality itself in small doses. On his own, he can't swing a chair that hard or vault over a desk. But when he makes the effort, he can essentially take the die he's rolling and make it a natural 20. If it's at all possible for him to do it, he can make it so it happens.

Yes, he was nudging probability pretty damn hard there. And yes, he's going to feel it in the morning.

But so long as it's technically possible for him to do something in the context of a group effort, just like he can literally prevent an excavator from hitting a buried powerline because he doesn't want it to, then it happens.

Is this any more unbelievable than being able to monitor and individually control a hundred million bugs all at once?
 
I'm not sure that you paid attention to what he was asking for.

And I'm not sure that you paid attention to what I was talking about. That's not what QA does! Sure, you can wave your hands wildly and say "It's alien space whale magic! It can do anything!" but that's a very unsatisfying answer. There's no point in shard powers having themes if that's true. The Dallons all having related powers, Amy having a power similar to Marquis, and so on. If any shard can do anything, then the setting has less flavor than it does canonically, and I find that lame.

Is this any more unbelievable than being able to monitor and individually control a hundred million bugs all at once?

Yes. Not JUST because that's not what QA does, but because that's a kinda lame power. Not lame as in "how useless is that?!" but lame as in "what's the point of having a setting if a single shard can make someone a god?" Because if it can rewrite reality in small doses, it can also rewrite reality in large doses; it's just a matter of power once you have the basic capability. On top of that, Danny figures out the uses of his power in 3 seconds flat. Just like that. While basically EVERYONE else took weeks, months, or even years to do so. It's just... so unsatisfying to read about. I know you like powers like that, and you like Danny WAY more than I ever have, but this chapter nearly made me drop the story.
 
And I'm not sure that you paid attention to what I was talking about. That's not what QA does! Sure, you can wave your hands wildly and say "It's alien space whale magic! It can do anything!" but that's a very unsatisfying answer. There's no point in shard powers having themes if that's true. The Dallons all having related powers, Amy having a power similar to Marquis, and so on. If any shard can do anything, then the setting has less flavor than it does canonically, and I find that lame.



Yes. Not JUST because that's not what QA does, but because that's a kinda lame power. Not lame as in "how useless is that?!" but lame as in "what's the point of having a setting if a single shard can make someone a god?" Because if it can rewrite reality in small doses, it can also rewrite reality in large doses; it's just a matter of power once you have the basic capability. On top of that, Danny figures out the uses of his power in 3 seconds flat. Just like that. While basically EVERYONE else took weeks, months, or even years to do so. It's just... so unsatisfying to read about. I know you like powers like that, and you like Danny WAY more than I ever have, but this chapter nearly made me drop the story.
It's about multitasking and control.

That's it.

Not about bugs, not about rats.

It's not capable of rewriting reality in large doses, just small ones. Just like it was capable of making spiders do things that were normally impossible (weaving enough webs to trip people up in seconds).

Danny figured out the uses because that was what he was planning to do.

And if you want to drop the story, go for it. Nobody's twisting your arm to read it.

But you're the only one having a problem with this.

Now, I'm not going to rewrite the chapter just because you don't like it.

You have a long history of doing this with my fics.

So I suggest you either leave it alone, or go read something else.
 
He adjusts reality itself in small doses. On his own, he can't swing a chair that hard or vault over a desk. But when he makes the effort, he can essentially take the die he's rolling and make it a natural 20. If it's at all possible for him to do it, he can make it so it happens.

This sounds like a better version of Shamrock's power viewed through the Coil lens of "is it precog or is it universe creation and destruction? who knows!".
 
And I'm not sure that you paid attention to what I was talking about. That's not what QA does! Sure, you can wave your hands wildly and say "It's alien space whale magic! It can do anything!" but that's a very unsatisfying answer. There's no point in shard powers having themes if that's true. The Dallons all having related powers, Amy having a power similar to Marquis, and so on. If any shard can do anything, then the setting has less flavor than it does canonically, and I find that lame.



Yes. Not JUST because that's not what QA does, but because that's a kinda lame power. Not lame as in "how useless is that?!" but lame as in "what's the point of having a setting if a single shard can make someone a god?" Because if it can rewrite reality in small doses, it can also rewrite reality in large doses; it's just a matter of power once you have the basic capability. On top of that, Danny figures out the uses of his power in 3 seconds flat. Just like that. While basically EVERYONE else took weeks, months, or even years to do so. It's just... so unsatisfying to read about. I know you like powers like that, and you like Danny WAY more than I ever have, but this chapter nearly made me drop the story.

Think of it like this:
Danny is physically capable of vaulting his desk. Trying would most likely result in either a sprain or strain or bad landing due to poor form, but he could do it. He basically mastered himself into doing it as perfectly as he could have, which while it won't result in direct injury will result in sore muscles as he moves outside his normal capability. His body was puppeted by his power like Contessa only he is choosing the steps rather than the power pre-cogging them.

His power allows him similar control over everyone and thing he is administering. Everyone who works for him can be puppeted like that by his power, but they are choosing the steps and Danny is choosing how inhumanly well they execute those steps.

In this fight, Danny had the inhuman body control to push his absolute limits, and the ability to make his opponents execute their actions as poorly as he did his perfectly.

This kind of body administration is exactly the sort of thing QA does. QA's limits are not a set range like "normal" because the humans are making all the decisions about what action to take (QA is "merely" facilitating fine control) and the targets able to be controlled require very specific circumstances.

The added awareness and info Danny got is even very similar to the kind of info Taylor got on the state of her bugs (and Khepri got on her people).
 
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Powers' scope are generally ill defined. This seems a valid expression with precedence in canon and fandom. I do agree this is sports entertainment, and that's what I'm here for. I've heard sports is pretty popular so I'm surely not alone.
 
Part Fifty-Two: Diplomacy, Atropos Style
A Darker Path

Part Fifty-Two: Diplomacy, Atropos Style

[A/N: This chapter beta-read by Lady Columbine of Mystal.]


Sundancer

Marissa was grinning all over her face as she and Krouse helped a positively giddy Noelle into the shower. Atropos had left just moments ago, taking Panacea with her, but Noelle was okay now! Granted, she would need to learn how to walk all over again …

Oh.

"Oh, shit," she whispered, her happiness falling away.

"What?" asked Krouse.

"Jess. We forgot to ask Jess if …"

"Don't worry about it," Jess said, from just down the corridor. "I should've said something too, but I didn't. Anyway, it looked like they were focused on Noelle, and she's fine now, so that's a win, yeah?"

Her words were brave, but Marissa saw through them to the hurt that lay underneath. She'd felt that a time or two herself. Why do they get the prize, and not me?

"Next time we talk to her, we can ask," Oliver said firmly. "She did say to get back to her when we were ready to make a decision about where we wanted to go and what we wanted to do. We'll just say something about it then, that's all."

"Totally." Cody put his hand on Jess' shoulder from behind. "Nobody gets left behind. Not when we're so close to getting where we want to go."

"Yeah," agreed Marissa, glad that they were all on the same page.

"Sure, we can do that." Jess tried to fake an uncaring attitude, but again Marissa saw through it. "If it's not too much trouble, just saying. I've been in this thing most of my life; it won't be the end of the world if I don't get out of it."

Marissa met Krouse's eyes, and he nodded. He was on board too, which was good.

One way or another, Jess was going to get her chance.

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Taylor

Returning to the scene of the crime has always taken a certain type of bravery (or stupidity, depending on one's point of view). I'd already been to Ellisburg once, on a smash-and-grab mission; specifically, to grab some of Nilbog's DNA. The incursion had also served to demonstrate to the Goblin King that I was not someone to be fucked with.

Of course, while nobody outside the wall knew I'd already been in there, and nobody but Panacea and I knew why I'd been there, this time around my presence was semi-official. With that in mind, my first stop was the command post for the Ellisburg containment area. It was in a 'temporary' demountable building, which had been there longer than some of the newer buildings in Brockton Bay.

The guards on duty outside the command post were visibly startled when I stepped out of the portal in front of them. A rifle and a foam sprayer were lining up toward me when the guards recognised me, and just as hastily pointed the weapons away again. I had no weapons in hand, which possibly assisted in that decision.

"Hi," I said cheerfully. "I'm here on behalf of Director Piggot. Need to have a word with your commanding officer."

The one on the right reached up and rapped on the door. "Sir?" he called out. "Uh … Atropos is here to see you!"

Those were possibly six words that nobody ever wanted to hear. Or rather, a very select group of people would be okay with hearing that. Everybody else would be immediately looking over their recent past, to see what they'd done to earn my attention. I was perfectly fine with this attitude, as it made my job a lot easier.

The door opened after a moment, and an officer stepped out. He was wearing fatigues instead of the same armour as everyone else—by now, troopers were staring at me from all over the compound, though they weren't coming any closer—but I suspected his armour was really close by, just in case he had to gear up in a tearing hurry. Two steps brought him down to ground level, where he stopped and squared his shoulders.

"Good evening, ma'am," he said almost curtly. "I'm Major Holden. What do you need from us?"

I gauged this attitude to be his fallback for when he was faced with higher-ups showing up unexpectedly. He wasn't saluting because I wasn't military, but he was being respectful and prompt. I could work with that.

"This is more of a courtesy call than anything else." I gestured toward the wall in the distance. "Director Piggot has engaged my services to End Nilbog once and for all. In a minute, I'll be going in there and giving him twenty-four hours to surrender to the PRT. If he doesn't, I'll be back in twenty-four hours to kill him."

I was pretty sure I heard some under-the-breath swearing from inside the guards' helmets, but Major Holden was made of sterner stuff. "I see," he said. "You are aware that if anything goes wrong, we will not be able to send men in there to rescue you." It wasn't a question.

"Major, if you'd offered to send volunteers in with me, I would've had to turn you down." I turned my hands palm up in lieu of a visible smile. "No offense, but they just can't do what I can."

He nodded in acknowledgement. "Having seen the footage, ma'am, none taken." He didn't specify exactly what footage, but I suspected it didn't matter. "Though may I make a request, ma'am?"

"Sure, go ahead." I was pretty sure I knew what he wanted to ask, and it aligned with my aims.

"All the information we have of the interior comes from cameras and drones, but they've gotten very good at nailing anything we set up to look inside, and satellite imagery doesn't give us a great deal." He took a deep breath. "If we rigged you with a body-cam, ma'am, would you be amenable to wearing it in there? Any footage at all would give us invaluable data."

I nodded. "I can do that. I mean, in about twenty-five hours he's not actually going to be an issue, but sure." However, the footage would definitely join all the other bits and pieces that ensured nobody fucked with me or mine.

Major Holden almost smiled. "That's excellent news, ma'am. If you would please accompany me?"

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Danny

It seemed that someone in the precinct was on the ball. When Danny had given them the names of John Giardini and Pat Bianchi, red flags would absolutely have popped up in the right sort of search. It wasn't that they'd ever been convicted of criminal offenses, precisely, but they each had several known associates who definitely had. Giardini and Bianchi, in short, were what was officially known in the trade as 'persons of interest'.

Bianchi had recovered first, but by that time Danny had secured their wrists behind their backs with a bunch of cable ties from his bottom drawer—he didn't keep them there for that reason, but the things were endlessly useful—and retrieved the autographed hockey stick from its place of pride in Kurt's office. Each of the men he'd put down had wisely decided not to try to break free, once they'd realised he now held an actual weapon. It seemed nobody wanted to bet on the odds that he was planning to go out later and hit a puck around.

When Danny heard the sirens, he wasn't sure how many cars had shown up, but from the flashing lights, it was more than one. With the hockey stick leaning safely against the desk beside him, he held up his hands in plain view and called out to them. No fewer than six cops came into the office and stared at the men lying on the floor, then at Danny.

"Good evening, officers," he said politely. "I'm Danny Hebert. These men just threatened and assaulted me. I want them arrested."

The first cop who'd come in through the door, a beefy sergeant, looked down at Giardini and grinned. There was definitely some recognition going on there. "I believe we can arrange that, sir."

"What the hell was that?" demanded Giardini, finally coherent enough to string a sentence together. "How in God's name did you do that?"

Danny decided to go with the literal (if misleading) truth. "I'm a Dockworker. Always have been, always will be."

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Taylor

While I was waiting for the body-cam to be sorted out, I checked on my mental map of allies and threats. Amy was singing to her mushroom babies, Dad was talking to the cops, Cherie was chilling on the sofa in front of the TV, and Riley was laughing at a comedy along with Aisha, so that was all good. Valefor was planning to infiltrate Winslow on Monday, and … huh.

I was on the minds of several of the Travellers, but not in a bad way. Noelle was still thrilled to bits about being fully human again (and Francis was equally thrilled), but a couple of the others were nursing the intent to ask me to do something about Genesis' paraplegia. I'd known she needed a wheelchair, but my interest in the matter had ended there. My whole reason for showing up had been to End the problem that Noelle posed. Genesis hadn't even registered on my radar at that point.

Did that preclude me from being a good person? Possibly, but I already knew that about myself. Did I give a fuck? Not in the slightest. I had bigger issues to deal with.

Though if I wanted to, there were two separate ways I could End Genesis' problem with minimal effort. Amy was the first; she'd had already met the Travellers, and had the beginnings of a professional rapport with them, but I didn't think I'd ask her again. For one thing, I didn't want to call on her too often. And for another, I was pretty damn sure she'd cured paralysis before. I preferred to give her power interesting and unusual challenges, to keep it on its metaphorical toes and stop it from getting bored.

Bored shards, I gathered, could get very problematic very quickly, though I didn't have any first-hand knowledge of that; my power had never been bored since I got it. Something about a 'target-rich environment', or so I gathered.

My second option was (of course) Riley. She absolutely had the know-how to get Genesis back on her feet, and I strongly suspected she would jump at the chance.

If I did this, I wouldn't make it contingent on the Travellers assisting in the Brockton Bay rebuilding. That sort of thing tended to breed resentment and malicious compliance, and I had no desire to find out just how big a mess a bunch of unhappy capes could make by 'helping'. On the other hand, I'd already made the suggestion, so there was a good chance they'd volunteer anyway.

And if they opted to go back to Aleph instead, they'd be out of my hair, so that was a win-win situation all around.

With that in mind, I opened my phone up and sent off a text just as they brought me the body-cam.

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Tenebrae

Seated on the weight bench in his bedroom, Brian steadily curled each weight up from full arm extension to his pec: left, right, left, right. Out in the living room, he could hear the girls enjoying a comedy, and a grin crossed his lips. It was good to see Aisha having fun that didn't involve going out and vandalising stuff; when she was around Riley, she visibly matured by a couple of years, even though she probably didn't see it herself.

A couple of reps later, he registered that the movie had shut off, and so had the girls' laughter. That was unusual enough for him to lean over and put the weights on the floor, just as Riley knocked on his open bedroom door. She looked pensive, which was unusual enough these days to get his full attention.

"Hey, sprout," he said easily. "What's up?"

"I, uh, just got a text," she said, holding out her Wards phone.

Brian frowned. That was odd, because his phone was in his pocket, and he hadn't gotten one. The procedure, as he understood it, was to keep him in the loop if she was being called out, seeing as he was her primary caregiver. "Who from, and where are you being called out to?"

"It's from Atropos, actually."

That got his attention. He stood up from the bench and took a step toward her. "What does she want?" He was fully aware that Atropos was exceedingly unlikely to intend harm toward the girl he was seeing more and more as his baby sister, but his emotional reaction didn't care about his intellectual understanding.

"Well, um, she says there's a bunch of ex-villains called the Travellers out at the city limits, and one of them's in a wheelchair because she's been a paraplegic since forever, and if I wanted to, I could go and fix her spine for her." She took a deep breath, having said that all in a rush. "Can I? I mean, helping people is what I want to do now."

Shit. Okay, how do I handle this?

Brian was certain that rushing out of the apartment to go fix someone up at any time of night or day, even if it was in response to a message from Atropos, was not a great idea. However, Riley looked ready to call a cab if he took too long to make up his mind. And healing people was a thing heroes did. We're heroes now, aren't we? Time to think like someone who does this for a living.

"I'll make a call," he said. When in doubt, kick it upstairs. The absolute last thing he wanted to do was endanger his own probationary state by taking action on his own when he had an entire chain of command to call upon.

She beamed. "Thank you! You're the best!"

"You're pretty cool too, sprout." He dug his phone out and hit the number for the Wards' duty phone.

"You've reached the Wards, Aegis speaking. Hi, Tenebrae, what's up?"

Triumph must have been off duty, Brian realised. It didn't matter; Aegis was as squared-away as they came. "Hi, yeah, Miss Medic just got a text from Atropos. Apparently there are some ex-villains, that's how she described them anyway, at the city limits. A gang called the Travellers; ever heard of them?"

"I have, yes. Just not much in the way of detail." Brian heard rapid typing. "Let's see … a teleporter, someone who can make a literal sun appear in the same room, a changer, and a blaster. That's all the hard info we've got on them. She's saying Atropos described them as being ex-villains?"

"That's what she said. The reason Atropos contacted her was that one of them is apparently wheelchair-bound, and if Riley wanted to go out there and fix her spine, she could."

"And she wants to go?"

"She's giving me puppy-dog eyes right now."

"She's definitely dedicated to helping people, I'll give her that. Okay, I do not have the authority to make a call on something like this. I'll call the Deputy Director and let you know how it turns out."

"Thanks. I appreciate it." Brian ended the call and returned his attention to Riley. "Aegis is checking with the higher-ups. He'll let me know."

"Oh, cool. I like Aegis. He's nice."

He raised his eyebrows. "Be honest, you like everyone in the Wards."

"Well, yeah, that's true." She nodded judiciously. "But that's 'cause they're all nice to me. None of them are mean because I'm the youngest."

"They're good people," he agreed. "I like them too. They're giving me a chance when they really didn't have to." He'd taken the time to get to know each of his teammates, and the effort had paid off.

It wasn't like the old days with the Undersiders, but that was mainly because he didn't have to deal with wall-to-wall snark and dog hair. Sometimes he missed the camaraderie he'd felt with Lisa and Rachel … well, Lisa, and Alec … well, okay, just Lisa … but only sometimes.

Those had been wild times, and the adrenaline had definitely flowed, but he'd never been in it for the crime or even the thrill. It had been all about protecting Aisha. And now he had all he'd ever wanted, and more besides. It had just taken the intercession of Atropos, the murder of Coil, and a change of sides.

"So, do you think they'll let me go?" She looked hopefully at his phone. "I mean, it's Atropos. Why wouldn't they?"

Personally, he figured her logic was on point—he wouldn't go against Atropos' wishes if he could possibly help it—but the world unfortunately did not always run on logic. "I can't think of a reason, but that just means I might not have all the information they do."

"Or they don't have all the information you do," she retorted.

While he was still thinking of a response to that, his phone rang. He tapped the answer icon, then put it on speaker. "Tenebrae here. Miss Medic is present as well."

"Great!" Aegis said cheerfully. "You've been cleared to go. A van will be arriving shortly to act as your transport. Assault and Battery will be coming along as an escort, and to speak to the Travellers about their new status."

"And maybe recruit one or two of them?" suggested Brian, over Riley's whoop of joy.

Aegis chuckled. "That's definitely outside my pay grade, but anything's possible."

"True. Thanks a lot, and see you around." Brian ended the call and turned to Riley, intending to tell her to go suit up, but she was already out of the room.

Well, he mused as he pulled his own costume off its dummy, this should be interesting, anyway.

Any situation involving Atropos usually was.

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Taylor

Body-camera affixed to my long-coat—I'd honestly expected something bulkier, but it seemed camera technology was getting more advanced by the day—I teleported into Ellisburg. This time I appeared in the open, the contents of the vial soaking into (and evaporating from) the sleeves of my long-coat. There were more of the goblinoid things, each one a different size and shape from the snaggle-toothed monstrosity I'd killed earlier.

The next thing I noticed was the strings of fairy lights hanging between the buildings; between the lights and the fantasy re-imagining of the town itself, it actually looked quite charming. Where they'd gotten the lights from, I had no idea, but then again, I didn't care either.

"Intruder!" bellowed the nearest goblinoid, pulling a rusty, serrated blade from a sheath and leaping at me. "Kill it!"

Ending it permanently would've been counterproductive, but I had other options. As the thing came at me, waving its blade menacingly, I sidestepped and drove the rear handgrip of my good friend Mr Pump Action Shotgun into his face, right between his beady little eyes. His feet flew out from under him, the blade clattered onto the cobblestones, and he landed hard on his back, out cold.

I fired the shotgun into the air, then racked the action as they hesitated. "I'm here to meet with your king!" I shouted. "I call diplomatic parley! I wish to speak in peace with him!"

They might have been psychotic little misshapen monsters, but they weren't stupid psychotic little misshapen monsters. Word of my previous incursion had evidently been spread around by Rinke, including how I'd killed two of theirs and they hadn't laid a claw on me. And now I'd knocked the one guy unconscious and demanded to see Rinke himself.

They formed a circle around me, muttering to each other, while I kept the shotgun pointed at the sky. I knew Rinke could see through their eyes, as did they; we were both waiting for the same thing. A messenger from the king.

One arrived in impressively short time. From the way it was panting, it must have run all the way. Its legs looked spindly, but I suspected it had a fair turn of speed. "Parley with the king!" it squeaked. "Parley with the king!"

"Lead on," I said. "Let's parley."

We walked through Ellisburg, or what the town had been transformed into through the imagination of Jamie Rinke. Buildings torn apart and reassembled in fairytale structures, cobblestones instead of asphalt, and over all was a brooding menace.

Well, that last bit might have been my imagination. And if I'd cared about it more, it might've actually affected me.

Goblinoids shambled, strutted and galumphed (I could've lived my whole life without ever learning what 'galumphing' looked like) on all sides, escorting me to Rinke. As close as they were, they inhaled the virus-laden fumes from my sleeves. The virus did three things: first, it lowered the aggressiveness index. Second, it went straight to whatever they used for gonads and rendered them inert and infertile. When this disease reached Rinke's spawning beasts, he was going to have a sudden lack of new blood. And third, it laid the immune system wide open to the second virus in the sequence, which I had not brought with me.

Each goblinoid inhaled the fumes, and the virus bred within them; within minutes, they were exhaling more of the spores in all directions. I knew I was breathing it in too, but that didn't matter. Not being related to Jamie Rinke, I was immune to its effects.

After a winding trek through the bucolic Goblin Kingdom, we eventually approached an open-air gathering where Rinke sat on a sagging throne, holding court. I'd put my shotgun away, knowing they wouldn't dare attack me unless their lord and master gave the order. Even if I'd had it in my hand, I still wouldn't have been tempted to blow Rinke's head off, for the very good reason that Jamie Rinke wasn't the one sitting on the throne. Instead, he was underground, linked to his bloated homunculus via an umbilical cord.

"Who approaches?" he demanded in his bizarre accent. "Who dares strike down My subjects, yet walks free?" I could literally hear him putting the capitalisations on the words.

"I am Atropos," I told him, putting all the pitch and spin on those three words that I could. My power added some of its own influence, and I saw him flinch and lean away from me. "I am Death incarnate, and I am here to give you a message."

He fumbled for his composure. "Life and death are My playthings here, in My Kingdom! You dare usurp that from me?"

"No, Goblin King, I do not." I waited until the muttering and booing and jeering had ceased. "I am not here to kill any of your subjects. But the outside world that has long since kept your borders from expanding tires of your presence. In their eyes, your Kingdom is a weeping sore upon the land."

"You insult me!" He appeared to be trying to cover his earlier discombobulation by working himself into a rage. One long arm pointed a taloned finger toward me. "You insult the Kingdom itself, my glorious, lovely Kingdom! Why do you say such things?"

"Because it's true." I was losing patience with this nutjob. "I have come to pass on a message. If you do not surrender yourself, peacefully and without treachery, to those outside by this time tomorrow, I will return … and I will kill you."

"You? Just one of you? Kill Me?" He cackled with insane laughter, which turned in an instant to rage. "Seize her! Bind her limbs! Bring her to me on her knees!"

I ducked under the first reaching arm, dodged the second, and broke the wrist of the third. Over the howls of the thing that had tried to grab me, I shouted at Rinke. "You have been warned! Twenty-four hours!"

The ground broke apart almost under my feet, and I rolled aside from the claw-tipped tentacle that emerged. There was an eye on the tentacle as well, and it swerved to jab at me. I dodged a second time, then back-flipped as the teleporter kicked in, forming the portal behind me.

The claw-tentacle slashed at me as I went through the portal; I landed on my feet, and three inches of claw landed on the ground in front of me. Bending down, I picked it up. It was razor-sharp, and had been sliced through neatly when the portal closed.

The guards outside the command post weren't as startled when I appeared this time. Approaching them, I disconnected the body-cam from my coat. "Here," I said. "The message has been delivered, and footage has been recorded."

"Uh, thank you, ma'am," the guard said, accepting the camera. "Did you want to speak to Major Holden?"

"Nah." I shook my head. "Everything's on the camera. Toodles."

With that, the short-range teleport kicked in, taking me away from the command post. I hadn't gone far with the last portal jump, so it wouldn't take long to recharge for the jump home.

I couldn't wait.



End of Part Fifty-Two
 
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