I try as much as possible to avoid authors notes so just advanced warning. This is an insert fic...
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Damn! Why didnt i think of that!You missed the opportunity to call the story Corvid-19; could you not think of a good excuse to tack on the number?
So i'll rarely do this. And i already have a few potential ideas but i thought i would open it up see what everyone else can come up with.
What do you think a good Semblance for Itachi would be?
The rules?
It cannot be something usable in combat. A. Itachi already has more than enough combat effectiveness as it is but also B., mans a pacifist and semblances are a reflection of the soul. So if you want to suggest one then the rules are simple, it cannot in any way have any effect in combat. At all. That means if its a healing semblance, it can only be used in a hospital scenario, not as a combat medic, maaybe some sort of long setup as an example. Think Lie Ren as an example of the type of semblance Itachi would have, and if you can link it back to something canon to Naruto then all the better!
So i'll rarely do this. And i already have a few potential ideas but i thought i would open it up see what everyone else can come up with.
What do you think a good Semblance for Itachi would be?
The rules?
It cannot be something usable in combat. A. Itachi already has more than enough combat effectiveness as it is but also B., mans a pacifist and semblances are a reflection of the soul. So if you want to suggest one then the rules are simple, it cannot in any way have any effect in combat. At all. That means if its a healing semblance, it can only be used in a hospital scenario, not as a combat medic, maaybe some sort of long setup as an example. Think Lie Ren as an example of the type of semblance Itachi would have, and if you can link it back to something canon to Naruto then all the better!
I feel like with someone like Itachi who's deeply tied to people he loves it'd make sense for a non combat semblance for him to be a sort of loved one radar, like the more he loves someone theIt cannot be something usable in combat. A. Itachi already has more than enough combat effectiveness as it is but also B., mans a pacifist and semblances are a reflection of the soul. So if you want to suggest one then the rules are simple, it cannot in any way have any effect in combat. At all. That means if its a healing semblance, it can only be used in a hospital scenario, not as a combat medic, maaybe some sort of long setup as an example. Think Lie Ren as an example of the type of semblance Itachi would have, and if you can link it back to something canon to Naruto then all the better
Dialogue and character interactions felt a bit rushed at the beginning, and the talk with the god of death was edgy af, but the interactions were good and believable in this chapter. Summer checked if she could trust him. Its good. Since Itachi's 14, he's not going to have a romantic relationship with Summer since she's too old and Ruby/Yang are way too young. I hope he'll be more like an older brother or friend at most. Some OP male insert that's NOT going to fuck anyone, much less start a harem is a damn relief. Cherry on the top is that he's nowhere near close to fighting Salem in his state -- he made the good choice to run, and his power got scaled down and changed in some ways.
I agree with you on the Semblance, if you look in the "extras" ive put out a challenge for people to come up with a semblance with zero combat utility. I have a few ideas floating around (Mostly some cribbed abilities from other media) but i'm looking for inspiration. Might even combine a few ideas.I was kinda hesitant at first but every chapter improved itself enough that I stuck around and I'm glad I did, this has some serious potential though it still has a ways to go. That being said I'd prefer if Itachi had some utility semblance rather a combat one. Maybe he can recharge others' Aura at the cost of his own? It fits because he often places the burden of others onto himself far past the point of determent. Itachi is cripplingly self sacrificing.
My headcanon for Tai was always that he was a pretty chill and well put together guy. I always imagined him as the glue of STRQ. Glad you like my portrayal!Honestly if we take the time Summer was gone, and not only the incident where Yang and Ruby almost got killed by Grimm as children but also Raven having left as well into account, Tai being a fairly chill guy right now, nice job with him.
I think the second descriptor should be "you know who.""Ozpin is coming to see you in a few days Itachi. He has some questions for you about the you know what and the who you know what."