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I flinched at the sound of my father's anger, taking a step back as he advanced toward me. No way in hell was I going to act tough right now, this man had a few screws loose, and I would wait. He wouldn't hit me anyways.

"You're a failure, Reito," he spat, his voice laced with disgust. "You're nothing but a worthless burden on this family. How dare you even think you could be a Todoroki without a quirk."

My heart sank as my father's words sank in—it hurt, you know… no matter what, this man was my father, how could he say all this? I was… angered? It felt strange, but I was not happy with this man.

I had always known that he was tough, but I had never expected this kind of reaction. I just tried to remain calm, nothing would come out if I was overwhelmed by my emotions as well.

"You're a disgrace," he hissed, his face twisted in anger. "You're not fit to be a hero. You're not even fit to be my son. Take him out of my sight!" he roared at my siblings, Natsuo and Fuyumi, who were looking spooked.
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While I wouldn't say it's out of character, but I feel like Endeavour would physically act and react rather than say all that. What's the use of talking so much shit when we know he's a man of action.
 
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Hey if this is going to be a 18+ fic with lemons you should move it from sfw to the nsfw post area.
 
Now I'm not saying this story is bad or anything. I'm just saying until I can see what quirk he got I'm not reading it. I've been tricked one too many times by authors not telling the MC's power up front so anything until he gets his power I'm not even reading. Even when he gets his power I'm not going back to read this prologue, all I saw was he's a Todoroki and I can pretty much guess how his childhood is going to be.
 
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