This is a sort-of rewrite of a Fic that's been sitting on my snippets/ideas thread for a while...
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I also question it, as her stature makes it seem kind of useless against anyone who matters. But I guess it will be useful until she can make some cool mechas or robots lolI question Tasha's dedication to martial arts. I don't anything about eskrima and having a focus on weapons is definetely an advantage, but for someone so phisically feeble it seems a questionable choice. Someone who's 1,30 just wouldn't be able to do much to a grown man, especially with noodle arms. A more technological solution would appear preferable. Her talk with Izuku about All Might indicated she's well aware of the need to work within the parameters one is given.
I also thought it interesting how she isn't worried at all about butterflying away the canon plot. It's a valid choice to make and certainly better for the story, but I'd think it'd merit some reflection.
Thanks for writing.
Nice story. I enjoyed what there is of it and I'm looking forwards to more.
I noticed that the second chapter had a lot more trouble than the first; dangling sentences and mixed up POVs. Another editting pass would have done it good.
I question Tasha's dedication to martial arts. I don't anything about eskrima and having a focus on weapons is definetely an advantage, but for someone so phisically feeble it seems a questionable choice. Someone who's 1,30 just wouldn't be able to do much to a grown man, especially with noodle arms. A more technological solution would appear preferable. Her talk with Izuku about All Might indicated she's well aware of the need to work within the parameters one is given.
I also thought it interesting how she isn't worried at all about butterflying away the canon plot. It's a valid choice to make and certainly better for the story, but I'd think it'd merit some reflection.
Nice, can't wait for more. Also can't wait to see him fight as a walking ad board
I also question it, as her stature makes it seem kind of useless against anyone who matters. But I guess it will be useful until she can make some cool mechas or robots lol
Stats also not limited as long as one train ,albeit with it might take a while to train .(i swear nowadayspeople forgot that gamer can train their own stat too )Levels? Stats? Those are limited, with diminishing returns unless you keep fighting stronger and stronger enemies, and facing harder and harder challenges, something which I'm strongly against. But Skills? Oh, ho ho ho, a Gamer never stops learning new Skills. Maybe they start to take a while to level up, once they reach high levels, but nothing stops you from growing. You can keep learning without limit, continuously obtaining more Skills and leveling them up at your pace, or better saying, I can.
Stats also not limited as long as one train ,albeit with it might take a while to train .(i swear nowadayspeople forgot that gamer can train their own stat too )
Also speak of the limitation of those two .
Understandable since getting only skill and inventory but not the full package in a world that is a low key dark as fuck setting would be quite worryingThis is mostly my SI-self being salty as fuck, and hiding it with some poor excuse to make themselves feel better.
The story is great. I just wish there were more chapters to read now.
Great so far.Thanks! I decided to plan ahead a little before going straight into writing more, but I WILL continue.
Great so far.
And martial arts is good considering mha humans stats.
evolving into something like fist of flowing water crushing rock would be smart to have defense options outside of tech like forcefield armor or mecha stuff.
She's 22.Very interesting.
Wonder if any hero schools are gonna try andconscript herconvince her to enroll.
She's 22.
She'll end up as a teacher not a student...
Unless they wanna do some weird undercover stuff.
You are probably right. That intro section is one of the many artifacts from the old version, one I gave up on trying to find ways to rewrite and just moved on.
The thing is, I'm already at the middle of writing chapter 3, and planning the next ones in my head. That plus uni stuff is keeping me too busy.
But once I get some free time, maybe this week, I'm gonna sit and think about deleting it all or not.
Personally i think it's ok, maybe some parts can be used for a flashback on her reaction to ending up in MHA instead of as the intro though.You are probably right. That intro section is one of the many artifacts from the old version, one I gave up on trying to find ways to rewrite and just moved on.
The thing is, I'm already at the middle of writing chapter 3, and planning the next ones in my head. That plus uni stuff is keeping me too busy.
But once I get some free time, maybe this week, I'm gonna sit and think about deleting it all or not.
The EIDI army shall absolve the world of both sins and filth. Do not resist.
But who would even want to run away from such adorable little goobers?Land, air, sea or even underground, nowhere one can escape from their watchful little eyes.
Nice, also, this is labeled as 'Chapter 2', as is the last chapter.
EIDI a cute.
Lol. a gremlin with no noseFirst art, by RokokoPrufei on discord. Got it via twitch channel point rewards.
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