Flight of the Rogue
Chapter One: Events Derailed
Disclaimer: all characters are property of...
Chapter One: Events Derailed
Disclaimer: all characters are property of...
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AntonioCC | 6 |
The villains are caricatures.
They didn't feel like people.
The contrast with the characters you focused on hurt my SoD and reminded me of many a bad Harry Potter fanfics.
Well then why is he attacking so early and was he this knowledgable about everything in canon? If not, what's different and would I find it credible?
Time travel is one of the basic premises? If this isn't fated to flop it might grow into something epic. That looks difficult!
Fair enough. It's only the beginning so maybe I spoke too soon. Now I'm curious.