So it's a month late.. I've got new content.
This is a story set in the Dresden Files universe...
This is a story set in the Dresden Files universe...
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Sunshine Temple | 4 |
The twins were looking a the stack of presents with a palatable longing.
Typo. The word you want there is palpable not palatable.
Palatable means tastes good or can be eaten. Palpable means can be sensed or felt.
Another brazier, this one full of brushes, combs, toothbrushes, and other personal effects, had been lit and charred. There was a discarded box of blonde hair dye, but the applicator and brush had also been burned.
"They went through there?" I asked glancing around the ground and pulling at the door.
Harry missed a trick. He should have checked the tub and sink drains for hair.
There's probably a Lassie, Timmy and wells joke in there somewhere.
Oooooh. Yah I can see Dresden doing that. I'll add a bit to that. And then the poor dope finds they were flushed with liquid plumber.
Caustic soda and bleach may not be as spiritually purifying as fire, but they broke down organic compounds and I'm sure the popular conception of those chemicals "erasing evidence" would not help my case.
Likely. But I added this bit in
So even if there wasn't any magical purification, the caustic chemicals would ruin any hairs by damaging them.
Possibly, possibly not. Liquid Plumber often takes multiple applications to remove all the hair, and this was clearly a rush job. And Harry is unusually good at that type of magic.
I checked the sink and shower drains for any hair. But, from the caustic smell and discarded bottles, someone had poured Liquid Plumber down them. Caustic soda and bleach may not be as spiritually purifying as fire, but they break down organic compounds and I'm sure the popular conception of those chemicals "erasing evidence" would not help my case.
Though given the number of bottles of bleach and drain-cleaners they had. And how clear their drains were, it seemed that they frequently cleaned their pipes. I could see them regularly paring back and burning stuff.
No wonder their house was so clean.
The amount of personal property and papers they had burned was abnormally sparse. I knew professional counter-intelligence agents who were less paranoid about filling their home with personal items.
Good point. I'll expand a bit. Given for them to have a hope to having a house that they can "clean" at a moment's notice they have to have a lot of prep work.
They obviously felt strongly about it. Which could make that leave a traceable echo. Magic is bullshit.
Wow really great Work. Say can Dresden her do stuff Like conjure up bodyparts?
Both? I mean are we gonna See some futa Action?Thanks! Glad you enjoyed it.
Well... conjure up her own bodyparts? Or someone else's?
You're a succubus now. So yes, you're beyond doomed, no matter what gender said teens might be.Empty Night, was I doomed to collect teens who got ill-advised crushes on me?
Thanks! I'm happy to have this little story finished. As it shows a bit more of Dresden's post-succubus life.
Empty Night, was I doomed to collect teens who got ill-advised crushes on me?
You're a succubus now. So yes, you're beyond doomed, no matter what gender said teens might be.