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Of Ice and Men (Young Justice. Icicle Junior SI.)

Location of Team's base.

  • Missile Silo in Nebraska

    Votes: 46 42.2%

  • Ski Lodge in Colarado

    Votes: 23 21.1%

  • Lighthouse in Hawaii

    Votes: 28 25.7%

  • Ranch in Texas

    Votes: 19 17.4%

  • Summer Camp in Michigin

    Votes: 12 11.0%

  • Junkyard in Washington

    Votes: 17 15.6%

  • Rundown Hotel in North Carolina

    Votes: 17 15.6%
  • Total voters
    109
  • Poll closed .
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Haatim said:
That troll doesn't know what he's talking about your stories are great and I can't wait till u update this also sending healing energy to you and all your loved ones for their loss.
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Thanks I appreciate this. I just don't know how long it will take.

I'm really trying to get back to a place where I'm happy enough to continue. But every time I start right now, I end up making the story take a grim turn. I've killed paula, Artemis, Tuppence, and tEd Kord in 4 different versions of the chapter.
 
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Thanks I appreciate this. I just don't know how long it will take.

I'm really trying to get back to a place where I'm happy enough to continue. But every time I start right now, I end up making the story take a grim turn. I've killed paula, Artemis, Tuppence, and tEd Kord in 4 different versions of the chapter.
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If you don't want to move on to a different story temporarily, try writing some interludes. You don't have to publish them, just make use of those emotions to reinforce that your protagonist has been teetering on a tightrope with his disruptions. Some have fallen when attempting to balance too much and shattered, others look for moments of vulnerability to knock their targets over completely.

Heck, you could even take a lesson from With This Ring and write about different universes for a bit.
 
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Found your story yesterday and just finished binge reading it. Well done, it's quite good.

I hope things get better for you and yours soon. Until then I wish your family and yourself good health and fortunes.
 
If your getting stuck on details you can try copying and pasting this into ChatGPT and tell it to analyze it and come up with story prompts for you
 
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