The pungent stink of antiseptic was the first thing that I noticed.
An old, deep-set anxiety...
An old, deep-set anxiety...
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Intriguing! I've not read a Kid Win SI or Gallant SI before, so having both will be quite the experience! I also like the contrasting personalities, with Kid Win having the mother of all hair trigger tempers, while Gallant is more go with the flow. It's also a cool idea to have one SI not seem to be as familiar with Worm. Between the two of them, I think Gallant is in more danger of being exposed. Kid Win may now make Shadow Stalker look centered, but that can be easily explained by the trauma of the explosion. Gallant has Vicky attached to his side, and as pleasant as that may be, she does know him pretty well. It's gonna be harder to snow her. Oh, and as we see here, she is extremely willing to have Amy play lie detector, which nearly outed him immediately. I see where Kid Win was coming from about breaking it off with Vicky.
Anyway, looks like a fun ride! Looking forward to more, guys!
Search your feelings, you know it to be true!Glad you're liking it! Man have we got stuff in store for you!
And...I can't possibly make Sophia look sane! That's not true, that's impossible!
Very nicely done! Love that the first thing Kid Win did was try to get Sophia implicated! I'm also really enjoying his rebellious, Chaotic Good type attitude here, with his blatant disrespect for authority so long as they refuse to do their jobs. At this rate, I could almost see him leaving the Wards, if that wouldn't be very dangerous to do... Tinkers need a team, after all. I'm glad Piggot actually did do something about Sophia, I was worried she was just going to brush it under the rug again at first. But that was just because she was seething over the SI's basically showing her she was doing a bad job by doing her job for her, and throwing it in her face. Anyway, that fight scene was very well written too. It can be hard to write a good one, but you did a great job keeping it fluid, dynamic, and engaging. All in all, very well done! Have fun on your trip outta town!![]()
Glad you liking it!Very nicely done! Love that the first thing Kid Win did was try to get Sophia implicated! I'm also really enjoying his rebellious, Chaotic Good type attitude here, with his blatant disrespect for authority so long as they refuse to do their jobs. At this rate, I could almost see him leaving the Wards, if that wouldn't be very dangerous to do... Tinkers need a team, after all. I'm glad Piggot actually did do something about Sophia, I was worried she was just going to brush it under the rug again at first. But that was just because she was seething over the SI's basically showing her she was doing a bad job by doing her job for her, and throwing it in her face. Anyway, that fight scene was very well written too. It can be hard to write a good one, but you did a great job keeping it fluid, dynamic, and engaging. All in all, very well done! Have fun on your trip outta town!![]()
I have much to live up to it seems. XDI expect the newKid-Win, sorry Angry-Kid, to emulate his spiritual ancestors.
*chef's kiss* to that ending.
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In a row.Damn, it is just not Kid Win's day, is it? M/S containment twice.
I have in fact read Worm to completion!So it seems like one Insert is clueless about Worm and just trying to live his best life... on a death world, and the other has also never read Worm but has read enough fanfiction to know the setting but only really knows fanon tropes.
So far it's interesting. Not much has happened yet but I'm down for any story that has Sophia getting punched in the face.
Damn, it is just not Kid Win's day, is it? M/S containment twice.
So it seems like one Insert is clueless about Worm and just trying to live his best life... on a death world, and the other has also never read Worm but has read enough fanfiction to know the setting but only really knows fanon tropes.
So far it's interesting. Not much has happened yet but I'm down for any story that has Sophia getting punched in the face.
I'mma break the rules and quote posts meant for the previous chapter than the latest. Because I'm a rebel like that.
Oh no...
We actually discussed at length as to the exact amount of wank to give Tattletale's power.Tattletale usually has her powers wanked to unnecessary degrees so I'm hoping this is somewhere in the middle with how y'all treat her powers.
Glory girl is probably gonna do something stupid when she realizes Amy and Dean are in there.
Here we go, baby! The shining and raging star of the story!