Hello, first fic. Let me know if I'm doing anything wrong with the post.
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warning: violence
eugh. That was truly horrific. True Villain Taylor then?
Gah, I've got to find some fluff to clear my mind now.
Could be a paradox with multiple versions from different time points.
Could be a paradox with multiple versions from different time points.
Yea that was my first inclination as well. Makes me think Colin and Taylor where thrown through time, while the area around them was just taken out of phase of normal time.
shouldn't it be master instead of thinker ?"Is this you? Do you have some kind of stinking thinker outside, putting shit in my head?!"
I may have read this from start to finish, but I'm not sure I like how bug-out stupid it went in the latest chapters. I just wanted to read a story where Taylor is a Time Tinker, not some knock off Crisis on Infinite Earths with knock on after effects. This is getting a little too crazy for how it started.
Well, I like the fast pace, but make sure you have character occasionally summarizing things that are happening (Tattletale is good for that), otherwise it might get super confusing.
"Jacqueline Taylorment. Age 45-ish. She's been sighted with Vasil since '92."
"Almost twenty years ago."