The Chosen Voice (A star wars SI-ish/crack-ish fic)

[Alenco98]

The Senate building on Coruscant was one of the best guarded buildings on the planet if not the galaxy. With various units of heavily armed senate guards combined with state of the art turrets, cameras, motion sensors and cyber security apparatuses.

Unfortunately for the Senate security team they'd never dealt with a determined Anakin Skywalker. And with his Jedi training at hand these security measures proved no match for him as he easily got past all their security measures under everyone's notice.

Type that code on this line, the voice of Anakin echoed in his head. He typed it just as Anakin instructed and he was in. Lines of information came in, names, pictures, ages, identification documents, sex, height, species and other information that an identity thief would find useful. The personally identifiable information of every senator in the galactic senate as well as the supreme chancellor was now at his fingertips. If he chose to he could easily save this information and sell it on the black market for at least a few million credits.

Man you really are a genius sky guy. He wiped a small bead of sweat from his forehead as he went down the list, searching for the one name they both wanted.

Kriff you asshole. Don't call me Sky-guy.

Careful Sky-guy. Anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering.

I'm not angry, I'm annoyed at your bantha-shit antics.

Whatever. He shrugged and continued searching. It was a peculiar situation, a few weeks ago he'd died from cancer, then he woke up in the body of Anakin Skywalker, Jedi prodigy and chosen one. And right before the start of attack of the clones.

Of course he didn't handle it well, Anakin nearly had a mental breakdown when he told him Palpatine was a sith lord. But there was nothing he could do about it yet, he was the supreme chancellor, and even if they told the Jedi they had no proof; and even if they went through with it and killed him Dooku was out there.

Thus capturing Dooku and making him confess was the best way, and the only chance in the foreseeable future was on Genosis, which meant he spent his days practicing lightsaber combat, unlike Anakin he knew he had no business fighting, so he settled on working only on form 3 and outlasting Dooku until Yoda came.

Right now he was working on winning Anakin's trust. Conveniently enough Anakin started having visions a few days ago of his mother's suffering and he had an idea. So now here he was, hacking into the Senate's database with Anakin's help.

How will this help my mom?

We need to give her and her family a new home to settle down in. We contact Padme, ask her to borrow her ship, go to Tatooine, rescue her then ask Padme to settle them down in Naboo. I mean you are a hero there right?

Fair point.

Exactly Sky Guy, that's why I keep telling you that you should trust me.

Don't kriffing call me sky guy!

Language young man, what would Shmi say?

Kriff you!

I'd rather Kriff Padme.

Keep her name out of your mouth!

Our mouth you mean, and believe me we'll get very close to her. He laughed as he continued searching the database. Finally he found her, here we go. Chomell sector, Amidala.

He got his datapad out, he typed furiously as he got all her personal information on his datapad. A minute later he was finished. Ok, now tell me how we can cover our tracks.

Fine, start by closing the program. See that symbol in the corner.

-

He was in his room, his Holo-computer was laid out in the center of his table. The room was an organized chaos, filled with various spare parts and droids Anakin personally made. He was a gearhead's gearhead. If he hadn't been enslaved and not a force sensitive he would have made a living as a mechanic.

Just sit back and relax Sky-guy, I have a PhD in emotional blackmail.

Don't call me that!

What are you gonna do? Force choke me? Jokes on you I like being choked.

Man you're kriffing weird.

Don't worry sky guy, you'll be force choking some Tusken soon so just relax. He input Padme's contact info and called her. His Holo-computer rang, 5 seconds, 10, 20. After a minute she finally answered.

"Hello? Who are you? How did you get my contact."

"Hello Senator Amidala, it's been a while. I'm Anakin Skywalker. I'm calling cause I'm in desperate need of help."

"Anakin? My you've grown. And of course, anything, what do you need?"

"My mom, I've been having visions of her lately. She's in pain, something is happening to her and I need to rescue her. I was hoping I could borrow your ship to go to Tatootine, then rescue her and hopefully settle her down on Naboo. Tatooine isn't exactly the safest place for most people, and hopefully I can help her."

"I see." She nodded and pondered for a moment. "Let me send you a few codes. These are the access codes for my personal ship on Coruscant. I'll let my security detail know you're coming and you can take the ship with you."

"Does it come with a medkit?"

"There's a medical chamber in the ship as well as a medical droid. There's probably a first aid kid there."

"Padme, you don't realize how much this means to me. If she's still alive I'll treat you to dinner in Dex's diner, my master says it's the best restaurant in the galaxy."

"Is that right?" She seemed to smile a little.

"You gotta come with me to find out."

"I'll take you up on that."

"Sounds like a plan, thank you for your help Padme, see you later." He ended the call. And smiled smugly. So Sky-guy, I got your ship and a potential date with Padme. What do you think about that?

I'd like you more if you stopped with that kriffing nickname.

Maybe one day......sky guy.

ARGH!!!!

Shut up, he yawned and made his way to his bed. He sat down and streched his arms. He laid down and closed his eyes, he called on the force to will himself to sleep. A few moments later he felt himself fall asleep then he woke up once again.

Anakin Skywalker stood up from the bed and sighed in relief. He still found it unsettling how he and the voice that dubbed himself Mike switched control of their bodies, but after a few weeks he was somewhat getting himself used to it. And he admitted the voice was very helpful. A few moments later his holocomputer beeped. He accessed it and saw a text message from Padme with the codes she promised. Let's go to the ship Sky-guy

He just wished he stopped with that shitty nickname as he turned off his holo computer and put it away in his backpack.

 

[Daonexus]

Lol this is fun. Annoying sky-guy is very novel. Hope to see more shenanigans by the voice.

 

[Alenco98]

Sneaking in and out of the Jedi Temple was pretty easy all things considered. Then again, it seemed like the Jedi allowed Anakin to sneak in and out like this. He could feel the Jedi temple security guards seemingly tracking him through the force as he went through his usual routine through the air ducts. He didn't bring many things for this trip, he had a backpack filled with a few probe droids for laser training, training swords, as well as clothes, and behind him was a modified combat training droid the voice dubbed Vader which for some reason felt eerily unsettling yet familiar when he used that name.

I've been meaning to ask, how long have you been sneaking out of the temple for? I know we've been doing it every night since I appeared in your head, what about before?

Give me a moment. He stopped for a moment to ponder. A year or two after I arrived.

Really?

Yeah. He continued on his way out.

I expected you'd be pretty popular at the temple back then like you are right now.

It wasn't always that way. Anakin seemed felt uncomfortable for a moment.

If you don't want to talk about it it's fine you know. Though I admit I am curious.

Honestly I never really fit in, he said. They put me in with all the younglings. The lessons were boring and I zoomed through them, all while I sensed envy and disdain from the other younglings. I usually spent my days locked up in my room after lessons.

That hit hard, it was one thing for the Jedi to leave his mother as a slave. But to just let him be isolated from his pupils like that. It just made him angrier at the Jedi, these people basically dropped the ball and the galaxy suffered for it.

Jesus that sounds kriffed up. What about now man?

It's not so bad, like you said I'm fairly popular at the temple. They all like me. But honestly, I still feel disconnected from a lot of them.

Like they only admire you for your abilities and not for you?

He stopped again, they were a few feet away from the exit to the central AC unit of the temple. You know when you're not calling me by that stupid name you make a good point.

What can I say I'm good with people. Something the Jedi seemed to severely lack.

Fair point.

He opened the AC duct with the force and exited. They made their way to one of the various service tunnels, entering it they found another tunnel which led them to the sewers. Using the force Anakin parted the water and they walked through the sewers until they reached their usual exit, he called upon the force one more time and the exit opened.

They emerged from a sewer within a back-alley on the second highest level of Coruscant. Anakin dusted himself off and they went onto the main street. Even though he wasn't in control of Anakin's body he could feel everything Anakin felt emotionally, physically and within the force. Trillions of beings populated Couroscant, they were like little embers in the force, little embers that surrounded the massive bonfire that was the Jedi temple. Though unfortunately he couldn't look around as he wasn't in control right now.

Anakin pulled out his wallet, he had a few hundred credits, a far cry from yesterday. He walked to the nearest street corner and pressed a button. A few minutes later an air taxi came. Inside a Twi'lek was piloting it.

"Where to?"

"The Senate building please." The Twi'lek looked at him for a moment.

"Jedi huh? Hop in." The Twi'lek opened the door and they entered. It was a quiet 30 minute ride. The Twi'lek played some Couroscanti pop music that oddly reminded him of 80s Jpop music. After asking him the artist name he told Anakin to get onto his portable holocomputer and look her up, he had Anakin save a few of her songs onto the Holonet version of Spotify after forcing him to make an account.

You have an odd taste in music.

So?

This stuff is literally for teenage girls.

Kriff you it's good.

Suuuuure. He rolled his eyes and chucked as the voice seemingly sighed in defeat.

The taxi finally came to a stop in front of the Senate building, he glanced at the fare meter which showed a balance of 35 credits. He pulled out his wallet and handed the Twi'lek the credits. "Thank you for your time Jedi."

"May the force be with you."

"Likewise." The taxi then sped off while they walked into the Senate building.

They descended down to the hangar and input the access codes Padme gave them. They of course worked and they made their way in.

Kriff me these ships are all state of the art. They must have cost hundreds of thousands, no millions of credits. He could sense Anakin's inner gearhead bust a nut as he stared at all the ships.

I mean they're senators, they're rich. Anyways remember your mission, Tatooine, mom.

My bad. Anakin seemed to recenter himself and they went to Padme's ship. Conveniently enough it was the same Nubian they used back in episode one. Anakin entered the access code one again and he was in. The ship was devoid of staff, however, as Anakin went to the kitchen to grab some juice he noticed the fridge had seemingly been recently re-stocked.

God I love Padme, looking out for us. Can't wait to sleep with her.

What are you saying?! He was flustered of course, then again Padme always flustered him.

What are you so upset about? You're no virgin Skyguy, at least thanks to me.

Only cause you sneak off at night and go to gambling dens, brothels and nightclubs.

I got needs man what can I say? And hey, its good experience, once you're with Padme she'll be addicted to you.

Its not right man.

What is? Sex?

No. Using the force during it, I know what you do, you amplify their feelings, you're literally making them addicted to us.

So?

SO?! That's wrong!

I don't care.

Kriff me you're an asshole man. He took the jug of juice and took a sip.

Palpatine is an asshole, I'm harmless.

You mean Sidious? He put the juice back in the fridge and closed it.

What did I say? Don't even think about him, if he even suspects we know then we are fucked with a capital F. He is dangerous, not even Yoda can beat him.

How can you be so sure, those force visions you say you had can't be the truth. He made his way out of the room and to the main deck where the ship controls were.

Believe me man, Palpatine right now is the most dangerous man in the galaxy, we need to avoid him at all costs until we're ready.

Then what? He turned on the ship, inputting the codes Padme gave him and watched as the ship was cleared then was lifted up towards one of the many takeoff hangars in the senate building.

What do you mean then what? Then we kill him.

I mean, I know that, but then what? What do we do?

I don't know man, what do you want to do? Take over the galaxy?

Would you help me with that if I wanted to?

I mean I have nothing else to do, I am you in a way. Do you want to?

I don't know. He shrugged as the ship came to a halt and the hangar doors opened. He turned on the ship and it slowly began to ascend. What I do know is the current system doesn't work and that something needs to change.

Amen to that brother. Anakin punched the engine and the ship left the senate building.

 

[Alenco98]

"Oww!" He rubbed his knee where Vader struck him with the training sword. It was to be expected, the robot was programmed by Anakin. Of all things it seemed Anakin programmed it to fight using form 7, the most aggressive of the lightsaber forms. He'd asked his master how Maul fought and had seen Windu spar with other Jedi hundreds if not thousands of time, it was no surprise of course that Anakin had managed to pick up the fundamentals of form 7 just by doing that.

"I am curious though, why didn't you ever use this form 7?" He didn't know lightsaber combat had forms until he even came here, though it explained a lot of things.

The Jedi say its too aggressive and leads to passion. And well, you know the code by now.

"Honestly I'd say its perfect for you, you're naturally an aggressive person."

Anakin didn't say anything, in fact, he felt rather offended. I try not to be ok!?

"Sorry if I struck a nerve man. I'm just saying, you're physically strong, and your aptitude in the force is honestly second to none going by your midichlorian count. If you mastered form 7 to the extent Mace did you'd be a killing machine." He shook the pain off and moved around a little.

Jedi aren't supposed to kill.

"And they spent thousands of years killing Sith, and any other enemies of the republic. I read the histories in the archive you know."

That was different, they were defending the republic.

"Just because it was in self defense they still killed. But they didn't fall to the darkside. Sometimes some people just need to be put down."

The code says fear leads to anger, anger leads to hate, hate leads to suffering.

"Then just don't be afraid I guess." He shrugged. "Don't be afraid of killing, don't be afraid of being too aggressive. As long as you aren't afraid, you wont go through that chain reaction. I don't know man I'm just saying."

But what if I do?

"Its a part of life man, I've been afraid in my old life, I've been angry, I've hated. But sometimes you just gotta let go you know, forgive, calm down, face your fear. I remember reading this one book where one of the main characters said bravery is being afraid and confronting your fear anyways. Yeah." He nodded. "Brave, you need to be brave. Face your fear, don't be afraid to be aggressive."

Fair point I guess, What was the name of the book?

"A game of thrones."

What happened to the character?

"He died, but his death led to a war and his family avenged him. Anyways I should probably train, Vader, combat mode, level 2."

"Yes sir." The droid beeped and its eyes turned red, it raised its training sword and it began raining down blows on him.

A few hours later the voice fell asleep and he switched out with him. Like it suggested to him he began to try out form 7. To his shock it felt.....right, he was accustomed to using form 5, finding it well suited for his needs but he always felt there was something missing, something that prevented him from pushing further. But form 7 felt perfect, the aggression, the chaos, the sheer emotion he felt when channeling it. He sat down to medidate shortly after the sparring session.

So.....how do you feel?

Anakin took a deep breath and looked within himself. Better.

Better?

Yeah, better. Calmer I guess. Calmer than I've ever felt in years.

Huh? That's odd. Well that's good I guess. Keep meditating I guess. I remember when I did meditation I was told to acknowledge my emotions then let go.

You meditated?

I dated this girl in college that was into spirituality and other weird shit. Crazy in the shack. Made a good point about meditation though so I picked up good stuff, asides from kinks.

Shut up. He chuckled as he focused.

For the next 2 days as they traveled to Tatooine they trained whenever they took control, Anakin trained in form 7 while the voice trained in form 3. As the voice parried a strike by Vader a beeping sound emerged. "Attention, arriving at Tatooine. Landing ETA 10 minutes."

"Vader, stop."

"Yes master." The robot said as it was about to land an overhead strike on him.

"Ready to save your mom?"

Hell yes.

They went over to the control room, sitting down on the pilots seat as he directed the ship to land with Anakin's instructions. They flew over Tatooine, Shmi had a force bond with Anakin and they were able to close in on Shmi's location. They landed a few kilometers from Shmi's location. He got up from his seat and went to the medical bay where he took the medkit. He then went to the weapons room where he handed a vibrosword to Vader.

"Guard the ship Vader."

"Yes master." The robot nodded as he began to make his way out of the ship, taking the keys with him to ensure no one took the ship.

He emerged from the ship, medkit in hand and immediately wiped sweat off his brow. "Fuck this planet man its too hot."

Tell me about it.

They walked towards the Sand Person camp, he regretted not waiting until night but he felt his mother's pain vividly the closer he got. Even though he wasn't related to her Anakin was, and since they shared the same body she might as well be his mother.

We're just going to walk in?

"We're Jedi, it'll be like crushing ants."

Fair enough.

A few minutes later they were at the entrance of the sand person camp, they immediately roared and began to shoot at him. Fortunately for him since he was trained in form 3 he easily deflected the blasts, causing them to land squarely on their heads and causing them to collapse on the ground. A few moments later more sand people emerged, armed with a mix of gaffis and rifles; they were no match for him to their misfortune, blaster bolt came at him, and blaster bolts were reflected towards them, killing them while the Tusken armed with melee weapons simply died at the point of his lightsaber.

In the space of 5 minutes the village was filled with dead Tusken raiders with the exception of a few women and the children. He glanced around, searching for his mother in the force and finding her force precense in a nearby tent. He walked towards it, opening it and finding his mother bloodied and bruised while tied up in a makeshift cross.

Mom!

He went towards Shmi, gently untying her from her cross and laying her down on the floor. She opened her eyes for a moment and looked at him. "Who are you?" She said weakly.

He put his right hand on her belly and focused, calling on the force and feeling her out. "Several broken bones, muscle tears, some internal bleeding. But not beyond saving. Just give me a minute mom." He smiled at her then put his right hand on her head. "Sleep." She closed her eyes then he opened the medkit. He took a deep breath and focused, calling on the force once again. He closed his eyes and touched the medkit with his right arm, a moment later something called to him and he grabbed one of the many tools within the medkit.

For the next 10 minutes the force guided him, he used the myriad tools to stabilize his mother, patching up her wounds, setting her broken bones and healing the internal bleeding. He opened his eyes, finding that Shmi Skywalker's skin had regained its color.

I'm all done here, you handle it now Skyguy. He laid down on the floor and willed himself to sleep with the force. A moment later Anakin skywalker opened his eyes, then he moved to embrace his mom as he cried tears of joy. "Thank you." He whimpered. "Thank you Mike."

Anytime man, don't sweat it. And with that, the voice now had Anakin's undying devotion and loyalty.

 

[KonahrikYol]

anakin is going to be in big trouble with the jedi council. also padme is probably going to die, zemo(?) I think the bounty hunters name was. poisons centipede things probably kills her... but then again they could deploy a different jedi team to guard her. their is literally 10,000 eligable jedi knights/masters choose from. if plo or quin is chosen, then she most definitely will survive. I don't exactly trust Shakti as her track record isn't very good. she enters meditative trances too easily, and can't exit them efficiently. an mundi wouldn't be a good fit for the role (man is blinded by his dogma, and would end up losing track of said assassin.)

 

[mango363]

Great start, watched. Tho think about moving the fic to the nsfw fic section, you'll get more readers there, also, padme smut.

 

[Hephaestus]

Ya this looks really good lets see where you take this

 

[Alenco98]

His mom woke up after a few minutes of his crying and looked at him. "Ani? Ani is that you?"

He sniffed a little then looked at her, "Its me mom, I'm here."

"I knew....you'd come."

Lets get her out of here man, her wounds are stabilized but she needs medical care.

You're right.

"Come on mom, we're getting out of here." He stood up and carried her with him, then proceeded to place her down so he could place his arm around her and get his other things. He strapped his lightsaber back on his belt and took the medkit back. They walked out into the camp where the remaining Tusken raiders looked at them with a mix of awe and fear.

"You did this?"

"I did mom."

"You didn't have to go so far."

Man she's kind even to her enemies. She's too good for this world. Just tell her you walked in and they attacked you.

"I walked into the camp and they started attacking me, its to be expect-" He felt something and stopped, it was a force presence, raw and unpolished, but a force prescence no less.

Never heard of a force sensitive Tusken.

Neither have I.

He wont be happy, you know what to do. Put her to sleep so she doesn't have to watch.

Got it.

"Anakin, is everything ok?"

He put down the medkit and put his free hand on her head, "Sleep."

She slumped down and slept again, he gently laid her down on the ground and drew his lightsaber. A minute later what looked like a child arrived in the camp, he could sense his fear, his anger, his hatred, his suffering. The boy looked at him and on instinct shot out lightning. Block with your lightsaber!

He activated his lightsaber and intercepted the blast, using the force to concentrate the lightning on his blade. A few seconds passed and the lightning stopped while the child seemingly collapsed from exhaustion.

He's just a kid.

And if he lives I bet your ass he will unite the Tusken tribes and cause trouble in Tatooine, just kill him and everyone else here. But remember, pretend as if you're chopping up vegetables or cutting a steak. Don't let your feelings take over.

He took a deep breath and relaxed, he pictured himself in the temple kitchen in the middle of the night and cooking a late night snack. He leaped using the force, cutting off the child's head. He glanced around at the remaining sand people and did the same. Just breathe man, its ok, chopping vegetables.

He leapt again, cutting down every remaining man, woman and child he hadn't gotten his hands on the first time around. A minute later the camp was empty, only his mom's unconscious body sprawled out on the floor. He strapped his lightsaber back onto his belt and carried her along with his medkit.

He called on the force once he stepped out of the camp, amplifying his speed to that he could reach the ship in a few minutes. He activated the ship, Vader as he ordered stood on the ramp.

"Greetings master, and who is the human you are carrying?"

"Shmi Skywalker, my mother, go the medical room and activate the medical droids immediately."

"As you wish."

Vader ever the good droid followed orders and activated the medical droids. Anakin laid her down on the table and watched as they began to operate on her. He'd done a good job repairing the wounds she'd sustained which made the Droid's job easier. An hour later Shmi Skywalker had been fully operated on, he placed his hands on her, the broken bones, internal bleeding, ruptured organs, broken ligaments, and torn muscle tissue had been repaired and she was good as new. We just need to erase her memories of this, do you know how to do that?

I don't sadly.

Man she'll need some therapy after this then.

Tell me about it.

He called on the force once again, waking her up.

He watched her sit up then look around the ship. "Where am I?"

"A ship I borrowed from the former Queen of Naboo."

"Queen of Naboo?"

"Its a long story, basically, right after I left Tatooine master Qui Gon took me to Naboo and I got into a starfighter and destroyed a trade federation ship that was controlling a droid army that had invaded Naboo."

She looked at him in disbelief, I heard some Holos about a fight in Naboo and Qui Gon having been killed. But I didn't realize you played a big role. I'm so proud of you." She went over and hugged him while Anakin cried tears of joy again.

Sabor the moment man, remember the feelings you held here when fighting the enemy, love will make you stronger than any Jedi. Also ask her where her home is? I know she was freed but I don't know where she lives.

"Anyways mom." He pulled back. "Where do you live? I had to use the force to track you down."

"Ohh, let me show you." She got off the bed and he helped her get to the deck of the ship. Once inside Anakin turned on the engines and they took off. They flew towards Anchorhead, it was one of the smaller settlements on Tatooine, having been reestablished around 80 years ago after being abandoned by the Czerka corporation thousands of years ago. He'd only heard stories of it, that it served to cater to the moisture farmers around the Jundland wastes. They flew for around a half hour until Shmi pointed down to one of the farms, "There." She said. Skywalker circled around the farm then landed on a clearing near the farmstead. He noticed several dozen armed men looking at the ship as it landed. "It seems Clegg was getting some men."

Time for a touching reunion I guess.

Shut up.

"Clegg?"

"My husband, he freed me a few years ago and we got married."

"Does he treat you well? Does he hurt you?"

"Goodness no Ani, he's a kind man, his son is a gem to be around as well. I think you two will get along wonderfully."

"I hope we do." The ship came to a stop and he opened the door. "Lets go mom."

A minute later they walked out of the ship. "Vader, stay inside, no need to protect the ship."

"Yes master."

As they stepped onto the ground he felt someone's extreme happiness as they approached Shmi. "Shmi? Shmi is that you?"

"Clegg, its me!" Shmi ran to embrace the man, he was around his own height and he felt that he loved Shmi deeply as they embraced for about a minute. Clegg then looked at him.

"Shmi who is this man?"

"This is my son Anakin, the Jedi, the one I talked to you about."

"Huh," He stared at him and seemingly nodded in approval as he walked out and stretched his hand out. "Its good to finally meet you son. And believe me when I say you have my undying gratitude for rescuing her."

"Its nothing, anyone would have done the same for their mother."

"That's a pretty fancy ship there son, do all Jedi get ships like that?"

"I had to call in a favor from someone actually. You ever hear of the queen of Naboo?"

"Queen of what?"

Tell him you'll explain over dinner, I'm hungry after all this child murder.

"I think its best if I explain over dinner."

 

[Seyum]

Tell him you'll explain over dinner, I'm hungry after all this child murder.

Click to shrink...

Nr. 1 thing that sounds weird Out of Context.

 

[Lillie Jones]

Man that Tusken incident , Anakin Skywalker spared no one even voice said that will lead to more Tusken raiders coming for vengeful payback, which in the Star Wars the Tusken raiders got redemption or retcon after the Shim Skywalker incident in that other Star Wars tv show is very in a more practical second Tusken raiders clan after a young Anakin Skywalker nearly wiped off the map in Tattooine.
Continue on
Cheers !

 

[TheSwashBuckler]

Can you write it in a way to differentiate who is talking? Maybe use Italics? 'Cause it seems you mixed up some of the Bold letters, or it's just me, but I'm getting confused. The story by itself though, it's an enjoyable read. Looking forward to more.