While many doubt me, I BOB THE MILDLY MENACING! Shall do what no necromancer has done since the...
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Its ok for the starter but do tone down the BOLDSo, does anyone have comments about the story? I am a new writer this is one of the very fist things I've ever published actually so any criticism would be helpful! Also anyone tell me if they want to see this continued, or is you could give me a writing prompt to work from ill do my best to work with one!
At the end of the short story he stops talking about himself in all caps. It was annoying me to by the end of writing it.Its ok for the starter but do tone down the BOLD
its continued use will make that has less impact and unnescessary
Glad that you notice itAt the end of the short story he stops talking about himself in all caps. It was annoying me to by the end of writing it.
Na it's fine as long as it isn't explicit flaming I'll try to take every criticism as positive. Plus you did point out something that gets annoying real fast.
This is Super helpful thanks! So, would it be to much to ask for a writing prompt to get my brain going doesn't even need to be more then five words.Some notes for improvement:
- Download Grammarly, which is useful for spellchecking. It's a free extension.
- Don't post under 1000 words as people watching your thread will most likely not know you have posted.
- Remember to use spacing, walls of text are boring.
- Tags, add tags to allow a reader to know what sort of content you have posted. It might hook them it might turn them away. It allows you to show respect for your reader's time and energy.
EG a tag like Neon Genesis Evangelion will turn me away(cause I don't know any of the setting or characters). But a tag like self-insert or wiki warrior will get me to watch the thread and then read the content.- Consider adding a summary about what sort of story this is at the top of the page. This allows you to hook your readers without them reading the whole post first. Very useful.
Good luck.
This is Super helpful thanks! So, would it be to much to ask for a writing prompt to get my brain going doesn't even need to be more then five words.