MadGreenSon
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So... you never made it clear, is Peter the jackal-born son of Satan, or not?
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Other way round. The shards choose from people emotionally close to their main host to bud to, and the corona pollentia on its own is a sign that a shard has connected to a person who has not yet triggered.IIRC, you need a corona pollentia even to take on a bud from someone else.
"I am not dead–because I cannot die.
"These eight words churned through Avis' mind as the veil of darkness parted to allow some remnants of his recent history to seep into his pain-numbed consciousness.
"There was a time, when he had considered that to be a blessing. To live, regardless of circumstance. But, as all who would consider themselves above such things learn sooner or later, there are prices to be paid, and masters to answer to. The pain of his twisted frame along with the agony of what once was, caused his mouth to open and filled his still tortured mind and body with silent screams."
"Uriel's expression darkened as he approached and he made a grand gesture with one hand for Avis to keep going.
"With a heartfelt moan, Avis rolled back to his stomach and turned towards the arctic wastelands before him. On his naked stomach, this was going to hurt—a lot. And by forcing him to do this without laying a finger on him, Uriel would be keeping his word of not personally causing him any further harm. To everyone else, it would appear as if Avis had decided to push himself through the punishment of The Ninth Level one last time to prove his sincere regret at his treatment of Clarise; something Uriel could never be held accountable for. Rot his shining hide. Heaven's influence or not, there was still a big part of that bastard that was a sneaky, manipulative demon."
Taylor Hebert is a cape of some power.
Taylor and the rest of the Empire will be busy on Friday night.
Certain interests are willing to pay quite a large amount for Daniel Hebert.
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Do you mean Strangle?Director Piggot: "Never in my life have I wanted to strange a child so much."
Might I politely suggest that you have this fic moved to the NSFW section? I mean no offense or disparagement, but "graphic descriptions of Gore" are enumerated as an example of NSFW content in QQ's rules, and I am rather sure this qualifies.Not that he paying attention when the heavy clasp-knife he was holding suddenly and inexplicably snapped shut on his fingers. He stared at his right hand, which was now spurting blood from the stubs of the severed digits; the knife, unheeded, dropped to the floor along with the sliced-off parts of his fingers.
Even as he tried to make sense of what had just happened – Is Taylor Hebert here? How did she find me? How did she make my knife shut on my fingers like that? - there was a stabbing pain to the back of his head, followed by another in his sinuses. His eyes crossed as something pushed out through the front of his mask; after a second or so, he identified it as a long … thin … metal … spike …
Really?Might I politely suggest that you have this fic moved to the NSFW section? I mean no offense or disparagement, but "graphic descriptions of Gore" are enumerated as an example of NSFW content in QQ's rules, and I am rather sure this qualifies.
None to my knowledge. A few paragraphs on the other hand...Really?
I'd think one sentence describing cut-off fingers and another about having a spike shoved through his head wouldn't qualify as 'graphic description' ... would it?
Lung's arm wasn't graphic description. This? There's description not only of the severed appendages, but arterial spray and impalement. It's certainly enough to build a mental image, so in the figurative sense I would consider it "graphic" (in the literal sense, of course, no textual description of anything can possibly be graphic unless it's ASCII art).Really?
I'd think one sentence describing cut-off fingers and another about having a spike shoved through his head wouldn't qualify as 'graphic description' ... would it?
I'll check with the mods.Lung's arm wasn't graphic description. This? There's description not only of the severed appendages, but arterial spray and impalement. It's certainly enough to build a mental image, so in the figurative sense I would consider it "graphic" (in the literal sense, of course, no textual description of anything can possibly be graphic unless it's ASCII art).
Like I said, I don't have a problem with it. I just think it ticks the NSFW box and figure little is lost by putting it there.
Personally I think a fair bit is lost. It sets completely different expectations for the story; people browsing for NSFW stories specifically are liable to be disappointed by this simply due to it scratching the wrong itches and others will skip it due to expecting far, far worse than those lines.Lung's arm wasn't graphic description. This? There's description not only of the severed appendages, but arterial spray and impalement. It's certainly enough to build a mental image, so in the figurative sense I would consider it "graphic" (in the literal sense, of course, no textual description of anything can possibly be graphic unless it's ASCII art).
Like I said, I don't have a problem with it. I just think it ticks the NSFW box and figure little is lost by putting it there.
Just a note.
I'm putting Slippery Slope on temporary hiatus until the American political situation has calmed down (due to themes in that fic which hew uncomfortably closely to real life).
Sorry about that.
It will be back, once all this rl crap plays itself out.This is probably a wise move. I like 'Slippery Slope' because it demonstrated how a good person can wind up with a group of bad people and still call them friends. However, due to Real Life, it's impossible to have any sympathy for anyone who sides with Nazis for any reason, knowing what the core of their beliefs would have them do.
Y'know, I'd normally have an easy time agreeing with this, but a lot of people who are very much not nazis have been called nazis as a cheap justification for assault. Like myself, a center left liberal and member of several groups actual nazis would kill on principle. Not saying it's wrong to hate nazis. Just asking everyone to consider that maybe the tactics used by the E88 in this fic could work for groups other than neo-nazis, perhaps some black-clad communists?This is probably a wise move. I like 'Slippery Slope' because it demonstrated how a good person can wind up with a group of bad people and still call them friends. However, due to Real Life, it's impossible to have any sympathy for anyone who sides with Nazis for any reason, knowing what the core of their beliefs would have them do.
Just asking everyone to consider that maybe the tactics used by the E88 in this fic could work for groups other than neo-nazis, perhaps some black-clad communists?
I merely felt obligated to point out that the real life situation is slightly more complicated than "Nazis=Bad". And for the record I do agree with Ack's reasoning here, though it will be some time before the current political clusterfuck cools down. And I'm rather disappointed that I'll have to wait for more of this wonderful story.yes, certainly. and?
unless i misunderstood, Ack just indicated that there was a lot of attention on the nazi label currently
and that he felt better to let the story rest until some other label gets people all hot and bothered.
The parallels to cult recruitment and indoctrination are chilling. Spent a lot of time reading up on it? Scary stuff.It is, and always has been, an exploration of how ordinary people can fall victim to the ideology and be sucked into it
I have to say that I really enjoy Victor the engineer and scientist. Too often his potential gets downplayed a lot with him relegated to being a sniper or punching face with Othala's enhancements, but Victor could be and should be so much more. Scientist, engineer, doctor, surgeon, teacher, and oh man the possibilities."An exoskeleton light enough to go under your clothes, huh?" Victor rubbed his chin, stubble rasping under his fingertips. "That'll be an interesting balance. Light enough to be hidden, strong enough to be worth it." He looked speculatively at me, then at his own forearm. "You wouldn't be able to punch any harder because it'll be your knuckles on the line. You don't want to be breaking your hand."
Hope you're paid up with the underground doctors Skidsmark."Well, I'm not shut down." Adam unbuckled his seatbelt and stood up. "Time to go out there and give that asshole the royal butt-fucking he's begging for."
There's stuff they don't cover. Skidmark's about to discover what that is.So Skidmark against Taylor and Now lung is about to burst in.
So I guess it's time to cue up yakety sax?
Hope you're paid up with the underground doctors Skidsmark.
So Shadow Stalker and Circus are on an assassination mission (even if Shadow Stalker doesn't fully grok what's going on).
The E88 is blooding their new cape against the Merchant goons...
...Lung as decided to get payback and Skidmark/Squealer showed up for the party.
Well, two things for certain: this is going to be a pretty epic clusterfuck and Sophia is going to be left holding the bag for however that plays out.
Man, Piggot's going to be pissed that Sophia's doing her level best to make the Nazis out to be the good guys again.